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criminal 06-20-05 08:11 PM

PsyChoBabbLe vs vagita4
 
Battle Rules:

3 bars
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 06-20-05 at 09:41 PM

Must drop verse in 120 minutes after check in.

System 06-20-05 08:14 PM

PsyChoBabbLe has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-20-05 08:14 PM.

PsyChoBabbLe 06-20-05 08:41 PM

For Rap's Sake...Ya Fillers Are Like Boobs..They Ben Fake...
Real Thug? Only Burners He Carries r 1'z i use 2 Copy My Mix Tape
Dat was jus a warm-up, time 2 show dis kid how i spit so well
Vagita huh? i'll Clip his Tale like unsportmen-like conduct in da NFL
Caught dat punk..get Buu'd slicin u apart..so why bother wit chunks
Wear Out ur genes like fashions. when i son da father of Trunks

didn't catch all da DBZ refs..DON'T VOTE!!

System 06-20-05 09:32 PM

vagita4 has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-20-05 09:32 PM.

criminal 06-20-05 09:58 PM

u always missin the point, like shaq shootin free-throws
droping shit on a thread, we label it “free-posts”
fuck rambuling ya name, u gambuling ya fame
N like that drug cermerical bullets i'll scramble-ya-brain
LOOK,
we aint the same N u cant stop-me-infact
the rocky of RAP, that'll spit N still give ya STOCK'IN-A-CAP... BANG!!!!

stocking-cap is what u wear
brake it up N i'll give ya stockin-a-cap u feel me?

M.er.C 06-20-05 10:05 PM

Voted For: PsyChoBabbLe

Psycho-
For Rap's Sake...Ya Fillers Are Like Boobs..They Ben Fake...
Real Thug? Only Burners He Carries r 1'z i use 2 Copy My Mix Tape
THAT WAS SICK AS HELL...5/5

Dat was jus a warm-up, time 2 show dis kid how i spit so well
Vagita huh? i'll Clip his Tale like unsportmen-like conduct in da NFL
HAHA NICE SHIT...3.5/5

Caught dat punk..get Buu'd slicin u apart..so why bother wit chunks
Wear Out ur genes like fashions. when i son da father of Trunks
DAMN NICE CLOSER...3.5/5

12/15 - STRAIGHT FIRE..!!

V-
u always missin the point, like shaq shootin free-throws
droping shit on a thread, we label it “free-posts”
DIDNT REALLY RHYME..AND DIDNT HIT WELL...2.5/5

fuck rambuling ya name, u gambuling ya fame
N like that drug cermerical bullets i'll scramble-ya-brain
THIS WAS WAS NICE..GOOD MULTIES...3/5

LOOK,
we aint the same N u cant stop-me-infact
the rocky of RAP, that'll spit N still give ya STOCK'IN-A-CAP...
NICE ENDING...3/5 BANG!!!!

8.5/15-
U CAME SWELL..BUT NOT ON THE LEVEL AS PHYSCO...

FV- PHYSCO FOR BRINGING STRAIGHT FIRE

M.er.C 06-20-05 10:17 PM

Yeah This Was a Tite. Battle..I Exspect U Guys To RTF FOR ME

K-Trini 06-20-05 10:33 PM

Voted For: vagita4

For Rap's Sake...Ya Fillers Are Like Boobs..They Ben Fake...
Real Thug? Only Burners He Carries r 1'z i use 2 Copy My Mix Tape
^^stretched out as fuq.....wak....1st line played
Dat was jus a warm-up, time 2 show dis kid how i spit so well
Vagita huh? i'll Clip his Tale like unsportmen-like conduct in da NFL
^^Okay punch....didn't like the set-up
Caught dat punk..get Buu'd slicin u apart..so why bother wit chunks
Wear Out ur genes like fashions. when i son da father of Trunks
^^^wak....but at least this bar flowed.

Aside from the last line.....your verse didn't flow.Only 2nd punchline was the decent.How can you not have personals in this.Speccially when ya oppenent is a dragonball z guy.

u always missin the point, like shaq shootin free-throws
droping shit on a thread, we label it “free-posts”
^^shaq shit is played out...decent punch
fuck rambuling ya name, u gambuling ya fame
N like that drug cermerical bullets i'll scramble-ya-brain
^^^nice.....flowed good
LOOK,
we aint the same N u cant stop-me-infact
the rocky of RAP, that'll spit N still give ya STOCK'IN-A-CAP... BANG!!!!
^^umm.....Ok...I guess

Well...you had some played shit in there....but at least u ain't have stetched lines like pyshco.Gainst anyone else you would have been eaten up.And change ya name homie.Ur oppenent may have been too stupuid to rip ur name...but a vet wouldn't.But ya got my vote

Vote-Vagita(vote in link below or I'll have this vote removed)
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=194851

K-Trini 06-21-05 12:42 AM

bumpin............................................ ......

