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Nice With Wordplay(r.a.w Diss)
HA homie yeh n yo tephlon this 4 you N yo Wack Azz crew!n yo i Set up a battle but was closed i dunno why but it was but yo check!!!!!!!!! :thefinger :gfy::gfy: Your Versez Seem like "Virginz" Complimentin,but yall Not "Tappin-It-Still" Only On "CHRISTMAS" is when yall "RAPPIN-AT-WILL"(wrappin) Verbal (Shoota)<naw Homie Cuz It Dont Even take A -Vest- To "Stop-You" Rip Ya Whole crew,But u Different,Cuz Ima Just HAve to "Drop-You" Intermental,You Weak Son,You Da Main One Thinkin Ya 'Hard-With-Shoota" You Couldnt be "Lucky" With Ya Cloverz,If u Was Playin "Cardz-with-buddah" Changing Ya Name TEPH,Whatcha Think We Aint Gonna "Know-you-Wack" Your Lyrik Are Like a Mattress n Acme,Cuz Im Destined to "Throw-You-Back" Wanna Step To Me Homie?Well Ima "Serve-thi-Kat" lIke a "Chinese-tradition" Iz You lacking Grippin Ma Fame,Or Is It You Just "Like-Deez-Ambition" Well I DOne Battled N Ripped -E-.very-C.hallenger- So Whats "NExt-to-Do"(ec) EC Like "Linus",Cuz ya Lyriks "Stink",Recognized Noone Wanna get "Next-To-You" LINUS=Stinky LiL Dude On Charlie Brown Ima Have You Drop ONya Kneez Quicka,than Prostitutes "Ready-to-get-Paid" Tephlon Similiar to HOEZ,Cuz Everyday He "Steady-getting-Laid" Well Yall"Cant Touch LINEZ KIDZ",Like Children In "Reach-Of-Cocain" yall gon Have to Learn-a-Lesson,but Believe Me "Teaching-Aint-No-Thang" So holla Back at me When Yall RAW,Or Even Think Yall Ready To "Battle-Me" Cuz You Could Have "Dry-Handz" With "grips",N Still Couldnt "HANDLE-ME" HA MOTHERFKAz!DISS TO MOST OF YOU NI99AZ if i missed omeone believe me i will get yall if yall with TEPH'z CREW! AND TEPH FCK YOU!! |
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Why this?....what beef do you have with RAW....and what beef you got with me?..but neways beef with RAW...beef with me....neways...if u want some real feedback.....rhymes were ok but structure wasnt feelin and dont like ~~~~~~~~~ annoyin as hell wen tryna read
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LMAO yeh naw homie i just dissed you cuz u with RAW feel me i said DISS to ( RAW ) n i got to diss all u ni99az!LOL n i 4got to take out ~~~~~But ima edit DEUCEZ!~~
LMAO i didnt diss KHAOZ i 4got but its all good cuz ima make another won soon!AFETR i get out of lock up! |
Yo why u diss us .......
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i dont think this was a prime example of wordplay... i peeped this cuz of the title... im dissapointed with these played concepts and not a WOW line out of the whole batch... i dunno my oppinon on this shouldnt matter tho...
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LOL.................
Unprovoked diss on me an my soldiers...an you dissed E.C Which is in the establishment, not our crew......but damn, you cookin up beef, son....my niggas just gon laugh it up an chomp at it....we WILL clap back. Peace out...you'll be hearin from me soon, fucker. |
=\ Your wordplay was decent. I could say it's probably in the same level with my freestyle with Drakel on Jabba the Hutt. An unprovoked attack...k.
Anyway, some of the lines were played...the whole ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ thing was getting annoying. We can recognize wordplay when we see it, we're not all so inferior we can't understand your complexity. Anyway...7.5/10 |
LMAO n yo lat i heard EC was with RAW,so my Mistake N yo TEPH lol I WANNA HEAR FROM U NI99a THATS WHAT THI WAS FOR!yah n CLAP BACK nigga n you gon HEAR n ECHO!lmao i fcked up onda title wasnt exactly WOrdplay was more of some TIGHT rhymin Scheme n yo Kein Witz!LMAO n yo Kein Witz (smh) with yo 0-4 Record nigga POP OFF
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o_O Boy, I would fucking school you in a topical and you better believe, bitch. You also know the voting on this site is fucking retards, like in topicals people look for STRUCTURE over fucking content. Dumbshit. Sign up for the topical league, and if you have, get enough wins to face me. But you'll have to not suck, because I'm tied for first in 5-0.
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LMAO well guess what DIP-HIT im not a topical head nigga so u can go shove ya topical versez up ya azz for all i care!
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Oh I forgot, you're only good at talking about people behind a computer screen. And you're not even talented at that. I got 3 of those loses from regular battles and 1 of them from the usual BS voting on topicals in RV. You probably got 5 losses from getting schooled in battles. Or maybe they were all from topicals, because people actually know a true art and not just flipping a word around.
Now beefing with you is fun, but stfu. |
.................I Toke all that Time reading This Shit and I wasnt even Mentioned?
You Fuck Ass Lets Battle |
iight this oz my battlez!
