vagita4 vs Daubs
 

Battle Rules:

6 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 06-26-05 at 02:36 PM

Must drop verse in 20 minutes after check in.

vagita4 has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-26-05 02:08 PM.

There ain’t no “flames in the house” just because ya Corpse gets HOME Cooked
Your NO GOOD, you only have a “burning passion” because I Torched ya NOTE Book

Sure I “Script jokes”, but when I Spit though, I’ll “Ink-Serious”
I won’t hesitate to put a “pussy in the dirty” like the Sphinx-Pyramid

Just EXCEPT it, Daubs is Destined A LonelyEnd…
Because when it comes to those of YOUR worth, Depression’s your Only Friend…

easy

yup hes ducking after talking like hes better
muahahaha

Daubs has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-26-05 02:22 PM.

For stupid fucks who need explinations:
Every bar has a personal.

1 wordplay between claps and vest in set up, Z = dragon ball Z/z = sleep
2 name play and look at his sig
3 it / I.T, his IP has "BC" in it.

Dont understand anything else, pm me or dont vote.

Voted For: Daubs

The way you dont get no claps, your safe without a vest-on..
Vags the master of Z.......no wonder his battles get slept-on!!
7/10
Va's git a 4 inch dick, no wonder hes ashamed of his manhood..
And yes your taking over RV.....when we lie down and give up!!
5/10
The way you run cicles around no one, your a broken bracelet..
Call i.t. archeology.........but even your IP knows your ancient!!
6/10

18/30



There ain’t no “flames in the house” just because ya Corpse gets HOME Cooked
Your NO GOOD, you only have a “burning passion” because I Torched ya NOTE Book
8/10
Sure I “Script jokes”, but when I Spit though, I’ll “Ink-Serious”
I won’t hesitate to put a “pussy in the dirty” like the Sphinx-Pyramid
5/10
Just EXCEPT it, Daubs is Destined A LonelyEnd…
Because when it comes to those of YOUR worth, Depression’s your Only Friend…
4/10

17/30

close battle but i wasnt felling vagitas punches but he had good wordplay but daubs came wit some hard personals so he gets my vote

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we need more vote!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Voted For: Daubs

done....

structure and flow gotta say it wuz a tie, lol, punchlines wuz good from boths, personals wuz harder from daubs, I ain't even sure if vagita has one... LOL
but what won the battle was that nameplay from Daubs.... Vagita got more creativity though....

V/ Daubs

RTF dawg...... links on my sig.

Voted For: Daubs

THAT FAKE ASS DRAGONBOY...didnt even spell it right...he needs to up his game a bit

ur name sound like you is just a pervered moron callin ur self vagita....almost sounding like vagina...PS....DRAGONBALL Z ENDED A LONG TIME AGO HOMIE....UR STILL IN THE CHILDHOOD LIFE

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hey ax dogg....you gave to set it up...i aint got no more battle creds

This was feedback posted for Daubs
 

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Criminal....i need for you to battle me and settle this once and for all.....

Voted For: Daubs

The way you dont get no claps, your safe without a vest-on..
Vags the master of Z.......no wonder his battles get slept-on!!
hah, good nameplay here, punch was decent
Va's git a 4 inch dick, no wonder hes ashamed of his manhood..
And yes your taking over RV.....when we lie down and give up!!
decent
The way you run cicles around no one, your a broken bracelet..
Call i.t. archeology.........but even your IP knows your ancient!!
some reason I thought this closer was aight here


There ain’t no “flames in the house” just because ya Corpse gets HOME Cooked
Your NO GOOD, you only have a “burning passion” because I Torched ya NOTE Book
nah, flow is too stretched & the punch was weak
Sure I “Script jokes”, but when I Spit though, I’ll “Ink-Serious”
I won’t hesitate to put a “pussy in the dirty” like the Sphinx-Pyramid
not hard hittin but it was okay
Just EXCEPT it, Daubs is Destined A LonelyEnd…
Because when it comes to those of YOUR worth, Depression’s your Only Friend…
nope

overall.. daubs took this one, punches were harder, each bar was
a personal & had a decent structure.. gita.. work on your punches
add personals in there.. & fix ur flow + structure also.. seriously

upp'in this battle
upp'in this battle
upp'in this battle

Voted For: Daubs

fuck this vagina nigga. But this was landslide. Daubs held it down in everything. flow wise structure wise. word play wit the 4 inch dick shit, nah mean, bitch? <peep the illy rhyme. :cool:

word @ ancient punch that held shit down like no other, nah mean on the scene? word I'm too gangsta.a nyways, shit was nice by daubs. like a 8.5/10 yo fashos hoe, you kno?


Vagita, you came alright my nigga from a bigga woman. Shit didn't flow that great. I only liked your closer. Other shit was kinda meh, eh? so don't be hatin' it's a vote I be makin', i ain't imitatin', nah mean? But fo reel, not a bad verse, the curse could of been worse, nah mean? but aiight shit by you. 7/10

v/Daubsy

RTF or I will delete the fuck outta this vote like it was my baby, and I'm gettin' an abortion :hump:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=197449

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WTF at that gettin dwued, please explain it more fam.

And vag fuck it off dq'in em...i merked o simple as. accept it.

^^^ dont get mad just get explained votes simple dont get outta hand fam its just a battle

word, i aint beefin wit you...we cool...but all my votes keep getting dq'ed in every attle.

Get me.

:nono:............................................ ...........

Voted For: Daubs

daubs got this one easily, not much to explain, came with harder punches, more creativity....witty punches/personals....destroyed this......good job man.....other dude, elevate, word...keep up though, you show potential....

v/daubs, RTF please.

Voted For: Daubs

I don't like Daubs much....

But he definately took this, with eaze..........

Nothin too dope, the opener with the ''Z'' shit is a lil played an uncreative, but the nameplay was good......easily the best concept of the battle.....punches were aight, nothin had me like ''oooh''...but they was straight

Vagita, ya verse for the most part could of been directed at anybody on the shite, thats what i wasnt feelin....there was little too no personals, nameplay, playin off his sig or nothin, punches were alright, ya wordplay was more creative....but the lack of personals an the complex concepts of daubs personals gives him the win.......................

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...d.php?p=2262746

RTF Daubs.,

Voted For: Daubs

Aii This Is what I Think

Daubs

Your flow was Good and that should be constant in anybodies verse and far as your personals go You know that they were on the mark they made a good effect on your oppenent and far as your Punchez They Were jus basically mixed up with yo personals so that made it even more better seeing that Umm You didnt have any good vocab but who does these days LOL your originality was very well.....original LOL I Think That You Take this battle
RTF In any of my battles in my Sig Except the one with Chronic Cancer LOL hes in Yo Crew LOL

Criminal
Your flow was very good in this verse but The concept in your punchez were jus Off A Lil Bit So They didnt have the effect that I think That they shouldve hade I Think Personlly you SHouldve hade more personals in Yo Verse to have a real Good Hit On Him To edge you a vote from someone so that it can be a tip for tap battle and far as your Originality Goes you hade and original Verse no played concept so Yeah You hade a original verse thats good Keep up the good work man You really good No lie :thumbup: