Intermental vs Daubs
 

Battle Rules:

6 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No bullshit


Gl fam, no hate.

Minimum posts to vote: 500

Check in by: 06-20-05 at 05:58 PM

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Daubs has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-20-05 05:34 PM.

Intermental has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-20-05 05:34 PM.

Daubs's punches can be classified as WEAK-AND-POOR, your style type is BORE Your Threads coudln't be felt if they were SOLD in a FABRIC-STORE

You beating me is like TUPAC & BIGGIE resurrecting to do a VINYL You think you got a backbone? How when I just ripped out ya SPINAL

Daubs, these PUNCHES-HURT im like stomachs my CRUNCHES-SUBMERGE
Till your fill with a HURT AND BURN i leave this dude broken down in a stash like DUTCHES-N-HERBS

(it is 6lines jus a diff structure :thumbup:)

Dont get personals or wordplay, PM me or dont vote!!
Explinations if needed:
1: millions/milan. inter milan are a football (soccer team) and nameplay
2: Straight G is his user title, exam results go from A* and downwards..
3: Im wall streets hitman and a hit of crack, you get it.

Yo good verse......holla at yo boi.....uppin 4 votes

werd you to,

gl fam.

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Voted For: Intermental

daubs:
I have 'time' for crazy patients, so 'watch' this pshyco enter..
And i fucked with millions(milans) of brains so....................
.............................................no wonder Inter's Mental!!
^^^METAL & ENTER DONT RYHME FAM...
Like firing faulty greetings, all you caterpult is insults..
And inter, you wouldn't be "straight G".....................
.........................................With bad exam results!!
^^^^GOOD PERSONAL BUT....I DIDN'T LIKE DA PUNCH U COULD OG THOUGHT OF A BETTA CONCEPT THAN EXAM RESULTS
Inter man, your a has been who never even had it..
And you couldnt take my hitman status.................
................................If you were a crack addict!!
^^^^DIS REALLY WASN'T DIRECTED 2 HIM....IT WAS MORE SELF GLORYFIYIN


intermental:
Daubs's punches can be classified as WEAK-AND-POOR, your style type is BORE Your Threads coudln't be felt if they were SOLD in a FABRIC-STORE
^^^I DONT LIKE YA STRUCTURE...BUT DA PUNCHLINE WAS DECENT

You beating me is like TUPAC & BIGGIE resurrecting to do a VINYL You think you got a backbone? How when I just ripped out ya SPINAL
^^^NO

Daubs, these PUNCHES-HURT im like stomachs my CRUNCHES-SUBMERGE
Till your fill with a HURT AND BURN i leave this dude broken down in a stash like DUTCHES-N-HERBS
^^^^VERY WEAK CLOSER..FAM


V/INTERMENTAL....AT 1ST WHEN I READ HIS VERSE I THOUGHT DAUBS WON BUT AFTER I REALLY READ DAUBS SHIT..THEN I KNEW INTER HAD DIS.....ITS NOT HATE DAUBS BUT YA 1ST BAR AINT RYHME..SECOND WAS WEAK...AND YA LAST WAS BASICALLY TALKIN ABOUT YASELF...

my fault i said metal...i ment MENTAL & ENTER DONT RYHME...

Yo thanks for the honest vote, uppin for more votes

This was feedback posted for Daubs
 

if i could vote daubs got this HANDS DOWN better punches, better flow, more creative, and all around better and more RAW word.....

werd, i thought i did... but i did vote against marv a bit aho....

LOL Kon, you still hatin with me.................yo daubs no hate.......it jus a battle........and yo daubney.....change ure sig man its 1-0 to inter.....

Voted For: Daubs



ehhh....that was decent...the onli bar i really liked was the first bar...and ur structure is nasty as hell...i hate when people do that shit...the last bar was pretty played out..crack addict lines are gay now...and the second bar was gay...6/10



naw...wasnt feelin that verse at all...ur punches were weak and ur structure was discusting...ur first bar was played...ive used thread lines wen i first started rappin and that was two years ago...second bar was wack...and the third bar i wasnt feelin...2/10

vote=Daubs

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Kl kl.........uppin for more votes aiite................

This was feedback posted for Intermental
 

checking polls......................................

yo uppin for more votes...........................

yo uppin for votes.....i will RTF.....................

Cheatin fuck.

Get ya user title back to Straight Gangsta.

why......?.....and I aint cheatin what u talkin bout punk

it was a personal i used in a bar...

and u changed it. :nono:

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Voted For: Intermental

Intermental - Good spit, it flowed well and your punches were hitten' hard. Had some good multi's and wordplay.

Best Line -Daubs's punches can be classified as WEAK-AND-POOR, your style type is BORE Your Threads coudln't be felt if they were SOLD in a FABRIC-STORE

Worst Line - You beating me is like TUPAC & BIGGIE resurrecting to do a VINYL You think you got a backbone? How when I just ripped out ya SPINAL

Daubs - iight spit, punches were pretty hard hitten. Flow was pretty whack, other then that iight shit.

Best Line - I have 'time' for crazy patients, so 'watch' this pshyco enter..
And i fucked with millions(milans) of brains so....................
.............................................no wonder Inter's Mental!!

Worst Line - Like firing faulty greetings, all you caterpult is insults..
And inter, you wouldn't be "straight G".....................
.........................................With bad exam results!!

OVERALL - Close battle but I liked Inters, flow and mult's better. He had some pretty hard punches also. Daubs your flow was whack, and you had some iight punches I was just feelin' Inters verse more. - N0 Hate.

Vote - Inter

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wow, man ur improvin by tha tonne mayne.. that was a realli nice verse... gud punches, sick flow, i liked ur structure, this was one of ur best battles dawg... gud shit... uppin for this...

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Yo thanks murdz......................uppin............

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This was feedback posted for Intermental
 

Pollz fam............................................... ...........

uppppin........................................... ........

uppppppin.............will RTF honestly.............

bumpin like dodgems n shit........................

uppppppin..............will RTF..........................

This was feedback posted for Intermental
 

good battle my homie G's.......................................... :shoot:

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:love: why thank you **** :love: