Mimesis vs NaRc-UzI
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 06-22-05 at 08:15 PM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.

NaRc-UzI has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-21-05 08:18 PM.

Mimesis has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-22-05 05:06 AM.

Unloading a "clip" cause ya "sloppy","untrue" and every battle ya "win is luck"
Im on the "right click" but "dont copy" cause ill "undo" your life when i "cut" you up
The only time you "bust a nut" is when your involved with "another man"
Only when i give you the "upper-cut" you could say you got the "upper hand"
Im not in the "drug game" but im killing this faggot over "keys"(keyboard)
Mimesis must not have "manners" cause in battles hes not known to "please"
Catching "felonys" and deciding your "fate" with a "clip" without "catching a case"
Your "melody" couldnt "relate" to being "sick" if he was the cousin of "aids"
Your an "underdog" in this battle so im gonna let you pray to the "gods in heaven"
You couldnt "beat the odds" if your dick was
"one,three,five,or seven"

Your crew.. newbs who used to spit wack.. but you still do
But you'll have your Rythem At Will.. after I fucking kill you
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I'm being real fool.. You suck.. we all know your a dyke dude
Man, Its a fact we all resist change.. cause nobody likes N-U
Fool.. how you steppin, cats like me and like when i touch rhyme
Man, my votes bring more attention then your damn punchlines
I can rhyme.. i eat lime and dimes.. i feel i should hit the zoo
Narc-Uzi.. Damn.. now my fucking punch is complete shit too
You ain't on my level.. your wack as fuck and continually duck
But,
This whole site wants Narc.. cause we can tell that you suck

Fuck outta here with all your """.
That shit doesn't make your lines any better. You still suck.

If you don't get something, pm me.

Fuck this wack kid..

Voted For: NaRc-UzI

checkin polls......................................


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ooh shit ...my bad....I'lll report it.

nigga how the fuck are you 42-1 with no creativity and just simple ass rhymes,

^ Using """"""" doesn't make your shit dope. You used a sick/aids line. Who the fuck are you to be talking?

But word to getting that vote taken off.

Narc, you're wack as fuck. Shut up.

Lmao. right click/copy concepts. Please. You're mad creative though.. That shit would have been extremely fresh in 2002.

well lets see how the voters look at it.....................

Voted For: NaRc-UzI

umm man i think narc won this....

...o well i cant vote anyway..but then again i dont really get ur punches Mim and i know u can come harder than that..

Narc nice wordplay fam..keep it up


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oops MY BAD!!!!!

this was meant for feedback..tell strobe to take it off.....the vote i mean.....

Voted For: Mimesis

ok this was a pretty good battle, narc u came ok, mimesis u came dope, like usual... lol lets get to crackin...

mimesis - mim ur verse was dope, your punches hit hard like always, you got gud wordplay, structure was practicly flawless, your whole verse flowed well all the way throughout and didnt fall off at any point, your vocab was good... you had a tight opener and closer.. good drop... 8.5/10

narc - your verse was alot more genralised, punches didnt hit near as hard as mims, your verse flowed ok but it fell of at some points making it hard to read, your structure needs improvment, you need to shorten ur lines, by stretching they cause the effect to be lost.. you need to work on ur vocab, overall it was an aiight verse
7/10

opener - M
closer - M
flow - M
Punches - M
Structure - M
complexity - M
vote - M, no hate just how i saw it...

Voted For: NaRc-UzI

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sorry....take that off...i was meant to click feedbak

Damn, upping for more votes.

Close this shit down.

uppin this battle...........................................

This was feedback posted for NaRc-UzI
 

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LOL...Murdz vote...sorry Mim, but it does look suspect too say the least, it's like he automatically assumed you won because of you're reputattion on the site an just jotted down random bullshit an voted for you.

Narcz wordplay was better, you had two concepts referring too self glory of your punchlines.....the ''N-U'' was you're best shit....i think narc got you beat, no hate or beef.....but damn

Voted For: Mimesis

Unloading a "clip" cause ya "sloppy","untrue" and every battle ya "win is luck"
Im on the "right click" but "dont copy" cause ill "undo" your life when i "cut" you up

A LITTLE STRETCHED,M NO PROPER PUNCH, GOOD FLOW.

The only time you "bust a nut" is when your involved with "another man"
Only when i give you the "upper-cut" you could say you got the "upper hand"

PLAYED SET UP, NICE WORDPLAY

Im not in the "drug game" but im killing this faggot over "keys"(keyboard)
Mimesis must not have "manners" cause in battles hes not known to "please"

NICE BAR.

Catching "felonys" and deciding your "fate" with a "clip" without "catching a case"
Your "melody" couldnt "relate" to being "sick" if he was the cousin of "aids"

NONONONO, AIDS LINE...LOL...CAN YOU SAY PLAYED?

Your an "underdog" in this battle so im gonna let you pray to the "gods in heaven"
You couldnt "beat the odds" if your dick was
"one,three,five,or seven"

MEH, OK CLOSER
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Your crew.. newbs who used to spit wack.. but you still do
But you'll have your Rythem At Will.. after I fucking kill you

GOOD AS AN INTRO, WAS FEELIN THE WORDPLAY.

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I'm being real fool.. You suck.. we all know your a dyke dude
Man, Its a fact we all resist change.. cause nobody likes N-U

NICE PERSONAL.

Fool.. how you steppin, cats like me and like when i touch rhyme
Man, my votes bring more attention then your damn punchlines

SELF GLORIFICATION AND A DISS SO PRETTY NICE...

