J.Terror vs Hitchcock
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4-5bars no bullshit no fllippin no biting no d/ryding no crew votes Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 06-25-05 at 12:46 AM Must drop verse in 2880 minutes after check in. |
J.Terror has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-24-05 12:47 AM.
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Hitchcock has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-24-05 12:52 AM.
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No need to swing jabs,see I already won this battle, even before you signed in
But you'll get hit twice like da twin towers,cuz my punches always "bin landin" You Could punch through glass walls,& still not be a breakthrough performance And my punches'll chin "check" dude, even If my nickname was "allow-ants" Jaw's fist bound for a pounding, teeth shall bow to my finest- cuz I’m hot rip & tear this pussy so many times, he’ll be mo’ limbless than KFC cups And when i say i'm win'N no doubt- i ain't talkin dates with Gwen Steffani Cock thought a hollow tip was a contraceptive, so i put 2 on his head for safety Wreckin frames, ya career'll be hittin mo' brick walls, than test dummies And hitch couldn't chest box, even if punchin with monopoly money lol..easy |
You nice? i wouldnt say thats true
Cuz if you sick, than Hitler's cool wit gay black Jews You can play that fool, ya wack that much we all can see Look at is lines, they longer than the ones at the DMV You gon need three MD's, when i flip ,click the trigga He about to be kicked outta this "rap city" like Bigga Tigga You a bitch nigga, so stupid and i love it Last time you was "cockin heat" was a rooster in the oven Ya gimmick is trash, wit raps like that , you meet oblivion fast A shadow could bring Terror to J's wack Caribbean ass.... |
uppin this shit for some votes, lets get it poppin ,ya mean
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ummmmmm? yeah..what the wack emcee above said!!!
lmao...g/lucky pussy... |
we still uppin for votes like black politians....come'on
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Voted For: J.Terror
Vote noyvjrd Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
wtf kinda vote was that????????? thats gettin kicked off
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^^ your still losing anyway you take it bra
kick it off if you want, don't matter to me |
ok, i am, cuz that shit is unexplained like a mofucka....i dont mind losin, buti need a reason ya mean
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i feel what ya saying bra...
please explained votes..by Hitch's request.. |
Voted For: J.Terror
easy for J.Terror J.Terror got nice flow, nice vocab n wordplay.. thas good shit, personals much better so thats what wins this battle... nice structure... Overall- 9/10 cuz u missed a mo hard hittin personal... LOL Hitchock - hmmm too slow... but well you had a nice nameplay at ur closing but you gotta fix-up your structure man... and elevate your vocab... overall - 6/10 V/ J.Terror RTF dawg.... pc battles on my sig. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
uh huh.....................uppin for votes
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This was feedback posted for J.Terror
checkin polls..
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Voted For: J.Terror
You nice? i wouldnt say thats true Cuz if you sick, than Hitler's cool wit gay black Jews ^^^basic,weak,and pure whack You can play that fool, ya wack that much we all can see Look at is lines, they longer than the ones at the DMV ^^Ok You gon need three MD's, when i flip ,click the trigga He about to be kicked outta this "rap city" like Bigga Tigga ^^wat tha hell...dun bring up rap city,this line was whack You a bitch nigga, so stupid and i love it Last time you was "cockin heat" was a rooster in the oven ^^1st line as basic as basic gets,2nd was good Ya gimmick is trash, wit raps like that , you meet oblivion fast A shadow could bring Terror to J's wack Caribbean ass.... ^^^a shadow?..c;mon...whack Ur verse was whack.U can't make a line sayin"U a bitch,so stupuid,and I love it".Can't be dat basic.Gotta be more complex.Flow was choppy.Only decent line was one about long lines. No need to swing jabs,see I already won this battle, even before you signed in But you'll get hit twice like da twin towers,cuz my punches always "bin landin" You Could punch through glass walls,& still not be a breakthrough performance And my punches'll chin "check" dude, even If my nickname was "allow-ants" ^^^Nice Jaw's fist bound for a pounding, teeth shall bow to my finest- cuz I’m hot rip & tear this pussy so many times, he’ll be mo’ limbless than KFC cups ^^Nice And when i say i'm win'N no doubt- i ain't talkin dates with Gwen Steffani Cock thought a hollow tip was a contraceptive, so i put 2 on his head for safety ^^set up was good,punch itself lacked Wreckin frames, ya career'll be hittin mo' brick walls, than test dummies And hitch couldn't chest box, even if punchin with monopoly money ^^Nice This was a nice verse.Every line was decent except for that one after Gwen stefani line.Flow was good,and so was structure.Nice werdplay at begiinning too.U sum it up at end "Easy" Vote-J.Terror(please vote in link below) http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=196589 |
Um im new here so i gotta ask this right quick...
isn't 3-0 a KO? |
only if ya put it in the rules
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aight..i see....yo since this dormant fuck worn't up his loss
I'm Uppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn...dudes on this site is pussy'z |
yo JTerror...........vote in link I posted in my vote........If ya dun do by tommorow....I'ma have to dq my vote.
