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CARMA SUTRA 06-20-05 11:04 PM

CARMA SUTRA vs BLACK QUEEN
 
Battle Rules:

8 BARS 16 LINES!!
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 06-23-05 at 11:04 PM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.

System 06-20-05 11:10 PM

Black Queen has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-20-05 11:10 PM.

System 06-21-05 03:30 PM

CARMA SUTRA has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-21-05 03:30 PM.

Black Queen 06-21-05 08:59 PM

Start the besting..Ive beat legends..so for u its hard to test me
I heard ya bitch ‘sleeps around’…and its not due to narcolepsy
but yo this sites is not a record label so if u win its not much proof fucker
ya fruity ass likes to be fingered...then ya show us ur true colors
the fuck you tryin' to hide? I already know TOO much to know about,
and about the skeletons in ya closet, thats what ya get for never comin' out
The truth is he bites lines, because his originality is fucking wack,
Knock Out, I'll leave ya eyes black and baggy, like an Ensomniac
kill you and murder your king, homie I pay royalties to no one
you dying without a cause in this battle like keeping loyalties to shoguns
blow one, scrape flesh off ya skeletal cause ya soft bones are fufilling
killed-things, bq's bringing down ya lines like hanging phones off a building
ill-ness, I'm filled with so the product I bring to the table is hype
you're able to write, but the only thing you bring to the table is rice
Fag, i'mma bout to set your ass on clearance, so i say fuck the wait,
cause his talk is cheap, coupon with pay, and with the rebate.

CARMA SUTRA 06-21-05 11:23 PM

BITCH!! i'm tha best in tha planet, leave me alone you pestering-faggot..
Im an aggressive-fanatic, about to teach u a lesson by lettin ya face rest-in-the-granite...
FEMCEE??!!??.. ya Gender is yet to be Proved, you're dyslexia's crude..
all you gon do is come wit an "essay" like you was a mexican-dude!
BLACK QUEEN..you better bow ya head to me like you blessin-ya-food, this message is rude..
Don't wear ya emotions on ya sleeve, it's better if disgetion-is-used...
chick I-spectate that your text-breaks, wack records of the past-2-decades ......
damage your chest-plate, cuz You couldn’t see my 'joints' with the use of 'X-Rays' ....
I'm Uppin' my Levels, Using 'black queen' for Target-Practice.., cuz Simply im too Hard-to-Clash-Wit.....
my Bars-are-Classic, and I'll take it as far as my foot to "uranus (your anus)-and-back-bitch!!.....

Black Queen 06-22-05 12:18 PM

good luck uppin..........................................

MaRVJay 06-22-05 12:41 PM

Voted For: Black Queen

carma sutra:
BITCH!! i'm tha best in tha planet, leave me alone you pestering-faggot..
Im an aggressive-fanatic, about to teach u a lesson by lettin ya face rest-in-the-granite...
^^^DECENT OPENER...FLOW WAS TITE HERE WASN'T REALLY FEELIN DA PUNCH
FEMCEE??!!??.. ya Gender is yet to be Proved, you're dyslexia's crude..
all you gon do is come wit an "essay" like you was a mexican-dude!
^^^LMAOOO...NICE
BLACK QUEEN..you better bow ya head to me like you blessin-ya-food, this message is rude..
Don't wear ya emotions on ya sleeve, it's better if disgetion-is-used...
^^^WHOOOOOOOOOOOOOO....
chick I-spectate that your text-breaks, wack records of the past-2-decades ......
damage your chest-plate, cuz You couldn’t see my 'joints' with the use of 'X-Rays' ....
^^^^OKAY
I'm Uppin' my Levels, Using 'black queen' for Target-Practice.., cuz Simply im too Hard-to-Clash-Wit.....
my Bars-are-Classic, and I'll take it as far as my foot to "uranus (your anus)-and-back-bitch!!.....
^^^^MULTIS IS CRAZEEE....GOOD CLOSER

