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Invektive vs DeadlyVision
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2:30 time limit No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 06-25-05 at 02:03 AM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
DeadlyVision has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-22-05 11:46 AM.
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Invektive has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-22-05 02:12 PM.
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This was feedback posted for DeadlyVision
DV took this.. punches were nicer..
..sike, nice drop form both though |
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Voted For: Invektive
ok.....this was real hard because both disses were dope, i mean it was hard to choose, honestly if i could say tie i would, but invektive's diss stood out, it was hot, nice punches and a clear and understandable verse, so my vote has to go to him....but shit were call crew so who ever wins, it'll still be a Establishment win. good drop from both... and D.V. you know we coo, just my vote had to go another direction... be easy Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: DeadlyVision
man..both of you are my homies....so don't get offended... d.v...i thought your verse was pretty dope..flow seemed a little forced...your punches were on point...and the production was very impressive Ike...I didn't like the singin at the beginning..and the punches you incorporated into the singing..were kinda childish..and I wasn't impressed untill about midway through the track..and you started droppin some dope punches...in fact..i felt like your best..was better than dv's...how ever..dv was definately more consistant..production was...this didn't appeal to me....I thought your flow was decent...but not any better than dv's...because even though it sounded forced to me...it was a little faster paced...and he had more of that sporadic style that sticks with people... to be completely honest....I think it was a straight tie...but I need to vote...so I'm going to say deadly vision because his verse was more consistant... nice job though...big ups |
Voted For: DeadlyVision
Damn.....this is a slaughter.....lmao.....mixxing was way gud your quality is good.....punches were there eerything was there but cmon this was like 2pac vs MArio seriously Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
This was feedback posted for DeadlyVision
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Voted For: DeadlyVision
aiight since y'all both crew, I'ma vote. Honest vote. DV: aiight, I liked the Fat Joe beat. You had good flow throughout. Some good punches in there. Can tell you really want that damn mic. lol.. i'm likin' this. good job. Would have been nicer goin' longer. but 2 mins coo. Invek: haha i liked intro. nice singin'. lol You do sound a lot like young Em. fo reel. but I didn't like first beat that much. too damn slow, so your flow wasn't all that catchy. But you had some real good punches as well. Like the second beat. You finished pretty strong. But flow was off in few places. but good punches sitll. overall, you both had real nice punches. Kinda even. But I think DV stayed on flow longer. So wit that, I'm leanin' towards DV a lil more. So v/DV both were good tho. suprised at Invek, never really heard him. but it was good. keep elevatin' yo. good shit. pc one. |
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Voted For: DeadlyVision
Vote -DV alrite o.k battle here, DV you came with two nice beats nice some tight flow throughout, punches were pretty decent, liked the 'L like ya mum got a miscarrage line', nice Invektive - o.k decent intro but to me ya punches lacked, flow was gud but ya punches weren't upto scratch n the beat the too mellow, ya feel pz keep droppin Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Invektive
Welll Invective..I heard ya got a deal so I decided to check ya battle out so.................. Flow-Easily Deadly Vision.....Ivective,you was rappin a lil too slow there.Maybe try rappin a lil quicker.And deadly....try to cut down on the "ugh,ught, and yeah,yeah". Both of you had a nice delivery.No complaints there. Lyrics-Invective......the starting(before the actual rappiing) of ur shit was just too cheesy.I'm sorry...no other way to put it.It didn't sound good and was uncreative.but luckily....you came strong at the end.Nice personals and shit.As for Deadly.....I was listening to it...and didn't find the hrd hittin punches.So work on makin ur punches hit harder.U got flow and delivery........but work on punches. Vote-Invective(rtf below please) http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=196552 |
is funny how ktrini neva votes on audio battles..lol and suddently drops a vote and says "dv gets the flow."...lol
OMG funny shit. this will be dq. |
Voted For: Invektive
