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MaRVJay1009 vs Mad Dog
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10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No Unexplained Votes You wanted this Minimum posts to vote: 650 Check in by: 06-24-05 at 04:13 AM Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in. |
Mad Dog has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-23-05 04:30 AM.
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*Back to beatin newbs...or at least people who type like em anyways* Can't stand this text head he's got RV in the middle of his name, Coz he knows his net reps his only chance of fame, Ya still type like a newb ya not so "harmful but", Even if you were Stan Lee you still won't "Marvel us", Ya overobssesed wit text i can tell by the way you write, You prolly think you actually spittin somethin on a mic, All this time you been on RV and still you've learned shit, Coz honestly what supposed vet still "typz lik dis"?, So run along get a new style coz the garbage you spew, Would look better if a German wrote ya verse for you, *Auf wiedersehn...merked* |
MaRVJay1009 has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-23-05 11:38 AM.
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gota couple predicitions.....
1.he's say somthin about me quotin my lines....and some noob shit 2.somthin with MARV'EL...u know a line every1 has said 2 me....if im wrong im wrong...but dis kid luv's me.. mad dog has no flow...we pay no attention when dis homo kid text. i neva saw 'money grow' skill wise so in his raps i show 'no interest'. he's obsessed with me quotin...its gon be easy y didn't dis hore 4fit. i dont mean 'somthin ppl say when they mad' but my dick 'DOG-ON-iT'. so he a 'SaC'rafice his life......just da dick ride and be on some1's 'ballz'. from u i wont run at all..& why should i be MaD when ur da underDOG. ima put underdog...heard ya audio u lie'd & said ya flow was type lethal. mc's hide ya bars..whut does a 'mad dog' usually do? they know 2 'bite ppl'. how u vet fam...when in ya audio's & text fam ya flow off. why go da 'pet land' with money when i can cum on rv & 'own-dog'. lol..... |
lmaoooooooooooooooooo wow i was rite with my predicitions
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lol 2 outta 3 not bad...but i knew all the dog lines
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Voted For: Mad Dog
Mad Dog: Pretty Nice, all the punches hit well, I like the 4th Bar, nice punch :) Could've used a few more syllables in places so it read better. Marv: Honestly This verse wasnt as bad as i expected, but you hyped yourself too much, and only really had one punch that hit in my eyes. I think thats why Mad dogs Verse hit so hard. You need to stop typin n00b like, and type text like, spell shit proply and lose all the 'Underdog' Whateer shit, just type man. Plus you said Fam too much in the last bar. |
u gonna accept dat vote fam????????
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A votes a vote ain't it?...up up up up up up up up
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Voted For: Mad Dog
Best Lines Mad- Ya still type like a newb ya not so "harmful but", Even if you were Stan Lee you still won't "Marvel us", ^^made me laugh... All this time you been on RV and still you've learned shit, Coz honestly what supposed vet still "typz lik dis"?, ^^it was cool line could have used it differently but its cool Marv- he's obsessed with me quotin...its gon be easy y didn't dis hore 4fit. i dont mean 'somthin ppl say when they mad' but my dick 'DOG-ON-iT'. ^^C'mon u could make it a lil complex how u vet fam...when in ya audio's & text fam ya flow off. why go da 'pet land' with money when i can cum on rv & 'own-dog'. ^^your best punch of the whole battle man...and it wasnt even that creative but oohwell V/M fo betta punches that wasnt played. vote dq'd |
NO UNEXPLAINED VOTES
^^^^datz in da rules rite????? u got 2 unexplained votes..... but i mean datz how u like 2 win ur battles...hey |
if you want them removed PM stobe...i have no qualms
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im just askin u do u think dos votes are explained & its funny cuzz nun of dos dudes neva voted on nun of my battles till now
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This was feedback posted for MaRVJay1009
polls,
mad dog is fam... Marv would say its hate... |
???....fam ur non exsistant 2 me on dis site...run along
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Distilled = questionable...but i guess it's ok...DV unfortunately no i wouldn't accept IMO...but like i said...you got problems wit votes...report to Strobe i have no qualms
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Voted For: Mad Dog
Can't stand this text head he's got RV in the middle of his name, Coz he knows his net reps his only chance of fame, ^^umm.....decent I guess Ya still type like a newb ya not so "harmful but", Even if you were Stan Lee you still won't "Marvel us", ^^NICE Ya overobssesed wit text i can tell by the way you write, You prolly think you actually spittin somethin on a mic, ^^weak...set up was good,but lacked delivery. All this time you been on RV and still you've learned shit, Coz honestly what supposed vet still "typz lik dis"?, ^^Nice So run along get a new style coz the garbage you spew, Would look better if a German wrote ya verse for you, ^^Nicce This wasa nice verse.Flowed stayed good throughout the whole verse.Only problem was that some punches lacked.More werdplay would have been better. mad dog has no flow...we pay no attention when dis homo kid text. i neva saw 'money grow' skill wise so in his raps i show 'no interest'. ^^U neva seen money grow...dun diss urself he's obsessed with me quotin...its gon be easy y didn't dis hore 4fit. i dont mean 'somthin ppl say when they mad' but my dick 'DOG-ON-iT'. ^^weeak..... so he a 'SaC'rafice his life......just da dick ride and be on some1's 'ballz'. from u i wont run at all..& why should i be MaD when ur da underDOG. ^^weak ima put underdog...heard ya audio u lie'd & said ya flow was type lethal. mc's hide ya bars..whut does a 'mad dog' usually do? they know 2 'bite ppl'. ^^c'mon....weak how u vet fam...when in ya audio's & text fam ya flow off. why go da 'pet land' with money when i can cum on rv & 'own-dog'. ^^OK U had mad lines wheer u attempted to rip his name....but all failed.The last one was decent but not spectacular.Flow was okay.But ur problem was bein too weeak. Vote-Mad Dog(vote in link below please) http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=196552 |
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return the favor mad dogg............................................
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^^^u losin every battle in ya sig lol
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jus reading the votes
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Voted For: Mad Dog
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=194833 return da vote in diz link plz mad dog has no flow...we pay no attention when dis homo kid text. i neva saw 'money grow' skill wise so in his raps i show 'no interest'. ^^^ not feeling dat, personal wuz weak he's obsessed with me quotin...its gon be easy y didn't dis hore 4fit. i dont mean 'somthin ppl say when they mad' but my dick 'DOG-ON-iT'. ^^^ dozent make sense, ''my dick dog on it'' it wuz worded horribly so he a 'SaC'rafice his life......just da dick ride and be on some1's 'ballz'. from u i wont run at all..& why should i be MaD when ur da underDOG. ^^didnt rhyme & again da lines wuz horribly worded ima put underdog...heard ya audio u lie'd & said ya flow was type lethal. mc's hide ya bars..whut does a 'mad dog' usually do? they know 2 'bite ppl'. ^^dope, definately ur best bar how u vet fam...when in ya audio's & text fam ya flow off. why go da 'pet land' with money when i can cum on rv & 'own-dog'. ^^^it wuz str8, nuthin 2 hard hittin though Not da best verse, personalz wua lackin & da wordplay wuz kinda basic in ur verse, propps 4 da ''bute ppl'' line, dat wuz nyce, good personal & dope punch, but da rest ov da verse wuz kinda off.. Can't stand this text head he's got RV in the middle of his name, Coz he knows his net reps his only chance of fame, ^^^ not feelin it, nice personal, but da wordplay culd of been better Ya still type like a newb ya not so "harmful but", Even if you were Stan Lee you still won't "Marvel us", ^^^ nyce Ya overobssesed wit text i can tell by the way you write, You prolly think you actually spittin somethin on a mic, ^^^dope, nyce flow, & good concept All this time you been on RV and still you've learned shit, Coz honestly what supposed vet still "typz lik dis"?, ^^ ha ha ok i type lyke dat but still, it wuz a real hot punch So run along get a new style coz the garbage you spew, Would look better if a German wrote ya verse for you, ^^ ha ha i hate germans! & da closer made me lausgh, good stuff easily da better verse, personal were droppin in every bar & u matched da personalz up with some witty punches Personalz=Mad dog wordplay=marv [even though both were kinda basic] punches=mad dog flow=mad dog structure=mad dog mad got diz EZ..........Plz return da favor in da link at da top of da page mad dog |
will do...uppin for that final bee-otch to vote...
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This was feedback posted for MaRVJay1009
niceeeeeeee battle dawgs just checkin the polls!!!
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Voted For: Mad Dog
iight this was an iight battle, propz to both yall.. mad dog, you had a tight flow, punches hit hard when they were thrown, u had some gud personals on his name n shit in there, wordplay was gud, i like ya strucute, vocaublary needs to be extended a bit more but overall gud verse.. marj, your flow was iight, punches didnt hit as hard as mad dogz did, you had some gud predicitions, personals were aiight, structure was cool, wordplay wasnt as gud as dogz, and overall dog had a better verse... v/ dog |
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