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SPuL aka Reckless vs 1ndeph
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10-15 No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No being a bitch(spul....) Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 06-25-05 at 08:57 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
1ndeph has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-22-05 08:58 PM.
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SPuL aka Reckless has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-22-05 08:59 PM.
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Don't get it?Fuck you! :thumbup:
Spul I must be "ghost too"...but its different in my way. Cause your punches go through,less hits then your myspace. April was mentioed.In your verse,so a delay was admited... I gave u extra time.....comin up second'll take you a minute 1st you mournin over jill,a smooth stalker today. all that purple rain...I'm surprised you aint offer me grapes. .....And pancakes,I don't know how much the you can take. I'll rampage............if my little brother was my only fanbase if efection was a weapon then......then I love you to death so you livin forever through your music....judgin the rest. Rappers run the world,We can endure any overtake. But accordin to your name,that means U in a lower case. explination: meh his sig is a link to a myspace He wrote an om sogn about jill on dave chappelle prince offers grpaes and pancakes and spul sports purple all the time. and for the opener.He's ghost for being online or offline. everything else ou just need to not be a fuckin idiot :) |
yo sucka foo, I'ma post my verse up tommorow, got some shit to deal wit. So if you drop today coo, if you drop tommorow coo. word.
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^him Man, people hackin' into your names, man, you've never been best walkin' into a club without your ears only time you Indeph (in deaf) Your bars are all big, meanin' your rhymes, they all lack flows Your bars are THISSSSSSSSSSSSSSS wide... .......................................... almost as wide as your nose You a ugly motherfucka, scared of the mirror, you need some help You the posterboy for birth control, I mean... look at yourself Like a vegetable, man, your punches they never meat Puttin' your girls hand on my dick, is the only time I'm beat Makin' a thread about RV's horror story, oh, word, my dear you must have diarrhea of the mouth, and constipation of the ideas Fuck Chicago, man, the windy city, nucca please Like a b-ball game, man, you can ever win, wit out the D blah fuck this, keyed up real quick. i don't care |
lmao@you sayin the "I keyed this" shit.
damn that was actually very wack :shocked: you did hella better on the alias.Oh well :thumbup: |
yea, ask Triple, yo. But yours was wacker so it's ok......... wack ass kid. upppin'................
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This was feedback posted for SPuL aka Reckless
I'm voting for SPuL.. punches wer harder...
...sike nice shit here though |
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word skriptz knows how shit is, too bad he in my crew. upppin' bitch...............
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Voted For: 1ndeph
Indeph- your verse was pretty nice....your punches i thought there was one or two a little weak...but most connected and hit nicely n all...so your punches were nice...had some nice personals also...your strucuture was nice and easy to read n shit...explantions were given nice...but overall 8.9/10..You got this because you had better punches and just better personals... Spul- your verse was aight too i guess...but your punches some came weak son...but then some connected and came hard & some were just plain hot...personals were off the hook even had evidence and all that...structure was blah could be better maybe...but overall 8.4/10...Close Battle i mean you had some good punches but not good enough...But personals you killed it...But punches just werent working so Indeph got this with punches and personals... |
This was feedback posted for 1ndeph
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^LMAO dumbass, they can't see that post........ lmao.... idiot
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This was feedback posted for 1ndeph
LMFAO @ dont get it, fuck you! and then explaining it all.. lololol weerd :cool: I might vote after with an alias if everyone is ok with that?
