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A Psycho's Mind
A Psycho's Mind
I’m obsessed I was brung here to see people suffer from they death The deep breath I take to every killing I make to every single step I love killing the whole fact of killing just makes me erupt inside Waiting to catch the eye so I can see the visions for them to die Even in a regular situation I bring strife and kill them using a knife Killing in so many ways I see the innocent acting all nice in they life Leave them in a cold case file cuz I stay away from ever being caught Gloved hands and a black mask, no fingerprints and no video tape shot I love the fact blood just bursts out the body when the throat is slit Get away from trials like OJ Simpson ………. “It just doesn’t fit!!!” I’m a massacre the black light shining on to my face telling me to do this Dripping blood all over me I love it!!! Over a hundred murders in a list And they keep on counting, and I keep on killing people, get them slaughtered Police always on these cases, I’m watching them and saying to my self ”Don’t bother” You’ll never find enough evidence to put me on trial, I’m just too sneaky and wild I hate these people when the smile, always having fun while I never even was a child Now I take revenge on all these people cuz I’m crazy there’s no one that can save me Ill leave the semen in the bitch wait nine months and then kill her and the newborn baby I should be locked up inside the white walls of the asylum and strapped up in the jacket In funerals I don’t feel nothing when they die I feel happy when I see them in the casket I love what I do, I rip they tongue out, and cut off they fingers they arms and legs spread The abdomen and the internal organs all torched in and left wit ashes, but I keep the head None of you really know me I don’t even know myself all I can say is that I enjoy me As a prize so I got over a hundred skulls in my closet placed as my fucking killer trophies The black murder scene at nights I love it and the white panorama homicide I adore it The people dieing in pain, they suffering and screaming those things ill do anything for it Characterized as a maniac, but who cares I know what I am, I’m the living grim reaper Black sands in veins, the uncontrollable reigns a terrible mind as my stories gets deeper The simple facts of me I keep as a wish so that all can see what America has come to be To see what happens to the ones who are bullied in life they turn into a Maniacal Frenzy Link- http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=196131 |
uppin this lets get sum feed aight yall
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Daymmmmmmmmmn you fell into character well.
A lil too well cos some of that shit was straight gory fo real. Some of it was even a lil too grotesque, especially the part about fuckin the chick and coming back 9 months later to kill her and her newborn. But don't get it twisted i thought this rhyme was good for real. It even flowed in such a way as you could imgine a deranged motherfucker spittin this, like in some parts speedin up the flow to fit in the same amount of time as the others. I was likin this rhyme. Feeling it. Yo return the favour in the OM in my sig or the latest one i did. Peace |
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thnx soulja for the feed forget bout peas comments he just a hater...lol
uppin this for feed aight thnx in advance |
yo RTF g!!!!!!!
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yea ill rtf
uppin this pplz stop sleepin and leave ur feed |
uppin lets get some feed plz need feedback
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cmon feedback cmon stop all the sleepin and get upo and leave feed....lol
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cmon feed pplz let me get sum aight uppin this cmon
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does evry1 in RV count sheep all day cuz yall sleepin man cmon feed plz
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uppin this........cmon pplz feed thnx
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this was very interesting
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ohhh it was man give good feedback cmon stop bein wack uppin this
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uppin cmon leave feed plz thnx u very much............
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creative....
nice dropin but I got lost a bit at the end..... LOL but good flow n structure, a few multi's so great dropin u need hooks or sumtin to make it mo interesting.... real nice 9/10 |
nah i dont need hoooks cuz its not a song thats y but thnx for ur feed uppin this
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uppin this for more feed cmon stop sleepin and wakeup
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uppin this cmon yall leave feed shit..........
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Very nice drop
Are you a psycho or something cuz you did that a lil to good? LOL jp overall 8/10 |
nah i aint or maybe i am...lol j/p thnx for tha feed uppin this cmon
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uppin..............upppin this for more feedcmon
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uppin this now lets go...........feedback.........
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ok my last up for this then noones levin feed........
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This was a very good drop nice job..Had lots of imagery , and good emotions..Good feeling going into this drop..You really put time into your peice...Very good wordplay and nice structure .Overall keep it up nice drop.
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