real talk.....marvolous jay
 

7 months....47 wins(more than e.c and daubs combined..lol)...but i will be retirin from text...and go back 2 just rappin on beats....but walk with me tho

u couldn't hold me back w/ a rope on my spine..a classic i hope 2 design.
mc's got they own lives but focus on mine..critizin cuzz i be quotin my lines.
starvin 4 a deal?....its nothin i'll get chosen in time..bigger than hov in time.
i write BaRZ 2 get me closer 2 SHyne..u mc's aint neva get close 2 a nine.
so dont talk about gunz....4real im1 of da best dont say i was neva great.
.....king solo thought i was dissin but i was only tryin da help him elevate.
stanza real?..no i can tell a fake...win a couple battle but i gon celebrate.
.......my legacy's 4eva but ppl wanna get away from bars like a jail escape.
upin comin mc's ppl gon say u wack......ur da best just keep tellin ya self.
whuts all dis i OWN U stuff???..........why are rv mc's sellin dem self??????
hey folks......even da guest on dis site laugh cuzz all battle stay close.
why is dat marvolousjay?...............cuzz all da bullshit and hate votes.
either they played or ya lines just suck...dis site most of da time its fuck'd.
u got niggaz sayin u wack but when u call dem out they tryin da duck.
text battlin...i aint gon get signed with puff....0.0 % of u guys is tuff.
got beef with a mc but u dont take it offline stay on here 2 whine & stuff.
u a net mc but u were born da same year dude got kennedy killed.
damm playboy...i see thru ya fakeness u aint a thug just pretend 2 be real.
and a lyricist lounge is 4 clowns ppl makin threads yo can u lend me a mil.im im in studio's..cuzz my music comin out cpu speaker's aint gon get me a deal.


hold up ya'll.....4 all mc's dat really wanna make it dont stay on da net longer than a year it wont get u any better....and datz real talk

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that was straight ill full stop, this had everythin really hot multis, wordplay, structure was on point.
u couldn't hold me back w/ a rope on my spine..a classic i hope 2 design.
mc's got they own lives but focus on mine..critizin cuzz i be quotin my lines.
^^^^^^^likin the opener, big time.
easy 10/10.
rtf on 1 of the battles in my sig.

4sho Fam....goodlooks

word this was dope man... likeing the wordplay flow was dope multied were good no bas spots in here really part from me in the beggining i aint been here no way hear 7 months n i got 16 wins so ya no... klol how come u retiring from text? i aint never heard u spit on a beat either

cuzz dis text shit is corny...its no fun anymore nahmean i will have some tracks up real soon...goodlookin on da feed tho

This was a hot verse........but the spellin shit I didn't like

Like just to make your shit into a sqaure.......you put words like "the" into "da".

I dun like that.Just spell correctly...fuck what it looks like,

What a way to go out

Marv, this was the best shit I've ever seen outta you, and that's real talk.

I understand fully what you're saying, and props on followin ya dream and doing what you gotta do.

Lookin forward to them tracks of yours kid!

yo....i'm feeling this shit 4real fam....you doing it up, i'm ready to hear you behind beats though....maybe we can hook up a collab or some shit....get at me

10/10

okay - okay - okay

Yo Marv Hit up "If I Die Tonite" with some feed

shut DA fuck up fam lol.... look at ya sig okay u spell "done".."dun"....u spell "yours".."urs"...

nuff said stop bein a hipocrit

yeah goodlookin b im tryin da get some joints up dis week....

goodlookin fam...its nothin but real talk

Lol at dissin me, i started here gfx...turned text a few weeks ago...but on the real this was dope man...i guess we aint battlin now, but with the feed:

I actually enjoyed it a lot...had nice vocab good flow and showed a little emotion in some parts.

text battlin...i aint gon get signed with puff....0.0 % of u guys is tuff.
got beef with a mc but u dont take it offline stay on here 2 whine & stuff.

^the truth^

props on this.

no doub this was real talk...dope shit 9.5/10

Yo this piece was hot shit fam. it gotta one of the best pieces i have read in OM.......period
It was as close to flawless as i've ever seen in OM. its a shame you gonna stop doin text after a verse like this.
you should drop this one as an audio piece as well n see how it goes.

Yo fam hit up the piece in the link below:

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=196718

goodlookin fam..i'll peep ya shit

i know we had beef marv but that was a dope OM...real shit was spoke

Lmao.

This shit had no point. You tried to use punches but they were wack like always.

You just suck. Get the fuck off the site already..

dis proves ya lil dumb white ass dont know whut a punchline is...dis is real talk u wouldn't understand it cuzz ur fake....but i aint leavin da site im just not textin on here...dickhead and stop battlin newbs look at all dem battles in ur sig

Lmao. There was NO punches in that peice of shit you call an OM.

Fuck outta here..

ur scared 2 battle me tho lil fuck boy.....take ya dumb white ass somewhere..lmaooooo

ayo i really like ya flow/punches nigga....ya shit is serious, most unique nigga on here rhymin and i'm not jus sayin that cuz imma "new york" head....u rhyme shit in ur own way u dont giva fuck about wat otha niggas gon say about it, u do wat u wanna do

shits real....get at me sonn


STRICKLY BUSINESS

i ryhme shit how its suppose 2 be ryhmed nahmean if u can only make 1 word ryhme in ya bar then ur wack.....but goodlookin on da feed

yeh but most pieces lack creativity....and most punches be lame as fuck, niggas dont set em up right....u set ya shit up a certain way its tite namean

stay up, SB

yeah fam its nothin but lazy mc's on here they wanna make shit ryhme easy...then say they nice and all dat

MArv, hit up one of my open mics bro