black queen:
Start the besting..Ive beat legends..so for u its hard to test me
I heard ya bitch ‘sleeps around’…and its not due to narcolepsy
^^^LMAOOOO...NICE OPENER MAH
but yo this sites is not a record label so if u win its not much proof fucker
ya fruity ass likes to be fingered...then ya show us ur true colors
^^^NAH
the fuck you tryin' to hide? I already know TOO much to know about,
and about the skeletons in ya closet, thats what ya get for never comin' out
^^^NOOOOO
The truth is he bites lines, because his originality is fucking wack,
Knock Out, I'll leave ya eyes black and baggy, like an Ensomniac
^^^GOOD....I SEE U LIKE PUNCHLINES DAT AHVE 2 SOMTHIN WITH SLEEP LOL
kill you and murder your king, homie I pay royalties to no one
you dying without a cause in this battle like keeping loyalties to shoguns
^^^?????? I AINT GET IT
blow one, scrape flesh off ya skeletal cause ya soft bones are fufilling
killed-things, bq's bringing down ya lines like hanging phones off a building
^^^LOL..GOOD
ill-ness, I'm filled with so the product I bring to the table is hype
you're able to write, but the only thing you bring to the table is rice
^^^LMAOOOO....DOPE
Fag, i'mma bout to set your ass on clearance, so i say fuck the wait,
cause his talk is cheap, coupon with pay, and with the rebate.
^^^WACK!....


DIS WAS A CLOSE WUN CUZZ U BOTH BRUNG IT SERIOUSLY...I READ BOTH VERSE'S CAREFULLY....SO IMA GO WITH BLACK QUEEN CUZZ U JUST CAME WITH ALOT OF CREATIVITY AND ORIGINAL PUNCHLINES....CARMA YA FLOW IS SICK..BUT U GOTA BRING IT DA WHOLE BATTLE....


RETURN DA FAVOR YA'LL

MaRVJay 06-22-05 12:43 PM

yo black queen drop a nigga dem digits mah n stop playin lol

LAWD HAVE MERCY 06-22-05 06:29 PM

Voted For: Black Queen

Start the besting..Ive beat legends..so for u its hard to test me
I heard ya bitch ‘sleeps around’…and its not due to narcolepsy--HMMM NICE..
but yo this sites is not a record label so if u win its not much proof fucker
ya fruity ass likes to be fingered...then ya show us ur true colors..NAH..
the fuck you tryin' to hide? I already know TOO much to know about,
and about the skeletons in ya closet, thats what ya get for never comin' out..NICE IDEA BUT BLAH
The truth is he bites lines, because his originality is fucking wack,
Knock Out, I'll leave ya eyes black and baggy, like an Ensomniac..HE?? YOU BATTLING A GIRL..O.K PUNCH
kill you and murder your king, homie I pay royalties to no one
you dying without a cause in this battle like keeping loyalties to shoguns..OHH NOW THIS WAS HOT!
blow one, scrape flesh off ya skeletal cause ya soft bones are fufilling
killed-things, bq's bringing down ya lines like hanging phones off a building..HMM
ill-ness, I'm filled with so the product I bring to the table is hype
you're able to write, but the only thing you bring to the table is rice-NICE..BEST PUNCH BESIDE THAT SHOGUN ONE..KINDA PLAYED BUT WORDED NICELY
Fag, i'mma bout to set your ass on clearance, so i say fuck the wait,
cause his talk is cheap, coupon with pay, and with the rebate.THERES THAT PREFIX AGAIN..'HIS' YOUR BATTLING A GIRL..THATS SUSPECT..

OVERALL-YOU HAVE GOOD IDEA'S JUST NEED TO WORD SOME OF THEM BETTER..YOU HAVE DECENT PUNCH'S..NO MULTI'S AT ALL THO..NOT TO MANY META'S EITHER..

O.K CARMA...
BITCH!! i'm tha best in tha planet, leave me alone you pestering-faggot..
Im an aggressive-fanatic, about to teach u a lesson by lettin ya face rest-in-the-granite...NICE STARTER..MULTI'S

FEMCEE??!!??.. ya Gender is yet to be Proved, you're dyslexia's crude..
all you gon do is come wit an "essay" like you was a mexican-dude! DAMN..!! IT'S LIKE SHE SAID IT AN THEN B.Q DID IT..LOL..
BLACK QUEEN..you better bow ya head to me like you blessin-ya-food, this message is rude..
Don't wear ya emotions on ya sleeve, it's better if disgetion-is-used...OUCH!! THIS IS A KILLER..
chick I-spectate that your text-breaks, wack records of the past-2-decades ......
damage your chest-plate, cuz You couldn’t see my 'joints' with the use of 'X-Rays' .... HMM..THIS WAS A LET DOWN..
I'm Uppin' my Levels, Using 'black queen' for Target-Practice.., cuz Simply im too Hard-to-Clash-Wit.....
my Bars-are-Classic, and I'll take it as far as my foot to "uranus (your anus)-and-back-bitch!!..... LOL..ILL CLOSER..

