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Gongshow. vs K-Trini
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6 - 10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 06-21-05 at 07:14 PM Must drop verse in 2880 minutes after check in. |
Gongshow. has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-20-05 07:14 PM.
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K-Trini has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-20-05 07:20 PM.
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Go ahead, mention cock to this little phone sex fanatic
And he'll be on the line longer than cocaine addicts! Now i'm not an advocate for bad habits but shit happens Like just last week I saw Trini's girl leave him for... *Points to the O.Gs* ................ Pure Knowledge. You couldn't burn faggots with newspaper and matches The only clips you bustin are on ............................................Email attachments. Spirograph's my passion so I got you in a stencil... And yeah you reload lead... In my mechanical pencil! Get vocal in your sig, you're too antisocial for my innuendos This kid 'DucKHunt' like he's at home playin super nintendo! p.s this is 10 lines. i just structured it diff. g/l man |
My goodness , wat I doin?, battlin a nine yr. old kid?/
"Gong" could hold a "show",but nodody' d eva go to it/ Ur a tourist to this shit,So take ya beatin as a sovereign/ You get really raptorous when you hear men are near/ Im the white blood cells a dis bitch,killin for vital cause/ Gong dun flow,like blood in vaginas after menopause/ Seems ya got nutin better to do,but put urself in ya sig./ Savein the youth,"SO SAY NO TO DOPE KID,YA DIG?????/ |
get some votes in this bitch...................................
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Where are the votes?????????????????????????
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Voted For: Gongshow.
K- IP: My goodness , wat I doin?, battlin a nine yr. old kid?/ "Gong" could hold a "show",but nodody' d eva go to it/ Weak Opener..2/5 Ur a tourist to this shit,So take ya beatin as a sovereign/ You get really raptorous when you hear men are near/ antoher weak punch...not really hittin...2/5 Im the white blood cells a dis bitch,killin for vital cause/ Gong dun flow,like blood in vaginas after menopause/ This was pretty Nice....3/5 Seems ya got nutin better to do,but put urself in ya sig./ Savein the youth,"SO SAY NO TO DOPE KID,YA DIG?????/ IMO THIS WAS WACK...2/5 9/20 - ELAVATE DOG...JUSS COME WITH MORE CREATIVITY AND VOCAB...ULL GET THERE Gon- Go ahead, mention cock to this little phone sex fanatic And he'll be on the line longer than cocaine addicts! Now i'm not an advocate for bad habits but shit happens Like just last week I saw Trini's girl leave him for... *Points to the O.Gs* ................ Pure Knowledge. This Was Nice...3/5 You couldn't burn faggots with newspaper and matches The only clips you bustin are on ............................................Email attachments. 1st Was A filler..2nd Was Nice...2.5/5 Spirograph's my passion so I got you in a stencil... And yeah you reload lead... In my mechanical pencil! HAHA LAUGH...3/5 Get vocal in your sig, you're too antisocial for my innuendos This kid 'DucKHunt' like he's at home playin super nintendo! NICE FINISHER...3/5 11.5/20- U Came Nice...Room For Elavation..But Too The Win... FV- GON Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Voted For: K-Trini
Iñigini.......................................... ....... Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
dont see how thats really inadequate feedback but ok...
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Voted For: Gongshow.
Gangota........................................... ...................... Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Voted For: K-Trini
My goodness , wat I doin?, battlin a nine yr. old kid?/ "Gong" could hold a "show",but nodody' d eva go to it/ ^^^^tight opener Ur a tourist to this shit,So take ya beatin as a sovereign/ You get really raptorous when you hear men are near/ ^^^^^creative Im the white blood cells a dis bitch,killin for vital cause/ Gong dun flow,like blood in vaginas after menopause/ ^^^^^tight vocab Seems ya got nutin better to do,but put urself in ya sig./ Savein the youth,"SO SAY NO TO DOPE KID,YA DIG?????/ ^^^^no, didn't felt that one, anyway a tight closin Overall: good verse, good flow, structure and vocab tight punchlines but no personals Go ahead, mention cock to this little phone sex fanatic And he'll be on the line longer than cocaine addicts! ^^^^tight opener Now i'm not an advocate for bad habits but shit happens Like just last week I saw Trini's girl leave him for... *Points to the O.Gs* ................ Pure Knowledge. ^^^^^ good personal but you fucked up ur structure You couldn't burn faggots with newspaper and matches The only clips you bustin are on ............................................Email attachments. ^^^^^wtf?? didn't felt that one Spirograph's my passion so I got you in a stencil... And yeah you reload lead... In my mechanical pencil! ^^^^good one, creative Get vocal in your sig, you're too antisocial for my innuendos This kid 'DucKHunt' like he's at home playin super nintendo! ^^^^ that has no sence... but good punchline anyway Overall: you fucked up your structure and your flow, the personal was weak and the punchline too, but you need to quit them non sences and improve ur vocab V/ K-trini RTF battles on my sig |
Duck Cunt... bitch
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This was feedback posted for Gongshow.
checking polls.... i say you got this gong........
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This was feedback posted for K-Trini
u wack kid, fuck ur verse that shit is fukin bullshit
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