CherryBluntZ vs Alk3m1st
 

Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 30

Check in by: 06-28-05 at 06:43 AM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

Alk3m1st has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-27-05 11:33 PM.

CherryBluntZ has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-27-05 11:48 PM.

Like novacane I react and begin to numb shit and let my gun spit
This 'Goof Troop' is gonna crack up when he tastes Dis-knee (disney)
Make his piss bleed by stompin on this pricks kid knees
I didn’t bite shit you prewrite spits that’s obviously how you be winnin
Your unoriginal, not creative at all you just like every other rapper
Nobody’s hearin you ya like a bird squakin, want another cracker?
You think you takin the win HAHAHA, shit no you just a sick joke
You think ya so hard but facin me made ya soft like ya dick broke
You got cooked wit deez hot rhymes, my lyrics was the oven
Your nuthin I just beat your fuckin ass like a jealous husband

Aight I Duno How This Works...So Forgive Me If Ive Done Something Wrong...

*5 Bars*
Heres My Verse:

See Alk3m1st A Monsta Fam, Watch The Hammer Blam, And Turn Ya Chest In Ta Mush Like CHERRY Jam,
Readin My Shit, Will Destroy Ya RAM, And Make Ya Pictures Go Blurry If U Gotta Cam...1
I Got The Gat Gripped, Tips Locked Loaded N Ready, Lets See How Ya Stomach Digest Food When Ya Abs Ripped,
My Hat To The Side Tipped, Leave "Cherry" Left Wet, Thats What I Call Body Clipped...2
I Stay Steady Tape The Mack, Blow Shots Thru Ya Spine So U Need To Tape Ya Back,
I Got To Much Dough, So I Need To Tape The Stack, And U Would Think U Were Fresh From The East, The Way I Wrapped Ya Head Like Dudes In Iraq...3
Its Easy To See, Alk3m!st Stays On The Ball Like Arobics,And I'll Have U Running Away Like U Were Bein Chased By HomoPhobics,
U A Fag Nigga, Go Play In Traffic Or Eat Some Dicks, Cuz Puttin On A Wig And Bra Is The Closest U Gettin To Chicks...4
Alk3m1st Will Crack Ya Back, For Talkin Dat Lingo, Slap U Constantly Till U Admit U Are A Bimbo,
My Verses Been Low, But Now Im Out To "Bend Backs" Like Bitches Doin Tha Limbo

Ur Up Cherry
PS. If U Dont Understand My Verse...Dont Vote!
3asy

i can tell this ones gunna be close..........uppin for feedbaq

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Yo We Need Votes Stop Sleepin Niggas Its Daylight Time!!!

Yo Can Yall Just Vote So This Can Get Shut Down, It Aint Dat Hard, Read, Pick, Vote, Done

Damn

Voted For: Alk3m1st

alk had tha complexity originality vocab, punches OH's N Ahw's Tha Metta's n iigh flow...Cherry Had The Flow cuz it was easier to flow wit and had the wordplay good battle but dis goes ta alk

Voted For: Alk3m1st

iight tight battle pretty good but Alk3mist took this one he came with strong punches and he was original.

Fav Line from Alk3mist was......
I Got To Much Dough, So I Need To Tape The Stack, And U Would Think U Were Fresh From The East, The Way I Wrapped Ya Head Like Dudes In Iraq...3
[That had me like DAMN!!!!!]

CherryBluntz you came kind of simple and your punches wasn't hitting to hard but you did good

Fav line was........
Your unoriginal, not creative at all you just like every other rapper
Nobody’s hearin you ya like a bird squakin, want another cracker?

But yall both keep doing yall thing thats my vote!