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Voted For: 1ndeph
Spul-Shit flowed nice through the whole thing.But you were talking about how he looked.Did Indeph eva post his pictures.Or is it fake personals.Ur punches were bassically weak.Speccially the one where ya TRIED to rip his name. Indeph-Shit wasn't so hot...but it was ight.Had some decent personals that wasn't fake.Flow was good.But next time...make ur punches harder Vote-Indeph(please drop a vote in battle below) http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=196552 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: SPuL aka Reckless
Indepth- Spul I must be "ghost too"...but its different in my way. Cause your punches go through,less hits then your myspace. ^^Made me seriously crack up..lol Rappers run the world,We can endure any overtake. But accordin to your name,that means U in a lower case. ^^U could have twisted differently. to make it more complex its plain now..its ok... SPL- Man, people hackin' into your names, man, you've never been best walkin' into a club without your ears only time you Indeph (in deaf) ^hahaha...nice personal + Punch...is nice how its worded. Your bars are all big, meanin' your rhymes, they all lack flows Your bars are THISSSSSSSSSSSSSSS wide... .......................................... almost as wide as your nose ^^looked at the pic seriously...lol wow kinda simplistic though.. Posteboy line was played dont eva use it..omg. Makin' a thread about RV's horror story, oh, word, my dear you must have diarrhea of the mouth, and constipation of the ideas ^^another personal..lol I think honestly it was close, but reread the verses twice and went into the personals really. i think i have to give my judgements based on punches and personals. V/Sp Crew vote removed |
Voted For: SPuL aka Reckless
This was a fuckin close to call battle, not to mention dope.. First off SPuL: Man, people hackin' into your names, man, you've never been best walkin' into a club without your ears only time you Indeph (in deaf) NICE PERSONAL BUT NOT REALY A PUNCH, FEELIN THE WORDPLAY THOUGH. Your bars are all big, meanin' your rhymes, they all lack flows Your bars are THISSSSSSSSSSSSSSS wide... .......................................... almost as wide as your nose OMGOMG LMFAO LOLO LOL.... FUNNY AS FUCK, 10/10 FOR THE ORIGINALITY AND PERSONAL AND PUNCH...NICE. You a ugly motherfucka, scared of the mirror, you need some help You the posterboy for birth control, I mean... look at yourself DECENT PUNCH. Like a vegetable, man, your punches they never meat Puttin' your girls hand on my dick, is the only time I'm beat DECENT SET-UP, PLAYED PUNCH IMO. Makin' a thread about RV's horror story, oh, word, my dear you must have diarrhea of the mouth, and constipation of the ideas MEH, WAS A PERSONAL BUT NOT REALLY FEELIN THE PUNCH. Fuck Chicago, man, the windy city, nucca please Like a b-ball game, man, you can ever win, wit out the D AGAIN NICE PERSOANL AND DECENT WORDPLAY AND PUNCH. __________________________________________________ __ Spul I must be "ghost too"...but its different in my way. Cause your punches go through,less hits then your myspace. NICE OPENER AND A DECENT PERSONAL, IT HIT HARD. April was mentioed.In your verse,so a delay was admited... I gave u extra time.....comin up second'll take you a minute MEH, PLAYED CONCEPT...NOT FEELIN THE PUNCH AT ALL. 1st you mournin over jill,a smooth stalker today. all that purple rain...I'm surprised you aint offer me grapes. GOOD PERSONALS IN SET UP AND PUNCH, NICE. .....And pancakes,I don't know how much the you can take. I'll rampage............if my little brother was my only fanbase AGAIN A PERSONAL, BUT A WEAK PUNCH ON THE END.. if efection was a weapon then......then I love you to death so you livin forever through your music....judgin the rest. MEH, WEAKER THAN YOUR OTHERS.. Rappers run the world,We can endure any overtake. But accordin to your name,that means U in a lower case. NICE PERSONAL NAME PLAY AND WORDPLAY, GOOD CLOSER. __________________________________________________ _ ITS OBVIOUS BOTH HAVE MAD TALENT AND THIS IS CLOSE TO CALL, BOTH HAD VERSES PACKED WITH PUNCHES AND PERSONALLS.. THE REASON SPUL GETS MY VOTE IS BECAUSE IN MY OPINION HIS PERSONALS HIT HARDER...THAT NOSE LINE HAD ME LAUGHIN LITERALLY. HE ALSO HAD GOOD WORDPLAY AND WAS MORE CONSISTANT THROUGHOUT. 1NDEPH, YOU DIDNT DO ANYTHING WRONG REALLY, YOU HAD NICE PUNCHES AND THAT LAST BAR WAS KILLER, SPUL JUST CAME HARDER TO ME. WILL BE A CLOSE ONE. NO HATE. |
Voted For: 1ndeph