Alright, Deadly kill the backround O an A's goin on, make it hard to focus on your verse, Even tho you had decent punches and OK delivery your flow hurt you a lil bit. It was choppy. Invek. Your shit was pretty nice, alotta people aren't gonna like it cus it aint all HARD an Broo-Hah shit. But I could catch it all clearly an laughed quite a few times. Delivery is Nice, Flow perfect. Decent Deadly... Invekt...I liked it better. Drop Sum Honest Votes on my battle with ^^..^^ when he drops. thanks. -1 |
Voted For: Invektive
Damn even with all the singing and ish... that verse was fire.. nice punches and personals, basically did it better then deadly vision'z "He wouldnt have deadly vision if he was houston and stabbed him self in the eye" Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
^^Deadly invizion.. nice verse.. punches where nice.. and it flowed pretty good..^^
sorry the top have got fucked i think i erased it from above.. |
This was feedback posted for DeadlyVision
ok ike im hating the beat change and the way your shit ended the mixing on that is dirt im loving the hook punches were ok disses were ok only one i really liked was the rodman shit and houston line.flow was good and basically carried this track shits kinda like a diss 50 would do all flow but lacking dope punches and personals emotion was kinda weak as well and its way too low overall good song bad diss 5/10
deadlyvision i cant hear you shit cuz it aint free mp3 you dick ill vote once i can hear deadly verse |
Voted For: DeadlyVision
pretty hot battle actually... invektive- not a bad track at all man, but there was an obvious difference in lyrical quality between your first segment and the 2nd with the beat switch... up until the beat switch i was pretty dissappointed with the lack of quality punches...i kept waiting and waiting to here something that would make me laugh...but it just never came your flow was ok, but nothing spectacular, although i know its harder to flow on a slower beat....at least for me i didnt really like the beat switch at first but then i got used to it, and found that it was actually a lot better than the begining of the track... the arnold line was pretty clever... but just a not, the padres actually DO have a chance of winning this year, considering they are first in their division by a considerable margin... but overall i just thought this track wasnt very consistant... some spots were hot, some were not...it just needed that lil something to put it over the top and make it a hot diss it would be a good track, but not a good diss track... deadly- you came hard man... i loved how you started the track off...the actual verse that is i loved the piss on your hand line... you had nice flow for that segment, but your real strong point was the lyrics... "battle me youll get an l like ya mom had a mis-cariage" but is switching the beat something new that ive just missed? lol i thought this was ok, not really that necessary though if i were you i wouldve just done the fo-fo beat the entire time and gotten rid of that first shit, but w/e... your lyrics were still hot here, but personally i thought your flow fell off a tad.. it seemed like a lot of your lines were stretched, but i think you did it to squeeze a bit more into your lyrics....which kind of cancels it out... overall, a good diss... its the kind of stuff that you should come with when your making one... nothing against invektives track, but dv's was just harder vektive man, it just didnt really sound like a diss track to me, more of a regualr track with the occasional diss in it... but nonetheless good battle, both of you did good jobs... i just gotta give it to dv... v/ DeadlyVision |
Voted For: DeadlyVision
invektive i didnt like your approach, the delivery bothered me you seemed like you were doing more singing man,you didnt seem to have any energy man this is a battle,but i mean but i did love the way you put this shit together the intro and vocals all was perty nice,the beat was nice too i was feeling the beat and flow..butt..anyways this was just not your battle man....ive heard way sicker from you man DV-i loved your energy it seemed just write,the concept and your approach on the diss was solid,nice beat good vocals nice vocabulary and emotion man emotion = energy and feeling is was persuades the listeners i feel so much props man v/DV |
Voted For: DeadlyVision
Heard both tracks...neither verses were OHHHHHHHH but DV did win...Invenktive drop was aight 1st beat harmed ya verse coz half the diss is contained in the beat you use...and that mellow type beat wasn't dissing material punches were aight...2nd beat picked you up flow was good and had some aight stuff but IMO you shoulda stuck to the 2nd beat coz beat switches ain't all important..overall ok track good lyrics keep at it. DV...beat was better flow was jus as good IMO lyrically you came harder this was a close battle though you didn't merk him but you did enough to pull it off some decent lyrics middle part of the verse was best IMO...again ok track...but jus better V/DV...this is an RTF...no deadline required :thumbup: |
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