OVERALL..
CARMA HAS ILL FLOW AN MULTI'S..ALSO HAS NICE META'S LIKE THE 'ESSAY' MEXICAN LINE-
BUT PUNCH'S AN MULTI'S ARE DEFINITLY HER STRONG SUIT..SHE DID NOT WRITE AS MUCH AS B.Q BUT SHE DID MORE DAMAGE WITH LESS..

GOTTA VOTE=CARMA..

not by much tho..i give it to her cause black queen wrote 16 to her 10..an she still had more an better punchlines with less lines..
can't hate..this was better than i expected..

LAWD HAVE MERCY 06-22-05 06:32 PM

my vote was for carma..this needs to be fixed..i did'nt know i had to place my vote in her box..would make sense tho..my bag..

Black Queen 06-23-05 10:41 AM

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DQ 06-23-05 11:30 AM

This was feedback posted for CARMA SUTRA
 
Just droppin feed to see how my gurl's doing ya kno, ya dropped good...

Black City 06-23-05 12:07 PM

Voted For: Black Queen

WHOA....dat sexy chick can rip...and no dis is not a 'pussy ryda' vote...its my honest opinion..peep

opener: karma: nice flow and punch for tha opener, BQ's was still good but i felt tha otha one better
closer: BQ: MOS DEF...dat had me rollin...damn gurl, nice shit rite there
metas: BQ: need i say more? read tha fuckin verse, shit was crazy
personals: niether: didnt see anything believable in either verse
multis: Karma: nice wordplay, but dis a battle, get sum more punches and personals

vote/Black Queen (call me)

dont like my vote?...sue me for all my RV money

Black City 06-23-05 12:11 PM

yall know dat LAWD HAVE MERCY and CARMA SUTRA are tha same person...check tha ip #

mizz fyre 06-23-05 01:37 PM

Voted For: CARMA SUTRA

carma your verse i felt was well structured, easy to read and packed full of punches and personals.....it was enjoyable and i liked the power you used in your opening lines......you had humorous lines here and there as well
chick I-spectate that your text-breaks, wack records of the past-2-decades ......
damage your chest-plate, cuz You couldn’t see my 'joints' with the use of 'X-Rays' ....
^^^my favourite lines.....anyway you took this battle....with your powerful punches,personals and wordplay

black queen- your verse was just too simple...i felt the opening lines but i think you fell off after that....some wordplay here and there but not enough punches or personals to take the win.......

overall my vote goes to carma

Black City 06-23-05 01:39 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Black City
yall know dat LAWD HAVE MERCY and CARMA SUTRA are tha same person...check tha ip #


shouldnt carma get dq'd? jus wonderin...even tho she voted for BQ like a dip shit...lmao

Sik Wit It 06-23-05 02:14 PM

Voted For: Black Queen

Start the besting..Ive beat legends..so for u its hard to test me
I heard ya bitch ‘sleeps around’…and its not due to narcolepsy
coo opener
but yo this sites is not a record label so if u win its not much proof fucker
ya fruity ass likes to be fingered...then ya show us ur true colors
hah, this punch was aight
the fuck you tryin' to hide? I already know TOO much to know about,
and about the skeletons in ya closet, thats what ya get for never comin' out
weak punch
The truth is he bites lines, because his originality is fucking wack,
Knock Out, I'll leave ya eyes black and baggy, like an Ensomniac
hmm, punch was okay here
kill you and murder your king, homie I pay royalties to no one
you dying without a cause in this battle like keeping loyalties to shoguns
aight
blow one, scrape flesh off ya skeletal cause ya soft bones are fufilling
killed-things, bq's bringing down ya lines like hanging phones off a building
decent
ill-ness, I'm filled with so the product I bring to the table is hype
you're able to write, but the only thing you bring to the table is rice
not so great
Fag, i'mma bout to set your ass on clearance, so i say fuck the wait,
cause his talk is cheap, coupon with pay, and with the rebate.
decent closer