yo i knew this was gon be a hot battle once i saw this thread... and weerd, yall know ima be honest since im so tight with both you guys... but personally, i think that deph took this... spul man, i was expecting more out of your verse i think... ive seen you do some real nice shit, that wasnt really at par with this... you did have some good punches though the best in my book were the nose one, and the one about his girl and the meat or some shit...lmao but the rest of the lines were just ok there were a few i didnt like though, like the "in deaf" one, i personally thought it was a bit dull.. your flow was pretty consistant... deph kid you had a nice solid verse... a great choice for an opener, with the myspace line, probably my favorite line from the verse... your flow was consistant through your verse as well, but what it really comes down to is the punches... the line about spuls bro was great, and your closer was the perfect way to end it in my book... with the exception of about one or two lines, all of em were solid for the most part, which is really why you get my vote... weerd good battle yall, id like to see another one sometime... v/ indeph :shoot: |
WTf iv got 5 wins so why cant i post a vote
fuck it a favour is a favour ill edit this in2 a vote when i can Spul I must be "ghost too"...but its different in my way. Cause your punches go through,less hits then your myspace. Str8 personal April was mentioed.In your verse,so a delay was admited... I gave u extra time.....comin up second'll take you a minute Ok 1st you mournin over jill,a smooth stalker today. all that purple rain...I'm surprised you aint offer me grapes. Lol .....And pancakes,I don't know how much the you can take. I'll rampage............if my little brother was my only fanbase Wack if efection was a weapon then......then I love you to death so you livin forever through your music....judgin the rest. Pretty tight Rappers run the world,We can endure any overtake. But accordin to your name,that means U in a lower case. Lower case, keyboard lines are played as hell VS Man, people hackin' into your names, man, you've never been best walkin' into a club without your ears only time you Indeph (in deaf) Tight Your bars are all big, meanin' your rhymes, they all lack flows Your bars are THISSSSSSSSSSSSSSS wide... .......................................... almost as wide as your nose Lmfao funny as hell and hit kinda hard You a ugly motherfucka, scared of the mirror, you need some help You the posterboy for birth control, I mean... look at yourself Weak Like a vegetable, man, your punches they never meat Puttin' your girls hand on my dick, is the only time I'm beat Weak Makin' a thread about RV's horror story, oh, word, my dear you must have diarrhea of the mouth, and constipation of the ideas Weak Fuck Chicago, man, the windy city, nucca please Like a b-ball game, man, you can ever win, wit out the D Ok Creativity = Spul Opener = Spul Closer = Spul Personals = Spul Punches = ID Flow = Both Overall = Spul yo, spul fell off hard towards the end wiv a dope openeing as indepth was kinda ok thru out but i felt spul was hiitting harder and deserves the winnn Vote = spul will use as a aproper vote whn i know how 2 |
you probably couldn't do a proper vote cause your account wasn't upgraded.
When I had a low post count I couldn't vote either.When u get 500 try again. peace |
Voted For: SPuL aka Reckless
damn yall both had sum tight verses....ima start out wit quotin my favorite bars from each verse: spul:"Fuck Chicago, man, the windy city, nucca please Like a b-ball game, man, you can ever win, wit out the D" 1ndeph:"April was mentioed.In your verse,so a delay was admited... I gave u extra time.....comin up second'll take you a minute" ^i also liked that myspace line...but it didnt really flow rite??? but overall...i had to go wit spul cuz his whole verse flowed well...u both had good personals...but 1ndeph u didnt hav enuff...and spul ahd the better opening and closing bars... but no doubt this was a good battle |
Voted For: SPuL aka Reckless
Spul I must be "ghost too"...but its different in my way. Cause your punches go through,less hits then your myspace. 2/10...Doesnt fit April was mentioed.In your verse,so a delay was admited... I gave u extra time.....comin up second'll take you a minute 3/10..Didnt work eitheir 1st you mournin over jill,a smooth stalker today. all that purple rain...I'm surprised you aint offer me grapes. 8/10....Lol...Hot .....And pancakes,I don't know how much the you can take. I'll rampage............if my little brother was my only fanbase 4/10...EH OK if efection was a weapon then......then I love you to death so you livin forever through your music....judgin the rest. 3/10....No Rappers run the world,We can endure any overtake. But accordin to your name,that means U in a lower case. 7/10....Nice Closer U had good concepts but ya punches werent connecting kinda like u was jus talkin instead of punches i jus got out of this problem...of a punch lookin like a punch...but its really not...use more similies and metas and u woulda had diss... 45%... Man, people hackin' into your names, man, you've never been best walkin' into a club without your ears only time you Indeph (in deaf) 7/10...Nice punch off his name Your bars are all big, meanin' your rhymes, they all lack flows Your bars are THISSSSSSSSSSSSSSS wide... .......................................... almost as wide as your nose 6/10....Lol...another funny concept You a ugly motherfucka, scared of the mirror, you need some help You the posterboy for birth control, I mean... look at yourself 5/10....eh coulda been worded better Like a vegetable, man, your punches they never meat Puttin' your girls hand on my dick, is the only time I'm beat 3/10.....No..1st line..hot..2nd ...Not Makin' a thread about RV's horror story, oh, word, my dear you must have diarrhea of the mouth, and constipation of the ideas 4/10....Didnt really work Fuck Chicago, man, the windy city, nucca please Like a b-ball game, man, you can ever win, wit out the D 7/10...Nice Similie and Meta Had better punches...u won this battle by like 2 punches u kinda fell off ya grind a lil..get back 2 the old Spul Nice concepts here and metas which got u the win work on ya structure and flow kid 60% Spul Winz *Nuff Said* |
