SPuL aka Reckless vs .Murdz.
 

Battle Rules:

10 - 16 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 06-28-05 at 07:25 AM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.

.Murdz. has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-27-05 07:26 AM.

SPuL aka Reckless has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-27-05 11:55 AM.

Voted For: SPuL aka Reckless

Ok Ok Ok

Murdz:

Ok bro, pretty decent verse here. You had some decent punches thrown around in there, personals were there, but were weak, and wordplay was scattered about, but visible. However, I do not like the way that you tend to focus more on your multies than your punches, seeing that punches are what win battles, not multies. You had some played lines and concepts, and some stretched lines in there that kinda fucked up the flow of things in places. Overall, just focus more on consistency and creativity and less on your lulties. Remember, this is a battle, not an Open Mic.


Spulster:

One of the better verses I've seen from you. Punches were there, and were creative and all connected, which is a major plus. Had a couple of played concepts, but most of your punches were nice yo. You killed it with personals too. Had me pissin myself laughing in the first bar at that Drama Queen shit. Funny shit yo. Anyways, punches and personals were fine, structure was fine, but in some spots the flow was a little iffy. However, it was relatively easy to get back on track.

In conclusion, Spul gets my vote for his consistency with hard-hitting punches and personals.

iight werd..... thanks for votin........ good verse Spul

^yea props to you too. nice verse........ upppppin' this.....................

not nice enough! damnit! lol ahh well.. uppin this

Voted For: SPuL aka Reckless


Punches: Tie...neither one of yall had any
Personals: spul had one
Metas: Tie neither one yall had any
FLow: spul
Structre: Spul
Creativity: tie both of you was forcing it

Both yall dropped very wack...murdz u had nothing at all..all your attempts at wordplay was forced...ya punches was jus weak..alot of them was jus statements u didn't really have a flip in the line to make it a punch..you had no personals...ya lines was seriously stretched..it was jus terrible son...no hate whatsoever jus realness..I hope u take my words an use them to elevate.

SPul...u wasn't much better...your opener was a lil forced but decent..an really the only barely decent line in the battle..in a real battle ya opener woulda been some filler shit but here it was the highlight...real sad battle by both....you had a few other personals but they was weak as hell son..u ain't have n punches whatsoever but ya flow an structure was nice..so i voted for you cuz of 1 line an ya flow an structure.

Both yall was disappointing no hate jus realness...1

^aiight coooooooo.... uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp.

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This was feedback posted for .Murdz.
 

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This was feedback posted for SPuL aka Reckless
 

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Voted For: .Murdz.

Flow-Murdz........Flow was nice on both sides.Structure was good on both sides.But Spul......I really don't like that purple color.

Punhces-Murdz.....again,they were good on both sides.But Spul had some that glorifined and were basic or didn't make sence.I mean.....I didn't like that one about Black Queen

Personal-Spul....he ripped on his name and one about postin an ass.Murdz had generic punches tha cxould be directed ti almost anyone(but still hit hard)

Multis-Easily Murdz.....too much one syllable rhyming by Spul.

Vocab.-Murdz.....Spul didn't have any words that would be placed on an high school test.

Originality-Both of you had original concepts and punches.

Good battle

Vote-Murdz

This was feedback posted for SPuL aka Reckless
 

srry spul cant vote on dis one cus Murdz sumwat crew i guess give me another battle link n ill vote on dat one instead

ohh naa BQ dw were not in da same crew, its all gud! ahh well to late now!

^she prolly meant y'all were tight or somethin' iunno....... but uppin'....................