Control Freq 06-21-05 02:51 AM

Voted For: vagita4

Paulo Zuñiga...........................................

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PsyChoBabbLe 06-21-05 06:32 PM

what type of bs voters do yall have on dis site!?..LoL, whateva

J.Terror 06-21-05 07:19 PM

Voted For: PsyChoBabbLe

My vote/ Psyhco
both verses are weak, but Psycho's verse is more consistant in punches landed, wordplay and flow.
-peace-

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Sik Wit It 06-22-05 04:52 PM

Voted For: PsyChoBabbLe

...........he took this one

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criminal 06-25-05 04:16 PM

Kame-hame-haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!

Kordozar 06-25-05 04:22 PM

Voted For: PsyChoBabbLe

Iight Psycho Babble Took This Easy

Openor-Psycho Had A Better Punch And Personal
Personal-Psycho, Came With More Personals
Punches-Psyscho, Had More Punches That Hit Hard
Wordplay-Psycho, Came With More Wordplay
Vocabulary-None
Structure-Psycho's Structure Was Better
Closer-Psycho, Ok Punch He Gets Every Thing In This Battle

Overall Psycho Took This Because Of His Effort He Put In This Battle

Vote-PsychoBabble......

K-Trini 06-26-05 12:28 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by PsyChoBabbLe
what type of bs voters do yall have on dis site!?..LoL, whateva



who the fuck you directing that cooment to?

If it's to me.....then say so.....and I'll set up a battle and we'll see who's bs.And based on this verse you posted...it's clear you suk and i'll murder you.

criminal 06-27-05 10:31 AM

need more votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Bizarre 06-27-05 03:25 PM

Voted For: PsyChoBabbLe

Personals:PsyChoBabbLe
Creativity:PsyChoBabbLe

I NEED TO BATTLE VAGITA

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criminal 06-28-05 09:59 AM

upp'in
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Bizarre 06-28-05 01:24 PM

i need to battle vagita4 or criminal....by the way i dont hav no more battle cred so u hav to start it up...........PS..how did u change your name from vagita4 to criminal

criminal 06-29-05 09:36 AM

upp'in
upp'in
upp'in
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upp'in
upp'in


P.S pm strobe for a name change tell him ya current name and then tell him what name u want

criminal 07-05-05 08:59 AM

upp'in this battle--------------------------------

Daubs 07-05-05 09:06 AM

Voted For: vagita4

u always missin the point, like shaq shootin free-throws
droping shit on a thread, we label it “free-posts”

PERSONAL BUT MEH.

fuck rambuling ya name, u gambuling ya fame
N like that drug cermerical bullets i'll scramble-ya-brain

OK WORDPLAY, KINDA SELF GLORIFICATION THOUGH.

we aint the same N u cant stop-me-infact
the rocky of RAP, that'll spit N still give ya STOCK'IN-A-CAP...

BET BAR.

__________________________________________

For Rap's Sake...Ya Fillers Are Like Boobs..They Ben Fake...
Real Thug? Only Burners He Carries r 1'z i use 2 Copy My Mix Tape

STRETCHED, BUT OK.

Dat was jus a warm-up, time 2 show dis kid how i spit so well
Vagita huh? i'll Clip his Tale like unsportmen-like conduct in da NFL

AGAIN STRETCHED OK PUNCH

Caught dat punk..get Buu'd slicin u apart..so why bother wit chunks
Wear Out ur genes like fashions. when i son da father of Trunks

OK WORDPLAY
_______________________________________________

BOTH CAME WEAK, BUT CR HAS ELEVATED SINSE....

I WAS GONA GIVE IT PSY, BUT HIS LINES WERE TOO STRETCHED,

VOTE / CRIMINAL.

RTF VS TEPH, 3 DAYS!!

Daubs 07-05-05 04:48 PM

2days............................................. ......

Lawless (Hs) 07-10-05 05:55 PM

Voted For: PsyChoBabbLe

Very fuccin' close... reel hard to choose... Physco's verse was alot more versatile.. he had punches, personals, and the structure was iight. I like to see more from the two of you.
Brush up on the rest of ya battlin' techniques vagita.. and you will win the next one... garanteed.

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Lawless (Hs) 07-10-05 05:56 PM

I need yall to return the favor.

Law Vs STAY FOCUS

Law Vs Flow Verse

Daubs 07-10-05 06:05 PM

last day............................................... ...

criminal 07-11-05 11:28 AM

upp'int his old ass battle already.........................

criminal 07-11-05 10:03 PM

upp'in this battle for more explained votes plez..

criminal 07-14-05 03:52 PM

upp'in this battle...................................

Mc Mystique 07-14-05 10:37 PM

Voted For: PsyChoBabbLe

good punches. I liked it... rtf to my battle sig.. preferably conflict.. thankz peace

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(X)eed 07-15-05 05:57 AM

Voted For: vagita4

AHAHAH good battle here... like 2 lil light weight champs at each other... but this has to go to Vege.... had harder punches... good flow... wack structure...wrk on that... ur vocab.. wuz ok... nuttin great.. but good nuff... u took this out cuzza ur punches

Pscho...... ur overall was not that great....
but ur klozer... wuz sooofuckin crack... good stuff...lololol hahaha good punch...

but Vege.. you owned... him good battle ..returnedthe favour aight in my battles below

I-Cunt-Troll 07-15-05 09:16 AM

Voted For: PsyChoBabbLe

u always missin the point, like shaq shootin free-throws
droping shit on a thread, we label it “free-posts”
^^^No......whack
fuck rambuling ya name, u gambuling ya fame
N like that drug cermerical bullets i'll scramble-ya-brain
LOOK,
^^^whack.....dun talk about urself
we aint the same N u cant stop-me-infact
the rocky of RAP, that'll spit N still give ya STOCK'IN-A-CAP... BANG!!!!
^^^Shut up..........

U only hadf one punchline and that was the first one.And that one was weak.The rest pf the verse was just you babbling some bullshit about yourself.Stop talking about yourself and just diss that other guy out.

For Rap's Sake...Ya Fillers Are Like Boobs..They Ben Fake...
Real Thug? Only Burners He Carries r 1'z i use 2 Copy My Mix Tape
^^^NO....played as fuck...
Dat was jus a warm-up, time 2 show dis kid how i spit so well
Vagita huh? i'll Clip his Tale like unsportmen-like conduct in da NFL
^^OK.............
Caught dat punk..get Buu'd slicin u apart..so why bother wit chunks
Wear Out ur genes like fashions. when i son da father of Trunks
^^^OK........

Besides the first one.....the other part of your verse was OK.U didn't get carried away and started talking about yourself.That first line is played.Try to get fresh wordplay and get some more peronsals

Vote-Phychobabble

criminal 08-26-05 02:19 AM

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QuadID 08-27-05 12:09 AM

This was feedback posted for PsyChoBabbLe
 
yo that was hot i like the word play and punchlines

KempoMRK 09-02-05 04:48 PM

Voted For: vagita4

u always missin the point, like shaq shootin free-throws
droping shit on a thread, we label it “free-posts”

This was weak, no concept or punch there, just stated stuff

fuck rambuling ya name, u gambuling ya fame
N like that drug cermerical bullets i'll scramble-ya-brain

Nice multi's, but the wording was terrible in the second line and no real punch

LOOK,
we aint the same N u cant stop-me-infact
the rocky of RAP, that'll spit N still give ya STOCK'IN-A-CAP... BANG!!!!

Creativity was decent, but without the explanation I wouldn't have realised, try and word it so a reader would get it straight away


For Rap's Sake...Ya Fillers Are Like Boobs..They Ben Fake...
Real Thug? Only Burners He Carries r 1'z i use 2 Copy My Mix Tape

Weak, if you'd have changed the I to he it would have been better

Dat was jus a warm-up, time 2 show dis kid how i spit so well
Vagita huh? i'll Clip his Tale like unsportmen-like conduct in da NFL

Concept wasn't good and neither was wording

Caught dat punk..get Buu'd slicin u apart..so why bother wit chunks
Wear Out ur genes like fashions. when i son da father of Trunks

This was alright actually, good wordplay with genes father, but not worded very well

Quite close really, it was vagita's multi's vs psycho's closer...I think vagita took it cos psycho's closer didn't make all that much sense aside from the wordplay.

V/ vagita

Both drop a vote on my battle please:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=206973

criminal 09-03-05 11:18 AM

upp'in............................................ ...................

criminal 09-03-05 04:10 PM

upp'in to end this battle plez vote and explain it cuz someone might get them deleted

Deranged 09-03-05 09:13 PM

This was feedback posted for PsyChoBabbLe
 
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criminal 09-04-05 10:44 PM

bumpin............................................ ......


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