verbal shoota vs MaRVJay1009
 

Battle Rules:

10-12 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
no checkin polls(4 da voter's)

lets fuckin go...2 da voter's if u not gon explain ya shit...dont vote

Minimum posts to vote: 500

Check in by: 06-23-05 at 12:48 AM

Must drop verse in 2880 minutes after check in.


Closed. Expired battle win
-strobe

Verbal Shoota has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-21-05 07:04 AM.

MaRVJay1009 has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-21-05 11:50 AM.

u even said 'dude jay is so nice',when ppl say u 2 gay its so rite.
cuzz da last time u had a "hot-punch" it was "kool aid with no ice".
now i got da rite 2...just kill verbal cuzz i really dont like dude.
so sombody gon be "signin a death certificate" but it wont be "ice cube".*
ya girl's a real slut suck me off till my 'sunz rise' like its "6 in da mornin".
put a shot in ya stomach & like "old piano's" ima get "rid ya ORGaNS".
pmin me everyday 2 join his crew....but only hoe's run with him.
and dis kid's punchlines like "shaq sneaker's"....."no 1 gets em".
dis nigga luv's battlin on a cpu..but me i wanna get off instead.
he like "spider man with a dry mouth" all he do is "spit on da web".
u like ya 'avy' just "alot of lip".....lil bitch u wont fight got a greasy mouth.
a criminal? lol only time u had a "open-case" u was taken a "cd-out".


*ice cube's 1st album was called da death certificate

LOL.....marvjay, SMH.

Dude, you's a has-been....everybody says so.....check out time, man..


You're Rhymes played out the same time as the numbers in ya' name
queens u claim that run game? shit...I'll analyze the MC you've became
No personals, Weak flow...most hated, But yo....you ''RUN RV?''
How?...last time i checked, ya' rep was D/R'S n you still lost too E.C
I could swear...you wannabe me, even took the time too sig a fake quote
on that note...we all dyin too know...how ya verses even get One vote?
Name a user who wouldnt abuse-ya, son....... like a bloodied Juvenile
wRappin a ball of yarn is the only time you got text-style[textile]
rv in denile? or is it you?...last i heard, weak ass couldnt even find a crew
My puns leave ya pale as dandruff..
but ya always knew i'm head & shoulders above you like the shampoo
You shootin? ha!
didnt even make us look, disgracin' the rhyme book, Immitatin NAS
C'mon dog, you even get beat in a no-show battle, just ask...DAZ!



No explanations needed....we all know the personals an shit on this little nigga Marv....[nas closer is because he got nas in the sig an reppin queens an has the nas quote in his sig]



Dont base you're vote on any ''stretched lines''...'cause there ain't none an that's just a lame excuse too vote against somebody....explain it also like the rules says.....good luck marv.

Voted For: MaRVJay1009


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Voted For: MaRVJay1009

this was a real close battle very close both had hard hittin punches but marv punches hit harder verbal had some nice personals and i didnt see that many personals in marv verse but the problem with ya verse was these two lines:
"rv in denile? or is it you?...last i heard, weak ass couldnt even find a crew
My puns leave ya pale as dandruff..
but ya always knew i'm head & shoulders above you like the shampoo
You shootin? ha!"
they didnt make any sense so it threw ya verse givin marv the win but both of you had good verses which is good good battle
V/marvjay1009

return the favor link in sig or i will have vote removed

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checkin this out for my Boi Teph .......Nice drop man

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checkin pollz/////////////////////.....................

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fake quotes in the sig, hate votes by r-rated an black queen

removed....

hate votes???.....fam get over it pleez......niggaz aint like you u da wun goin around givin hate votes afta dis battle we'll have a pink slip...okay?????

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lol just like i thought.....but yo since its 0-0 now...i'll pm strobe and tell him dis is a pink slip battle...just say "i agree"

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hot battle!!!.................... checkin tha pollz

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dis is fuckin sad

y did i even battle ya garbage ass lol

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forgot about this battle.

This was feedback posted for MaRVJay1009
 

jus checkin all da polls nice battle dawgs........

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MarvJ killed this shit.
The other verse was ok.
Marv had better punches, metas and everything else.

lol no fuckin votes i aint been on here in like a week

Voted For: Verbal Shoota

u even said 'dude jay is so nice',when ppl say u 2 gay its so rite.
cuzz da last time u had a "hot-punch" it was "kool aid with no ice".
......lol hott opener 8/10
now i got da rite 2...just kill verbal cuzz i really dont like dude.
so sombody gon be "signin a death certificate" but it wont be "ice cube".*
.....yea nice line 6/10
ya girl's a real slut suck me off till my 'sunz rise' like its "6 in da mornin".
put a shot in ya stomach & like "old piano's" ima get "rid ya ORGaNS".
......lol damn another good punch 8/10
pmin me everyday 2 join his crew....but only hoe's run with him.
and dis kid's punchlines like "shaq sneaker's"....."no 1 gets em".
yea aight kinda lost flow but good punch 6/10
dis nigga luv's battlin on a cpu..but me i wanna get off instead.
he like "spider man with a dry mouth" all he do is "spit on da web".
.......lol damn another hott punchline 8/10
u like ya 'avy' just "alot of lip".....lil bitch u wont fight got a greasy mouth.
a criminal? lol only time u had a "open-case" u was taken a "cd-out".
damn hott closer u killed it there 10/10

VS.

LOL.....marvjay, SMH.

Dude, you's a has-been....everybody says so.....check out time, man..


You're Rhymes played out the same time as the numbers in ya' name
queens u claim that run game? shit...I'll analyze the MC you've became
ok nice opener 6/10
No personals, Weak flow...most hated, But yo....you ''RUN RV?''
How?...last time i checked, ya' rep was D/R'S n you still lost too E.C
ok good line 6/10
I could swear...you wannabe me, even took the time too sig a fake quote
on that note...we all dyin too know...how ya verses even get One vote?
damn..... nice punch 8/10
Name a user who wouldnt abuse-ya, son....... like a bloodied Juvenile
wRappin a ball of yarn is the only time you got text-style[textile]
nice word play and good punch 10/10
rv in denile? or is it you?...last i heard, weak ass couldnt even find a crew
My puns leave ya pale as dandruff..
but ya always knew i'm head & shoulders above you like the shampoo
damn again good wordplay and good punchline 10/10
You shootin? ha!
didnt even make us look, disgracin' the rhyme book, Immitatin NAS
C'mon dog, you even get beat in a no-show battle, just ask...DAZ!
ok nice closer 8/10

Marv jayy1009 46/60 - good job on the verse really had some ill lines and punches and really liked that closer very good and also try to work a lil more on ya delivery there were some lines there that were good but didnt pack that many damage or didnt conncet as good but keep it up aight

Verbal shoota- 48/60- ok u eally brung alot of punchlines here so good job on that and the wordplay was very good as well try to keep it up wit a lil better vocab aight and thats it really just keep it up.....

v/ it was a tuff battle and very close but my v/ goes to VS just for bringin a lil harder wit his punches but u both did good keep it up yalll..........1.....

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This was feedback posted for Verbal Shoota
 

checking polls.........................cause i cant vote cause i dont have 500 posts

im cool wit you teph but if i was able to vote i wouldve voted for Marv cause his verse was sick