t.r.oo.p vs MaRVJay1009
 

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Check in by: 06-22-05 at 11:04 PM

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Closed - Expired / old battle win

yo fam r u gonna check da fukk in or not..........

T.r.oo.P has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-22-05 12:00 AM.

MaRVJay1009 has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-22-05 12:10 AM.

dis kid's fake i got tons of proof,he really aint got guns 2 shoot.
he's a nobody..even "small kids in iraq" dont "look up 2 troop".
whut record label in they rite mind would wanna pursue ya???.
u'll neva rap offline u like "web cam's" u stay "on da computer".
u got no flow ya bars r so so dis homo think's his style's good.
only "album we'll see w/ ya pic in it" has "photo's of ya child hood".
while im rippin a sick beat,luva boy troop lickin his chick feet.
not caliph,but ya girl slept with da "whole cali" 4 u da get in da 6 feet.
cant believe u still a vet..not familiar yet? well marvjay i be da villian.
you no 'gangsta' son ya whole style's "WaCK(ed)" like "mafia killings".
u aint gota "put ya CON's in my mouth 4 me da "eat ya VERSE'S".
beat troop 2 da ground he'll be like "gza's cd"..."beneath da surface".

Voted For: T.r.oo.P

I'm not gonna vote or leave feed, cuz Marv seems to have a prob with honest feed or votes. So here's a free up.


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Crap, sorry bout that. I'll tell strobe...........

lmaooo u a funny dude.....u dont vote on my shit i dont vote on ur shit plain n simp

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Voted For: MaRVJay1009

nice battle

MarvJay - ur verse was sik..ur opener was tight..good use of personals..2nd bar was ok..ur album line was good..never heard that used before..u had some very good personals..ur closer coulda been worded different but u still did ur thing..good flow also.....8/10




Troop - not really sure where u were going with ur verse..didnt really have any good punches..thought u woulda came out harder..the only line i liked in ur verse was the dennis rodman line..other than that ur punches really didnt hit.....6/10




MarvJay wins

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This was feedback posted for MaRVJay1009
 

checkin da polls...and what nucca???

str8 battle...marv took it though...cant vote or troop might disqualify it

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fukk it man im tired of uppin dis shit......dis is crazee

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Voted For: MaRVJay1009

MaRVJay1009 - Good spit, you had a pretty decent flow and the punches were hitten hard.

Best Line - dis kid's fake i got tons of proof,he really aint got guns 2 shoot.
he's a nobody..even "small kids in iraq" dont "look up 2 troop".

and

u got no flow ya bars r so so dis homo think's his style's good.
only "album we'll see w/ ya pic in it" has "photo's of ya child hood".
(niice shit man)

Worst Line - while im rippin a sick beat,luva boy troop lickin his chick feet.
not caliph,but ya girl slept with da "whole cali" 4 u da get in da 6 feet.

T.r.oo.P - Another good spit, you flow was very well, and you had some pretty decent punches.

Best Line - Ea is Jay's Only Play......Jus Fuck it ya Harmless Marvlous
Sever ya Limbs to See if you can Hold ya Weight Armless

Worst Line - Are u in a Hurry 2 Get Off.Mus be cuz i can Tel.Ya.Pacein
Bunny Hoppin on Bmx's Is How Jay Bounces Wit Elevation

OVERALL - This battle was pretty close, but I think Marv took this one. His punches were hitten hard and he had good wordplay and flow. Troop your verse was sick also, I was just feelin' Marvs by a little bit more. N0 hate.

Vote - Marv

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Voted For: MaRVJay1009

MaRVJay1009's verse

dis kid's fake i got tons of proof,he really aint got guns 2 shoot.
he's a nobody..even "small kids in iraq" dont "look up 2 troop".
^ Good opener wordplay on name ok good start

whut record label in they rite mind would wanna pursue ya???.
u'll neva rap offline u like "web cam's" u stay "on da computer".
^ Nice punch good rhyme was feelin this it made me go ooo

u got no flow ya bars r so so dis homo think's his style's good.
only "album we'll see w/ ya pic in it" has "photo's of ya child hood".
^ lol feelin this dope bar nice concept multi good bar

while im rippin a sick beat,luva boy troop lickin his chick feet.
not caliph,but ya girl slept with da "whole cali" 4 u da get in da 6 feet.
^ nice bar not as good as the above ones though i thought

cant believe u still a vet..not familiar yet? well marvjay i be da villian.
you no 'gangsta' son ya whole style's "WaCK(ed)" like "mafia killings".
^ Again aight but not as good as the others nice diss though

u aint gota "put ya CON's in my mouth 4 me da "eat ya VERSE'S".
beat troop 2 da ground he'll be like "gza's cd"..."beneath da surface".
^ nice closer ok rhyme

Overall
Overall...i like it i still saw some of the trademark writing you do but it's toned down ya verse was easy to read flowed well bars worked disses punches were good not too many personals but punches and nameplay worked well i'd say this was one of your good verses MaRV...