I can rhyme.. i eat lime and dimes.. i feel i should hit the zoo
Narc-Uzi.. Damn.. now my fucking punch is complete shit too

LMAO, ORIGINAL PUNCH.

You ain't on my level.. your wack as fuck and continually duck
But,
This whole site wants Narc.. cause we can tell that you suck

PRETTY GOOD NAMEPLAY, NICE CLOSER.

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ONE SIDED IMO.

NARCS LINES WERE QUITE STRETCHED AND DIDNT CONTAIN MANY HARD HITTING PUNCHES ALTHOUGH IT DID FLOW PRETTY WELL.

MIM GETS MY VOTE FOR MORE CREATIVE PUNCHES AND USING PERSONALS.

NO HATE

aight thanks for voting daubs.......................

That what i like to see, someone gets a vote against em and dont start bitchin!!

props.

uppin............................................. .........

Voted For: Mimesis

Your crew.. newbs who used to spit wack.. but you still do
But you'll have your Rythem At Will.. after I fucking kill you
meh opener
I'm being real fool.. You suck.. we all know your a dyke dude
Man, Its a fact we all resist change.. cause nobody likes N-U
coo, good use of the nameplay
Fool.. how you steppin, cats like me and like when i touch rhyme
Man, my votes bring more attention then your damn punchlines
pretty decent
I can rhyme.. i eat lime and dimes.. i feel i should hit the zoo
Narc-Uzi.. Damn.. now my fucking punch is complete shit too
hah, this one was aight
You ain't on my level.. your wack as fuck and continually duck
But,
This whole site wants Narc.. cause we can tell that you suck
decent closer


Unloading a "clip" cause ya "sloppy","untrue" and every battle ya "win is luck"
Im on the "right click" but "dont copy" cause ill "undo" your life when i "cut" you up
weak opener
The only time you "bust a nut" is when your involved with "another man"
Only when i give you the "upper-cut" you could say you got the "upper hand"
okay, punch was aight
Im not in the "drug game" but im killing this faggot over "keys"(keyboard)
Mimesis must not have "manners" cause in battles hes not known to "please"
nope
Catching "felonys" and deciding your "fate" with a "clip" without "catching a case"
Your "melody" couldnt "relate" to being "sick" if he was the cousin of "aids"
nah, this bar was wack
Your an "underdog" in this battle so im gonna let you pray to the "gods in heaven"
You couldnt "beat the odds" if your dick was "one,three,five,or seven"
weak

overall this battle was one-sided.. mimesis just had harder punches
than narc.. had a decent flow.. an okay structure.. & a use of nameplay
on narc
narc.. get rid of the “”.. nobody uses those shits anymore.. & elevate
on ur punches.. add some personas or w/e in ur rhymes.. & lower ur
flow a little bit.. but overall.. elevate narc

Yeah, Narc, what was that about you murdering me?

Stop fucking pming me kid.

well the voters i guees they dont like "" so im gonna stop using them but uppin

Upping this again, fa real.

Vote up homies.....

Uppin This Battle.....................................

3-0 Me.

Upping this shit again yo.

Vote up..

Voted For: Mimesis

Mim
Nice Shit Dawg You Had Some Nice Creative Punches Which Was Good Wordplay Nice Man Personals Was Nice Too, You Had ALot Of Good Vocabulary Here, Man, Shit's Nice Dawg, And Structure Lines Up Well, No Lines Was Played Concept, You Came Original In This Battle With Every Line Man

Narc
Aiight Man You Had SOme Nice Wordplay But Dawg Alot Of Shit's We're Played In Your Verse Remember This Is Not The Street Dawg It's A Rap Site, Stop Talking ABout Guns And Shits Cuz You Don't Impress No One Man, Also Punches We're Played Out Man Get Some New Shit's Vocab Was Okay Structure Was Whacked Overall Mim Got THis

Vote-Mimesis

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Voted For: Mimesis

Mim
Nice Shit Dawg You Had Some Nice Creative Punches Which Was Good Wordplay Nice Man Personals Was Nice Too, You Had ALot Of Good Vocabulary Here, Man, Shit's Nice Dawg, And Structure Lines Up Well, No Lines Was Played Concept, You Came Original In This Battle With Every Line Man

Narc
Aiight Man You Had SOme Nice Wordplay But Dawg Alot Of Shit's We're Played In Your Verse Remember This Is Not The Street Dawg It's A Rap Site, Stop Talking ABout Guns And Shits Cuz You Don't Impress No One Man, Also Punches We're Played Out Man Get Some New Shit's Vocab Was Okay Structure Was Whacked Overall Mim Got THis

Vote-Mimesis

RTF Link In My Sig

still uppin............................................. .........

Upping for this shit to get closed already..

Fa real..

Voted For: Mimesis

haha mimesis wins 6-0 thats fuckin dope!!!!!!!!!!!

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uppin this shit/...........................................

Uppin this again.

Somebody just close this shit out.

uppin for the competitors................................

somebody just fucking close this.

vote up.....

Voted For: Mimesis

mimesis is too gangsta yo. Jus on that fact, I vote Mimesis, and Narc yo fuckin' Nazi, if you get this removed I will hunt down every single one of your relatives, and slice off their sausages or burn there vaginas off. understand? bitch ass nigga. Vote/Mim :shoot:

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Looks like some sausages are gonna have to be burnt off..

Lmao.

Upping this shit again.