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Voted For: SPuL aka Reckless

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return da vote here spul or my vote will be removed

Your vision must be fucked, cuz, man, you ain't the best, see?
You kno there's somethin' wrong wit you, when you think DQ's sexy
^^^
Nice personal

We had beef, I don't want peace, I wanna lay you dead on the lawn
Don't want bygones to be bygones, man, I jus want YOU to be gone
^^
not feeling it

In MM you didn't post your pic, instead you posted up a lass
But then again, I guess you did, cuz we all kno that you're an ass
^^
nyce personal, good punch in da second line 2

You think you gon kill me? Nah, man, you'll hit the burner
Jus look at his name, he catches "z's" before he finish "murd"er
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good nameplay, really dope bar

The only time you on a decent line, is on the phone
You a ladies man, but "tweety's" the only "chick" you'll ever own
^^^g
good personal agaiun, dope stuff

Like I got 3 legs, man, I got a leg-up on this race
You type in the smallest font, but your lines don't even fit in the whole space
^^ill
da punch wuz a killa

"don't fuck wit the best or fam," I'm killin' melons
You don't want crew beef, so don't touch me, I'ma "Livin' Legend"
You're tryin' to make a run at me, but like your mom, you "loose"
Your run, we "nose" is short... like Pinnochio saying truth
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pretty weak 2 barz here spul, da livin legend shit wuz gay, da closer wuz arite, culd of been worded betta

Nyce verse, da personalz wuz flawless, & da most part ur punchez killed it


I'm known as the mc killer; u wouldn't have a shot staying on Pace with me being Reggie Miller
Each line will kill ya; my rhymes r like 'un-stuffed turkey' the way you aint getting any filler
^^^ye it wuz nyce, but itz 2 stretched, when u eventually get 2 da point of da rhymez, da flow iz not there cu of it bein stretched

Ur bout as real as cartoons so wise up n don't battle a guy that's known to rhyme tough
Cause I'll have u walk in 'rooms with ceiling clocks' just to prove that ur 'times up'
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nyce second line, but stop stretching ur shit

Let the fighting erupt; kid must be 'delivering testicles', cause he's 'driving' me 'nuts'
I'll 'carve out your insides' just to prove that when battling me ur 'deprived of guts'
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1st line wuz dope, second wuznt


You can't survive the cuts; this battles like 'illiterate' 'jail mates'; there's no 'con-test'
Your scripts read like they were revived from the recycling bin; they aren't fresh
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again 1st line wuz syck, but da second wuznt

I'm the best; and you beating me is like paraplegics claiming to need an arms rest
I'm handing u this L; listen; in votes u'll be down like being in the giving head position
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weakest bar from u

I'll 'beat you with a stick' and I don't mean 'racing' you with 'manual transmission'
bitch i Dissed you on RapVerse while u just stayed silent in the room and mumbled *
^^didnt rhyme & it wuz a weak personal anyway

Let me see u try n stand to me when the hammer has ur knees crushed n crumbled
This illiterate shit, eliminates any signs of intellect with that stupid name
Tough to figure out like a rubrics' claim, you couldn’t be on point with cupid's aim **
^^^nyce closer

U fucked da verse up & had and odd amount of linez? & ur shit wuz 2 stretched...but it wuz a decent verse, juz remove uneccessary wordz frum ur verse

Wordplay=Murdz
Personalz=Spul
Punchez=spul
Structure=spul
Mettas=Murdz

Spul had da overral better verse cuz it wasnt stretched & da punches and personalz wuz right on point

return da vote in da link at da top ov diz post spul

Voted For: SPuL aka Reckless

aight.....

murdz-you had a lotta played concepts and lame wordplay....stretched lines....basically ya punches werent hiitten hard..

spul-pretty much ya intro won it for you i felt that was really the only decent punch/personal in this battle......so for having the only good punch i vote spul

v/spul

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Voted For: SPuL aka Reckless

OK 1st off
murd ya 1st 2 bars were straight self glorify
which is a no no in Rv battles
your punches either really lacked personals or were pre written or both
dontr get me worng some punches were nice but coulda been directed at anybody
overall pretty decent verse
Spul
links are cool but people hate clicking em
nice use of them in this case
good punches nice personals
closer was weak,
overall enuff to take the vic
murd dont DQ this, someone else WILL vote Spul anyway