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sinkerdechevin vs K-Trini
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6 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No Bullshit No Hate Minimum posts to vote: 40 Check in by: 06-29-05 at 02:16 AM Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in. |
sinkerdechevin has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-29-05 01:48 AM.
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aight, lets go hoe....
bitch outta your league...step to the plate but its a K ya see cause im throwing 3 strikes, one for each of his nis surrounded by water, still cant coast away with this, im sure of that cause isle snub k away faster than covering trinidad on the map dont get all high strung about winning, cause somewhere ya got tangled its sad...tri still couldn't cut it if he looked from every angle _____________________________ i dont want my verse looking all newbish with '..'...'...' everywhere, so im explaining it...and some people just dont get shit 1st bar - name: 'K'...Tri = three....nis = knees 2nd bar - trinidad is an island.... 3rd bar - high strung = excited.....tri - angle should be pretty easy, dont vote if you dont get it, thank you. |
K-Trini has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-29-05 01:55 AM.
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Cheven...swears he owns me,but tried to duck this battle &U a "cow-werd",way ya always get merked in RV's cattle Faggot labeled me a newbie and herb........but he d/r's them & This fag couldn't spit think if masticated reguriated phylem(pronounced-flem) I'd use my best against you,but dat'd just be a waste Only water can like your rhymes cause it got no taste Bring ya prewritten verse bitch :shoot: |
lmlo!!! at pre-written verse....i misinterpreted the due limits, and wrote a verse because i thought we'd battle regardless....
but anyways, that was a fire closer man....shit....lets get some votes |
chea..........votes......all my battles get slept on for some reason.I dun know if RV just has something aginst me or it's coincidence.
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Voted For: K-Trini
v/ K-Trini.....simply hit him harder in every sense of the concept.... bitch outta your league...step to the plate but its a K ya see cause im throwing 3 strikes, one for each of his nis ^bars are susposed to rhyme right?....and no is wasnt the way i read it...you had the last bar rhyming..... bliss, work on ya structure and get better concepts going...ya whole nameplay on KTrini was wack.... [catagories go here]...K-Trini K-Trini....up ya content, too...i wasnt feeling it much, but you did a lot better than bliss |
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you = faggot i said if you dont get it, dont vote |
and tell me how he had better concepts?
also better structure...my shit flowed nice.....his second bar was a forced verbal shit house and yes, that bar does rhyme, if you read what i was getting at... and yes, i fuckin want to battle you now |
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Voted For: K-Trini
ok nice battle but cant believe that k-trini came hard this time she had a nice line and wordplay and some good vcab but still need to improve bliss u needed to ahve a better flow and u need to work on da delivery to ur punches so they can pack more damage but both did a good job but i felt that k-trini did a better one by brigin more pact to the punches but still gopod my vote goes to k-trini Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Voted For: sinkerdechevin
aiight lets see what goes down in this bitch nigga, nah mean? K-trini, you didn't come that hard. Shit there were like no punches nigga. Your flow was ok. But get better wit the punches. Add wit and all that shit. nah mean? Bliss, you came dope wit the wordplay nigga. That opener had me sayin' "Nigga wtf? that's dope nigga". Shit was gangsta. Closer was illy too yo. I was feelin' this shit. word. gangsta v/Bliss word :shoot: Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: K-Trini
Bliss - your verse had better punches once you read over it a few times, you had some gud personals, where as trini had none at all!, your flow was good, vocabulary needs a bit of improving but its all gud,wordplay was sick. structure was good, overall i think the personals and wordplay won u this battle trini - your verse had more vocabulary, punches were easier to read, but once u understand Bliss's he killed you, you didnt use punches or barley any word play... plus why do u always change ur structre and flow in ur battles it doesnt make sence, looks a bit suspicious! vote / bliss! Vote switched |
wat ya mean.......might think I bite??...................
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ok, this is fucking gay man......enough of these shit votes
this is gay, no one is getting my wordplay |
Voted For: K-Trini
Bliss bitch outta your league...step to the plate but its a K ya see cause im throwing 3 strikes, one for each of his nis ..LOL That Sucked man No Lie and no Hate but It was to Thought of it seemed way "Into it" surrounded by water, still cant coast away with this, im sure of that cause isle snub k away faster than covering trinidad on the map /........Weak......... dont get all high strung about winning, cause somewhere ya got tangled its sad...tri still couldn't cut it if he looked from every angle ......The wordplay HAd no back support what was the point of sayin Tri angle with no punch to it ? ....weak/ Overall man i think That u need to work on Supporting hard punche with good wordplay and good wordplay with hard punchez your verse was overall weak and You need to work on that man Trini Cheven...swears he owns me,but tried to duck this battle &U a "cow-werd",way ya always get merked in RV's cattle ...aii... Faggot labeled me a newbie and herb........but he d/r's them & This fag couldn't spit think if masticated reguriated phylem(pronounced-flem) ...Good... I'd use my best against you,but dat'd just be a waste Only water can like your rhymes cause it got no taste ....Aii... Oevarll You didnt do half bad you did good enough to take this battle and that why you get my vote so m v/ Trini |
Voted For: sinkerdechevin
bliss won this easily... like damn...easily.... Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Voted For: sinkerdechevin
K-Trini Cheven...swears he owns me,but tried to duck this battle &U a "cow-werd",way ya always get merked in RV's cattle Not feelin... Faggot labeled me a newbie and herb........but he d/r's them & This fag couldn't spit think if masticated reguriated phylem(pronounced-flem) Played Concept I'd use my best against you,but dat'd just be a waste Only water can like your rhymes cause it got no taste Didn't hit at all... blisss bitch outta your league...step to the plate but its a K ya see cause im throwing 3 strikes, one for each of his nis Good wordplay...knees...nis in his name..weerd surrounded by water, still cant coast away with this, im sure of that cause isle snub k away faster than covering trinidad on the map Dope play off his name... dont get all high strung about winning, cause somewhere ya got tangled its sad...tri still couldn't cut it if he looked from every angle Triangle...haha word... This was an easy one sided battle... Vote: blisss |
Voted For: sinkerdechevin
bitch outta your league...step to the plate but its a K ya see cause im throwing 3 strikes, one for each of his nis hah.. this punch was aight surrounded by water, still cant coast away with this, im sure of that cause isle snub k away faster than covering trinidad on the map coo punch dont get all high strung about winning, cause somewhere ya got tangled its sad...tri still couldn't cut it if he looked from every angle weak closer Cheven...swears he owns me,but tried to duck this battle &U a "cow-werd",way ya always get merked in RV's cattle decent opener Faggot labeled me a newbie and herb........but he d/r's them & This fag couldn't spit think if masticated reguriated phylem(pronounced-flem) wack I'd use my best against you,but dat'd just be a waste Only water can like your rhymes cause it got no taste not really feelin this punch overall this battle was pretty-much 1-sided.. bliss had the harder punches in this battle trini ur punches were okay, but not hard enuff to actually get my vote here though Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Voted For: K-Trini
bliss - punches werent that hard, structure needs work & ur flow needs improving.. but work on ur punches though.. k-trini- ur punches weren't that hard hittin either.. structure was far too-strectched & the flow lack'd here.. elevate more both but trini just gets it. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
^ fuck you herb, lets battle, right now
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