BITCH!! i'm tha best in tha planet, leave me alone you pestering-faggot..
Im an aggressive-fanatic, about to teach u a lesson by lettin ya face rest-in-the-granite...
decent
FEMCEE??!!??.. ya Gender is yet to be Proved, you're dyslexia's crude..
all you gon do is come wit an "essay" like you was a mexican-dude!
nope
BLACK QUEEN..you better bow ya head to me like you blessin-ya-food, this message is rude..
Don't wear ya emotions on ya sleeve, it's better if disgetion-is-used...
weak
chick I-spectate that your text-breaks, wack records of the past-2-decades ......
damage your chest-plate, cuz You couldn’t see my 'joints' with the use of 'X-Rays'
could’ve made this bar, harder than this
I'm Uppin' my Levels, Using 'black queen' for Target-Practice.., cuz Simply im too Hard-to-Clash-Wit.....
my Bars-are-Classic, and I'll take it as far as my foot to "uranus (your anus)-and-back-bitch!!.....
decent closer

Overall.. BQ took this one
she just came harder w/ the punches
in this battle here

Opener = Tie
Punches = BQ
Structure = BQ
Flow = BQ
Closer = Tie

Carma.. ur punches were pretty weak here
could’ve made ur punches a lot better than that

LAWD HAVE MERCY 06-23-05 09:21 PM

everyone knows carma my sister jackass..of course we have the same ip..i set up the account for her..lol..
everyone knows this..thank you..

Black Queen 06-23-05 11:15 PM

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Black Queen 06-24-05 11:57 AM

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Livin' Legend 06-24-05 03:37 PM

This was feedback posted for Black Queen
 
Up da fuck up....whuddup BQ. Still sexy I see.............Droppin pure fiyah...holdin it down for that LL

Black Queen 06-24-05 04:59 PM

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Black Queen 06-25-05 06:10 PM

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Black Queen 06-26-05 04:24 PM

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K-Trini 06-26-05 07:29 PM

Voted For: Black Queen

BITCH!! i'm tha best in tha planet, leave me alone you pestering-faggot..
Im an aggressive-fanatic, about to teach u a lesson by lettin ya face rest-in-the-granite...
^^shouldn't call a girl a faggot,and 2nd line glorified
FEMCEE??!!??.. ya Gender is yet to be Proved, you're dyslexia's crude..
all you gon do is come wit an "essay" like you was a mexican-dude!
^^whack.....and dat 1st line is too unoriginal
BLACK QUEEN..you better bow ya head to me like you blessin-ya-food, this message is rude..
Don't wear ya emotions on ya sleeve, it's better if disgetion-is-used...
^^^umm...mediocre at best
chick I-spectate that your text-breaks, wack records of the past-2-decades ......
damage your chest-plate, cuz You couldn’t see my 'joints' with the use of 'X-Rays' ....
^^^OK.....
I'm Uppin' my Levels, Using 'black queen' for Target-Practice.., cuz Simply im too Hard-to-Clash-Wit.....
my Bars-are-Classic, and I'll take it as far as my foot to "uranus (your anus)-and-back-bitch!!.....
^^^^weak...foot up ass shit is played

Ight......ur shit was too unoriginal.Only attempt at werdplay was last line which was uranus.And uranus wordplay is played to death.Wat I give ya props for is having a nice vocab.Just come up with some fresh concepts.

Start the besting..Ive beat legends..so for u its hard to test me
I heard ya bitch ‘sleeps around’…and its not due to narcolepsy
^^^decent
but yo this sites is not a record label so if u win its not much proof fucker
ya fruity ass likes to be fingered...then ya show us ur true colors
^^lil too basic
the fuck you tryin' to hide? I already know TOO much to know about,
and about the skeletons in ya closet, thats what ya get for never comin' out
^^^nah...a lil bland
The truth is he bites lines, because his originality is fucking wack,
Knock Out, I'll leave ya eyes black and baggy, like an Ensomniac
^^^nah...same sleep concept as before,and the other one was better
kill you and murder your king, homie I pay royalties to no one
you dying without a cause in this battle like keeping loyalties to shoguns
^^1st line was more gangsta talk....2nd line was ight
blow one, scrape flesh off ya skeletal cause ya soft bones are fufilling
killed-things, bq's bringing down ya lines like hanging phones off a building
^^Ight
ill-ness, I'm filled with so the product I bring to the table is hype
you're able to write, but the only thing you bring to the table is rice
^^^Good
Fag, i'mma bout to set your ass on clearance, so i say fuck the wait,
cause his talk is cheap, coupon with pay, and with the rebate.
^^mediocre

Well....you had a bunch a adequate/mediocre punches...but ya lacked that one "OOH,Damn!!" punch.U'll continue to kill the average emcees....but you'd get killed against the vets.Another reason you killed Kama sutra is because ya had more line which provides a huge advantage(I should know..i killed ghost using that tactic).But ya got the win.

Vote-Black Queen


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