Voted For: 1ndeph
Man, people hackin' into your names, man, you've never been best walkin' into a club without your ears only time you Indeph (in deaf) na..doesnt hit Your bars are all big, meanin' your rhymes, they all lack flows Your bars are THISSSSSSSSSSSSSSS wide... .......................................... almost as wide as your nose seen this type of concept flipped so much =\ You a ugly motherfucka, scared of the mirror, you need some help You the posterboy for birth control, I mean... look at yourself eh, ok Like a vegetable, man, your punches they never meat Puttin' your girls hand on my dick, is the only time I'm beat once again an eh, ok Makin' a thread about RV's horror story, oh, word, my dear you must have diarrhea of the mouth, and constipation of the ideas na wording sucked Fuck Chicago, man, the windy city, nucca please Like a b-ball game, man, you can ever win, wit out the D i get it but still it isnt hard vs. Spul I must be "ghost too"...but its different in my way. Cause your punches go through,less hits then your myspace. damn....nice witty punch April was mentioed.In your verse,so a delay was admited... I gave u extra time.....comin up second'll take you a minute na 1st you mournin over jill,a smooth stalker today. all that purple rain...I'm surprised you aint offer me grapes. eh na .....And pancakes,I don't know how much the you can take. I'll rampage............if my little brother was my only fanbase decent i should have said i'd instead of i'll if efection was a weapon then......then I love you to death so you livin forever through your music....judgin the rest. na Rappers run the world,We can endure any overtake. But accordin to your name,that means U in a lower case. alright personal..needs better wording V/1ndeph Sorry SPuL but you just slacked with a quickly keyed verse. He came well and had some witty shit in there. 1ndeph u got some great potential, jsut work on your wording of concepts better. Coo battle guys, but it showed who wanted the W more |
Voted For: SPuL aka Reckless
ok, you both know I'm cool with both of you. So this is an honest vote. Lets see. Deph: Spul I must be "ghost too"...but its different in my way. Cause your punches go through,less hits then your myspace. good punch.... I liked it! 8/10 April was mentioed.In your verse,so a delay was admited... I gave u extra time.....comin up second'll take you a minute not as good, but not that bad. 4/10 1st you mournin over jill,a smooth stalker today. all that purple rain...I'm surprised you aint offer me grapes. Jill lmao Spul be all like "....." prolly. 5/10 .....And pancakes,I don't know how much the you can take. I'll rampage............if my little brother was my only fanbase lmao dope......... 8/10 if efection was a weapon then......then I love you to death so you livin forever through your music....judgin the rest. haha nice........ 5/10 Rappers run the world,We can endure any overtake. But accordin to your name,that means U in a lower case. nice job.. good punch 5/10 Overall, you had good verse. deph. Nice flow and stuff. punches could have been harder tho. 35/60 spully: Man, people hackin' into your names, man, you've never been best walkin' into a club without your ears only time you Indeph (in deaf) nice wordplay. 6/10 Your bars are all big, meanin' your rhymes, they all lack flows Your bars are THISSSSSSSSSSSSSSS wide... .......................................... almost as wide as your nose LMAO.......... omg....... lmao dope... 10/10 You a ugly motherfucka, scared of the mirror, you need some help You the posterboy for birth control, I mean... look at yourself not bad ok....... 5/10 Like a vegetable, man, your punches they never meat Puttin' your girls hand on my dick, is the only time I'm beat no played 3/10 Makin' a thread about RV's horror story, oh, word, my dear you must have diarrhea of the mouth, and constipation of the ideas damn, nice........... 7/10 Fuck Chicago, man, the windy city, nucca please Like a b-ball game, man, you can ever win, wit out the D nice word play.... 7/10 damn, you came hard man. Liked this verse. good flow and shit. real nice. Liked the nose punch the best. had me rolling ROFL.. good shit 38/60 both came hard. tight battle. But SPL came harder v/SPuL Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Voted For: 1ndeph