1-MIZZ FYRE ( topical battle my first) 2-Barz of Steel ( 2 much in a rush had 5 min) 3-Barz of Steel 4got For a NO SHOW 4-K-Trini ( he had 14 linez n i had 6 n won cuz not having more line n ome fake azz vote) 5-another battle i 4got _______________________--EXPLAINZ HUH MOTHERFKA_______________ |
LMAO (smh) Oh i 4got Stanza was with Raw!well i guezz ima have to make another di doing all memberz n after that battle all yall!AINT I!YEP THINK SO!
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Yo ghost you really gotta realise we gonna clapback like teph said...we got a sick roster....and we gon hit back hard
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LMAO yeh yeh homie n bets believe ima clap right back LMAO n yo yall can do a collab i dont give a fck teph n RAW<LMFAO i aint sweating it!believe me im not worried WTF this is a screen in front of me LMFAO so why am i suppossed to be scared???(smh) teph just mad n Ignorant!so its all good!n yo INtermental homie yall dont got a SICK roster! loL the only good onez iss STANZA n VERBAL himself!so far thats all da good onez i seen! n yo stanza nigga pop off!n i didnt mentionz yo name nigga for several reasonz!n not becuz im scared LMAO becuz i have no reason to be!but i understand u backing up R.A.W but shyt i had to diss yall cuz shoota be thinkin yall dope when yall not!just alright!its the weak onez bringing yall down but DEUCEZ!~
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Yeah man watever u say.....neways our roster is better than LL......loook m-eazy wud get merked by teph, we got immense, sabotage, efecx, stanza.....
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lmfao...i smell beef cookin...
Cant diss fam an get away with that shit... |
This was ghosts, LL got a big one coming your way bitches...
Im cool with a few members, but fuck the rest! |
wanna battle yet breh?
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haha....breh...wannabe crip....hahaha
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me a wanna be crip?
Dont be fuckin stupid im from the UK....fucka gang. |
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I couldn't understand a word of that. You used 'lol' or 'lmao' in every sentence, even when they weren't funny. Seriously, go back to elementary school... |
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=196888
this was all right but let me drop this right here please peep (http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=196888)
Your flow I ignore best go ashore and dock your boat Don’t drop quotes hot just a slop goat with no hardcore hope This nerd freak is like a bird’s beak you eat worms you not dope You fumble a bundle of lyrics and don’t pack fact in your nap sack You Rap whack your crap a snack for me, junk’s not real slap your act Like postponed movies just a host in a zone of newbies, are you on crack? |
Yo man jus stop writin lyrics in other peoples OM's
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uhhhh.... Linus had the blanket.... the stinky kid was Pig-Pen.... just thought you should know... verse was aiight..had it's good points...had it's lows... repeated some shyt...wasn't feelin' that... coupla wordplay lines... ehhh... i say about 5.5 outta 10...but that's just me |
lLMAO yeh LINUS wa the kid with da Blanket N HE STUNK n noone wanted to be by him!n yo EC no beef but i thought u was with R.A.W n yo Get off ma boy DAUBZ ni99a he dont have nothing to do with this! but itss all good cuz LL will rip you ni99az!n i dont got beef with SAB.IMMENE,EFECX,OR SSTANZA but stanza gon be tellin me shyt o im not sure but it all good!DEUCEZ!
( Kein Witz ni99az stfu n stop replying puzzy ) |
Dope diss Ghost favorite line i liked da most
Intermental,You Weak Son,You Da Main One Thinkin Ya 'Hard-With-Shoota" You Couldnt be "Lucky" With Ya Cloverz,If u Was Playin "Cardz-with-buddah" Shit was krazy ...... U know u got skillz I give it 9/10 ~1~ |
oh yeh LINUSS wasnt the one that stink but yall know which character im talking about no need to explain if i say HE ON CHARLIE BROWN!
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.......^^^^ Man you are funny
You barely dissed our crew, We got niggas like Stanza, Khaoz Theory, Kordozar, Chief, Sabotage, all them niggas is gonna come at you an you didnt even diss them..... You cant even own my niggas, so how you gonna come at me? RAW .......Owns....You, ya dun dig my nigga?....fall back. |
lmao OO u think KHAOZ dope??naw i doubt that ni99a! n yeh CHief ,Stanza,Efecx,N Immense are Dope But SHYT best believe if they come @ me ima come right back homie!so like i said NO WORRIEZ!RAW OWNZ ME<naw ni99a cant noone own me!shyt yeah they probably could beat me in TEXT but inda sstreetz onda mic<HA u must be a funny azz comedian Kid cuz shyt i will be damned if they can beat me onda mic!yeh i didnt diss them becuz i dont have beef i should have just put the title to disssing u N intermental and if i didnt know i wouldnt have dissed E.C!but hsyt it all good u da main one i got beef with kid so pop off n CLAP BACK<HA
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LOL.......Pop off n clap back?
shit, nigga....you ain't gotta ask me twice... I just ain't gonna be held responsible for whatever my soldiers bring....they clap they own heat an if they diss you, don't say you didn't ask for it... I'm out, I'ma holla at you tho'....beleve that Peace. |
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