Voted For: CherryBluntZ

you had more punches an your verse was easier to follow. the eother guy had potential but it threw me off
g/k rtf to my battle sig honestly they need to be closed

Voted For: CherryBluntZ

cherry gets this beacuse i could actually read her verse....he/she had a good rhyme scheme decent punches, aight metas....but overall solid verse....



alk-horrible rhyme scheme....played punches, stretched lines....it was a blahh verse.....you need to get a better rhyme scheme and get more creative and witty punches

v/cherry for a better verse

This was feedback posted for Alk3m1st
 

man you ripped this guy i would vote but it would look like a hate vote

This was feedback posted for Alk3m1st
 

"And I'll Have U Running Away Like U Were Bein Chased By HomoPhobics,"

That line dont make anysense case homophobics are people scared of gays.................................

Other than that tight battle

Voted For: CherryBluntZ

Like novacane I react and begin to numb shit and let my gun spit
This 'Goof Troop' is gonna crack up when he tastes Dis-knee (disney)
vs.
nothin
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and that one bar wasn't worded good at all but good attempt at wordplay
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and yo alk.. if u wanna see how shits done on this site check out the top ten punches here>>> http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=232646

Voted For: CherryBluntZ

Like novacane I react and begin to numb shit and let my gun spit
This 'Goof Troop' is gonna crack up when he tastes Dis-knee (disney)
ok second line but didn't rhyme, and gunplay is still wak and uncreative in text.

Make his piss bleed by stompin on this pricks kid knees
I didn’t bite shit you prewrite spits that’s obviously how you be winnin
didn't rhyme
Your unoriginal, not creative at all you just like every other rapper
Nobody’s hearin you ya like a bird squakin, want another cracker?
Wak but atleast you atempted to rhyme
You think you takin the win HAHAHA, shit no you just a sick joke
You think ya so hard but facin me made ya soft like ya dick broke
Poor punch but a punch nonetheless

You got cooked wit deez hot rhymes, my lyrics was the oven
Your nuthin I just beat your fuckin ass like a jealous husband
an atempt at a punch

Cherry, you getting a bit better. just need to get more into the rap thing and figuer out whats the difference between a punch written with a decent structure and a punch writen randomly and all over the place. keep elevating man.


See Alk3m1st A Monsta Fam, Watch The Hammer Blam, And Turn Ya Chest In Ta Mush Like CHERRY Jam,
Readin My Shit, Will Destroy Ya RAM, And Make Ya Pictures Go Blurry If U Gotta Cam...1
I Got The Gat Gripped, Tips Locked Loaded N Ready, Lets See How Ya Stomach Digest Food When Ya Abs Ripped,
My Hat To The Side Tipped, Leave "Cherry" Left Wet, Thats What I Call Body Clipped...2
I Stay Steady Tape The Mack, Blow Shots Thru Ya Spine So U Need To Tape Ya Back,
I Got To Much Dough, So I Need To Tape The Stack, And U Would Think U Were Fresh From The East, The Way I Wrapped Ya Head Like Dudes In Iraq...3
Its Easy To See, Alk3m!st Stays On The Ball Like Arobics,And I'll Have U Running Away Like U Were Bein Chased By HomoPhobics,
U A Fag Nigga, Go Play In Traffic Or Eat Some Dicks, Cuz Puttin On A Wig And Bra Is The Closest U Gettin To Chicks...4
Alk3m1st Will Crack Ya Back, For Talkin Dat Lingo, Slap U Constantly Till U Admit U Are A Bimbo,
My Verses Been Low, But Now Im Out To "Bend Backs" Like Bitches Doin Tha Limbo

wak. I dont even know where your lines end and start at really so I couldn't break this down properly. you should really look at some of the better battles on the site or peep out the tutorials and see what a verse should look like.

V/Cherrybluntz very hesitantly. return the favor with an honest vote on any battle you may see me in. peace.

Voted For: CherryBluntZ

ok both of you need to improve your structure
cherries lines didnt match up and alkemists lines wereee waaaaaaaay too long
lyrically you both had metaphores which i liked you both had played lines and neither of you had personals
so my vote is coming down to the flow i guess so imma give it to cherry