indeph took dis IMO... spul-u know u my nigga but u didnt really transition ya punches good...u didnt really have any punches that stood out but u did have some creativity..da diarrhea how eva da fuck u spell it shit is like kinda played.. indeph-iight i liked yours more because it was more complex and had good personals and shit in there...but like the first u coulda re-worded sum of ur lines n da verse woulda stood out betta.. v/indeph good battle from both tho.. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: 1ndeph
Here We Go: Spulster: He got you dawg. I mean, you had a good verse and all, but I didn't feel you came strong enough. Punches were there, most were creative and hit, and I'll admit, I laughed for five minutes at the "you nose is thhhhiiiiiiiiisssssssssss wide" LMFAO. But you didn't have as much...whats the word...I dont know, but I feel you couldve cam stronger bro. 1ndeph: Real solid verse from you...Punches were creative, you were consistent, and you had alot of funny ass personals, for example, the myspace one. Your closer was very creative as well. I wasnt really feeling the dave chapelle metaphors, because the seemed more like a filler than a punch, so that was probably the only homosexual part of your verse. Other than that, solid drops by bpth, but 1ndeph took this. V/ Indeph |
Voted For: SPuL aka Reckless
ok lets see: SPuL: Man, people hackin' into your names, man, you've never been best walkin' into a club without your ears only time you Indeph (in deaf) Your bars are all big, meanin' your rhymes, they all lack flows Your bars are THISSSSSSSSSSSSSSS wide... .......................................... almost as wide as your nose Fuck Chicago, man, the windy city, nucca please Like a b-ball game, man, you can ever win, wit out the D v.s Indeph: Spul I must be "ghost too"...but its different in my way. Cause your punches go through,less hits then your myspace .....And pancakes,I don't know how much the you can take. I'll rampage............if my little brother was my only fanbase OVerall: This was an average battle. Y'all both had some good lines, but you also both had some wack as hell lines. Like made me think why the hell you put that in? Y'all both made me laugh too. spul had that nose line, and your lil bro line. haha both were tight lines. Both your flows and structures were pretty nice though. But I think spul just hit a little harder than you deph. Overall, shit was pretty close. good job by both v/spul oh, and rtf on my battle or I will get this vote removed. |
Voted For: SPuL aka Reckless
Aiite really good battle let me break it down: Spul I must be "ghost too"...but its different in my way. Cause your punches go through,less hits then your myspace. ^^^ Good opener, I felt the punch did not hit atall hard but it was a clever opening, 3/5 April was mentioed.In your verse,so a delay was admited... I gave u extra time.....comin up second'll take you a minute ^^^ Again not very hard hitting, but decent wordplay, 3/5 1st you mournin over jill,a smooth stalker today. all that purple rain...I'm surprised you aint offer me grapes. ^^^^ Good line, well done here..4/5 .....And pancakes,I don't know how much the you can take. I'll rampage............if my little brother was my only fanbase ^^^ Wasnt feelin this line atall sorry but, 1/5 if efection was a weapon then......then I love you to death so you livin forever through your music....judgin the rest. ^^^ Good wordplay again BUT NOT HITTIN HARD.....2/5 Rappers run the world,We can endure any overtake. But accordin to your name,that means U in a lower case. ^^^ OK finally a good punch, 3/5, it wasnt too special 16/30 Man, people hackin' into your names, man, you've never been best walkin' into a club without your ears only time you Indeph (in deaf) ^^ haha, good wordplay, but it did not hit hard like some of indeph's lines, 3/5 Your bars are all big, meanin' your rhymes, they all lack flows Your bars are THISSSSSSSSSSSSSSS wide... .......................................... almost as wide as your nose ^^ HIT HARD....HAHA..sickest line, good shit...5/5 You a ugly motherfucka, scared of the mirror, you need some help You the posterboy for birth control, I mean... look at yourself ^^^ Haha, again hitting hard, good shit not as good as the one above, but still good..4/5 Like a vegetable, man, your punches they never meat Puttin' your girls hand on my dick, is the only time I'm beat ^^ Didnt hit hard, but good wordplay, 2/5 Makin' a thread about RV's horror story, oh, word, my dear you must have diarrhea of the mouth, and constipation of the ideas ^^^ Haha, the diarreah and constepation bit was a sign of sick rhyming....4/5 Fuck Chicago, man, the windy city, nucca please Like a b-ball game, man, you can ever win, wit out the D ^^ FUCK U, LOL, chicago the best, but neways good punch, but jus wait next season when we make the kings look like peasants.....3/5 21/30 Overall: I think Spul won, because his punches hit harder, well played both of you.....RTF to my battle with daubs please |
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