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uppin this shit, lets get some good votes on this joint
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uppin this shit, lets get some good votes on this joint
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Voted For: J.Terror
wow, one sided... terror gets this for a better structure, flow and mainly for actually using punches and some decent concepts... Hitch, your om's are dop but im not feelin the concepts you use in battles, not your thing really...hit up some tutorials if you wanna learn. NO HATE, RTF in 3 days vs tephlon or this vote gets dq'ed!!!! Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Hitchcock
Hitchcock: Dope verse from you fam. I truly dont know how you are losing, because in my eyes, this should be a KO on your side. Punches were witty, creative, strong, hit hard, and all connected. Personals were there, hit, and were funny as shit. Your best line was the "cockin heat" punch. That was hilarious fam. J. Terror: Decent verse here...Lines are stretched, flow is off, and punches are lacking creativity. you have some decent wordplay, but your punches were not hitting or connecting. Most of your punches were also self glorification, like your opener for example. Thats a huge mistake in a battle. V/ Hitchcock |
me either, but oh well sometimes thats how shit goes around here. uppin for votes...1...
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Voted For: J.Terror
j easily nigga............................................. ........... Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Hitchcock
J.TERROR No need to swing jabs,see I already won this battle, even before you signed in But you'll get hit twice like da twin towers,cuz my punches always "bin landin" ^nice word play, was feelin it 7/10^ You Could punch through glass walls,& still not be a breakthrough performance And my punches'll chin "check" dude, even If my nickname was "allow-ants" ^wasnt feelin this more self glor. 3/10^ Jaw's fist bound for a pounding, teeth shall bow to my finest- cuz I’m hot rip & tear this pussy so many times, he’ll be mo’ limbless than KFC cups ^Nah weak punch....didnt really rhyme 2/10^ And when i say i'm win'N no doubt- i ain't talkin dates with Gwen Steffani Cock thought a hollow tip was a contraceptive, so i put 2 on his head for safety ^Ok vocab but again those words dont rhyme well....and it was more self glor.0/10^ Wreckin frames, ya career'll be hittin mo' brick walls, than test dummies And hitch couldn't chest box, even if punchin with monopoly money ^Good, reference felt it nice closer 4/10^ Hitchcock You nice? i wouldnt say thats true Cuz if you sick, than Hitler's cool wit gay black Jews ^Nice punch i was feelin it good flow 6/10^ You can play that fool, ya wack that much we all can see Look at is lines, they longer than the ones at the DMV ^ooooo,nice dice yo.....good reference 7/10^ You gon need three MD's, when i flip ,click the trigga He about to be kicked outta this "rap city" like Bigga Tigga ^Nice punch...nothing too special4/10^ You a bitch nigga, so stupid and i love it Last time you was "cockin heat" was a rooster in the oven ^Haha nice diss yo like this one...5/10^ Ya gimmick is trash, wit raps like that , you meet oblivion fast A shadow could bring Terror to J's wack Caribbean ass.... ^Awesome closer was fealin it 6/10^ Over all hitchcock came with harder punches that wear more appealing and able to see.J.terror had good wordplay and better structure.But hitchcock took it away with his hard hitting punches in almost everyline....cant beat good punches V/HITCHCOCK RTF SINCE I KINDLY PEEPED YOURS OR THIS VOTE WILL BE REMOVED |
thanks for the honest vote, uppin this joint for more
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thanks for the honest vote, uppin this joint for more
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Voted For: J.Terror
Damn....J.terror got this. I mean...Hitchcock was basic. His shit was basic and his style od dissin was generic. J.Terror murdered his ass. |
^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ok........................uppin for some good jawns
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This was feedback posted for Hitchcock
damn for once i can't decide this might have been the closest of the battles i've seen on RV since i've been her that hasn't been long but yall know wat i mean i was impressed ... good luck to both sry i couldn't make up my mind
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uppin for more votes................................
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uppin for more votes................................
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This was feedback posted for Hitchcock
dag that was a nice ending you could tell you freestyled this
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thanks for the feedback but i need some votes lol uppin for more votes................................ __________________ __________________ |
thanks for the feedback but i need some votes lol
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Voted For: Hitchcock
No need to swing jabs,see I already won this battle, even before you signed in But you'll get hit twice like da twin towers,cuz my punches always "bin landin" ^^^^ight opener played tho......bin landen no You Could punch through glass walls,& still not be a breakthrough performance And my punches'll chin "check" dude, even If my nickname was "allow-ants" ^^^not really different basic punch.... Jaw's fist bound for a pounding, teeth shall bow to my finest- cuz I’m hot rip & tear this pussy so many times, he’ll be mo’ limbless than KFC cups ^^^good punch And when i say i'm win'N no doubt- i ain't talkin dates with Gwen Steffani Cock thought a hollow tip was a contraceptive, so i put 2 on his head for safety ^^^Weak....played Wreckin frames, ya career'll be hittin mo' brick walls, than test dummies And hitch couldn't chest box, even if punchin with monopoly money ^^^good closer..... You nice? i wouldnt say thats true Cuz if you sick, than Hitler's cool wit gay black Jews ^^^ight opener You can play that fool, ya wack that much we all can see Look at is lines, they longer than the ones at the DMV ^^^Nice perssonal You gon need three MD's, when i flip ,click the trigga He about to be kicked outta this "rap city" like Bigga Tigga ^^^ight punch You a bitch nigga, so stupid and i love it Last time you was "cockin heat" was a rooster in the oven ^^^no... Ya gimmick is trash, wit raps like that , you meet oblivion fast A shadow could bring Terror to J's wack Caribbean ass.... Ight closer V/Hitchock only cuz j's punchs were all played i heard them million in one times.....an strectheed no hate but work on ur punchs....hit u had some good lines an some that were played to but u came wit more personals....V/hit RTF in THe Sig or VOte will be removed |
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