Darth Vader vs Stanza
 

Battle Rules:

6 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
one day drop
one day check
3-0 ko
4-1 automatic win
:thumbup:

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 06-22-05 at 11:29 PM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.

Stanza has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-21-05 11:59 PM.

Are you fucking kidding :( The fuck did you have to set it up with this acount for? Omfg.. Let me go vote on some battles and i'll set it up with my other acount, with the same rules.. damn yo

If You Decline this batttle Then Im Not Gonna Battle Your bitch Ass

Jus accept and drop Bitch

Or how bout I set up a battle right now, with 30 minute check in 30 minute drop time? Same fucking rules...

You are a faggot for real, if you to bitch to accept on my other acount, wow

Yep Ima Real Bitch ......Now drop .................

Darth Vader has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-22-05 05:53 PM.

Poetic faggot, your bound to get merked in this meeting
N' fuck ya name yo this pussy can never stanza beating
Start fleeing yo, i've had it, the wack fuck can't hack it
You won't steal a win
...that means you'll never amount to 'jack-shit'
That's it, over, and you got owned because of the beef
I smack your mouth and feed ya your own fucking teath

You lose faggot.

you lose you wack motherfucker.........................

This was feedback posted for Darth Vader
 

Stanza is a piece of shit, he's overrated, he sucks

Voted For: Stanza

Only Way You Ever Get Wins Was when You Was Hangin Round Fans
Ill Leave You Hanging From The Web ....Like My name was Spider Man
^^why would he get wins hangin round fans?,decent 2nd line though
Oh You Couldnt Connect With Dail-up.... So You Got D Super Lost
You Cant Hang With Me Man I Got A Rope..While You Got Dental Floss
^^1st line was hot,but 2nd wasn't
Shabooyaka....You cant Handle The Heat So Get Off The Oven & Fry It
Bcuz Im Known To Knock Wieght of The Watchers Like The Atkins Diet
^^Nice

This was a decent verse.Flow was OK.Stucture was nice.Didn't like that 1st. line.When you said wins....did you mean wind?If so....then in the verse,you shoulda put "win/wind" so we'd get it.But still....a good verse.

Poetic faggot, your bound to get merked in this meeting
N' fuck ya name yo this pussy can never stanza beating
^^^Nice name play
Start fleeing yo, i've had it, the wack fuck can't hack it
You won't steal a win
...that means you'll never amount to 'jack-shit'
^^^didn't like this verse,1st line was rhymed words thrown together
That's it, over, and you got owned because of the beef
I smack your mouth and feed ya your own fucking teath
^^too basic and weak

You started off excellent....but then faded.That steal a win/jack shit line would have been decent if put together better.And that last line was too basic and straightfoward.

Vote-Stanza(vote in link below)

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=194851

Umm Damn Dog I Jus ripped you A New Asshole LOL

So STFU ...Lets Keep the votes Comin

and Oh Yeah Thanx Trini

Lmfao, herb vote, you suck kid, seriously, your not good, so go suck a dick

This was feedback posted for Darth Vader
 

Jack should win...

Weerd.......................

Voted For: Darth Vader

eh a alright battle ...


buy vader took this easy
Vader- your flow was very very on target the whole way through your vocab was basic but it worked well and it jus added to the overall drop...
That's it, over, and you got owned because of the beef
I smack your mouth and feed ya your own fucking teath
that was by far the best line out of both of the drops ... and it was hella funny and had be going OOOHHHH haha nice drop

Stanza
you also had a really killer drop but the flow wasnt as on key .. your punches were jus really weak and didn't really hit as hard whenvaders really sorta out shined yours.. not to shabby though

for an overall better more harder hitting verse vader gets this

VOTE//VADER

lmfao, kid got ripped, way to come mad played fag boy.

This was feedback posted for Darth Vader
 

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^^ your fucking me right? Vote man................

Voted For: Darth Vader

Holy fucking shit stanza sucks. v- jtr because his punches hit harder, his structure was better, he wasn't NEARLY as forced and i really really like his punches that get real creative. So vote jtr

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.................................Man What Kind of vote is dat?

Hey That Last Vote def does not count

call the battle 1-1 Bcuz thats gettn dqed

it was explained, dont bother, you still gonna lose :rolleyes:............

Voted For: Darth Vader

aiight this shit was easy um:

Poetic faggot, your bound to get merked in this meeting
N' fuck ya name yo this pussy can never stanza beating
lmao... I liked this. 8/10
Start fleeing yo, i've had it, the wack fuck can't hack it
You won't steal a win
...that means you'll never amount to 'jack-shit'
another nice line. lol 7/10
That's it, over, and you got owned because of the beef
I smack your mouth and feed ya your own fucking teath
man jus leave the fuckin' site. :shoot: hell no!!! 2/10

17/30

nice shit basically except closer

Stanza:
Only Way You Ever Get Wins Was when You Was Hangin Round Fans
Ill Leave You Hanging From The Web ....Like My name was Spider Man
hangin' by the web? hell nah, reworded maybe, but no. 4/10
Oh You Couldnt Connect With Dail-up.... So You Got D Super Lost
You Cant Hang With Me Man I Got A Rope..While You Got Dental Floss
nigga wtf? no...... 3/10
Shabooyaka....You cant Handle The Heat So Get Off The Oven & Fry It
Bcuz Im Known To Knock Wieght of The Watchers Like The Atkins Diet
ShabooNO!!!! 4/10

that's like 11 or 12 out of 30.

yo, I peeped your other shit, and wow. i expected better yo.

but v/JTR pc

ShabooNO, < LMFAO..................................

Voted For: Darth Vader

Darth Vader - Good spit, you had good flow, and wordplay. Punches were hitten hard.

Best Line - Start fleeing yo, i've had it, the wack fuck can't hack it
You won't steal a win
...that means you'll never amount to 'jack-shit'

Worst Line - NONE


Stanza - Good spit, flowed well.. had some decent personals and punches.

Best Line - Oh You Couldnt Connect With Dail-up.... So You Got D Super Lost
You Cant Hang With Me Man I Got A Rope..While You Got Dental Floss

Worst Line - Only Way You Ever Get Wins Was when You Was Hangin Round Fans
Ill Leave You Hanging From The Web ....Like My name was Spider Man

OVERALL - Close battle here, both came with the punches swingin' and a damn niice flow. I had to give this to Darth cuz I felt his punches were landin' harder. Stanza work on stronger punches and you would have won this.

Vote - Darth Vader

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Aii You Won Man

You can Get It closed

4-1 KO

Nice battle man .............Peace

yea, thanks, you can have that soc vote dq'ed if you want, anyways, good battle though man, peace.

This was feedback posted for Darth Vader
 

...You bit, or flipped. I'm not sure but someone used that "Stanza beating" line ages ago.

Yeah No Hate No More man The battles done we got it off the chest so Lets Let It Rest LOL

Squashed?

??? It's his name, I doubt I bit a personal, and it would probably some off as a flipped line if my lines aren't exactly the same, so go find the link, and if it's word for word, just ban me, lol I am very confident it's not bit man :thumbup:

upping once again.................................

Voted For: Darth Vader

Only Way You Ever Get Wins Was when You Was Hangin Round Fans
Ill Leave You Hanging From The Web ....Like My name was Spider Man
i dont git it, lol

Oh You Couldnt Connect With Dail-up.... So You Got D Super Lost
You Cant Hang With Me Man I Got A Rope..While You Got Dental Floss
ha, that wuz kinda stupid tho

Shabooyaka....You cant Handle The Heat So Get Off The Oven & Fry It
Bcuz Im Known To Knock Wieght of The Watchers Like The Atkins Diet
i dont git that 1 either


Poetic faggot, your bound to get merked in this meeting
N' fuck ya name yo this pussy can never stanza beating
lol, it wuz kinda stupid but funny, i laffed out loud, lol

Start fleeing yo, i've had it, the wack fuck can't hack it
You won't steal a win
...that means you'll never amount to 'jack-shit'
haha, cuz thatd b ur poop :cool:

That's it, over, and you got owned because of the beef
I smack your mouth and feed ya your own fucking teath
haha

overall weak battle, but ima go wif vader, werd

This was feedback posted for Darth Vader
 

checkin pollz.....

Voted For: Stanza

man this is self explanitory
Stanza ripped this kid a new ass hole
he KO'd him hands down...good verse-good win!!!

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You Can Get Rid of that voet if you want man

.....I Dont have anthing to do with that vote Honestly

lol, lmfao, ya, thats a damn short vote, well at least it upped the battle for us, but ya i'm getting that removed.

uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuupppppp ppppppppp

OMG, IS IT A BIRD? IS IT A PLANE? IT'S SUPER HERB!!!

:cool:

.,........................lol..................... .........