T.r.oo.P's verse

Its Obvious Jay's a Dinga Ling Fiend..... Yellin out Queens
Performing and Juggling Balls..... Closest Marv got 2 Kings
^ Ok opener lol @ dinga ling bit...-_- ok bar

Ea is Jay's Only Play......Jus Fuck it ya Harmless Marvlous
Sever ya Limbs to See if you can Hold ya Weight Armless
^ na not feelin it the rhyme itself is weak

Stop Takein Napz wit Female Pups talkin Like u got Layed
Actually the year "1009" Dashes in your Drops got Played
^ not feelin i think you could of took a different approach on his name

I Heard u was Coo wit Q?. 2 u Hes Probly Flippin Hot Man
Marv Fell off & Couldnt Rebound if he was Dennis Rodman
^ Q disses?...please homie thats played but rodman bit was aight

Are u in a Hurry 2 Get Off.Mus be cuz i can Tel.Ya.Pacein
Bunny Hoppin on Bmx's Is How Jay Bounces Wit Elevation
^ ok bar better than previous ones but still not making me go ooo

Yet ima Leave ya 2 Sorrow.... So im Certainly Hurtin Last
And this "Fams" Missing in Action Like the Old Urkels Cast
^ ok closer but kinda basic IMO

Overall
Whoa is this the same Troop???...ya verse at best was basic punches were meh-ok personals again non existent i don't think you put as much into this verse as what you usually do...someone with the rep you built in text this was quite a lazy verse IMO...

V/MaRVJay1009 RTF in my battle vs E.C within 3 days or vote rmoved :thumbup:

dammm dis shit is still open lol....

This was feedback posted for T.r.oo.P
 

troop..................................but i aint gonna vote

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Voted For: T.r.oo.P

dis kid's fake i got tons of proof,he really aint got guns 2 shoot.
he's a nobody..even "small kids in iraq" dont "look up 2 troop".
NICE OPENER, GOOD PLAY ON NAME , SET UP BLAH THOUGH 7/10
whut record label in they rite mind would wanna pursue ya???.
u'll neva rap offline u like "web cam's" u stay "on da computer".
NICER FOLLOW UP, GOOD PUNCH FUNNY SHIT 8/10
u got no flow ya bars r so so dis homo think's his style's good.
only "album we'll see w/ ya pic in it" has "photo's of ya child hood".
EHHH ITS A GOOD PUNCH JUST DIDNT HIT HARD 6/10
while im rippin a sick beat,luva boy troop lickin his chick feet.
not caliph,but ya girl slept with da "whole cali" 4 u da get in da 6 feet.
ANOTHER JUST SO SO BAR, NICE MULTIS 6/10
cant believe u still a vet..not familiar yet? well marvjay i be da villian.
you no 'gangsta' son ya whole style's "WaCK(ed)" like "mafia killings".
I LIKED THIS BAR, PROBABLY USED B4 BUT GOOD 8/10
u aint gota "put ya CON's in my mouth 4 me da "eat ya VERSE'S".
beat troop 2 da ground he'll be like "gza's cd"..."beneath da surface".
NAH DOG WEAK CLOSER, LACKED PUNCH 5/10
TOTAL 40
Its Obvious Jay's a Dinga Ling Fiend..... Yellin out Queens
Performing and Juggling Balls..... Closest Marv got 2 Kings
PRETTY GENERIC OPENER HERE 6/10
Ea is Jay's Only Play......Jus Fuck it ya Harmless Marvlous
Sever ya Limbs to See if you can Hold ya Weight Armless
NICE PUNCH HERE, REALLY THE SET UP IS GOOD 9/10
Stop Takein Napz wit Female Pups talkin Like u got Layed
Actually the year "1009" Dashes in your Drops got Played
DECENT RHYME, WASNT WORDED THE BEST THOUGH 6/10
I Heard u was Coo wit Q?. 2 u Hes Probly Flippin Hot Man
Marv Fell off & Couldnt Rebound if he was Dennis Rodman
LMAO GOOD SHIT HERE 8/10
Are u in a Hurry 2 Get Off.Mus be cuz i can Tel.Ya.Pacein
Bunny Hoppin on Bmx's Is How Jay Bounces Wit Elevation
ANOTHER DECENT ONE THAT LACKED IN HIT POWER 6/10
Yet ima Leave ya 2 Sorrow.... So im Certainly Hurtin Last
And this "Fams" Missing in Action Like the Old Urkels Cast
DECENT CLOSER HERE TO END IT 7/10
TOTAL 42

BOTH VERSES WERENT UP TO PAR WITH YOU GUYS SKILL, AND IT COULDNT WENT EITHER WAY, IN MY OPINION TROOP TOOK IT

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