criminal vs M.C.
 

Battle Rules:

Quick 6 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 06-29-05 at 01:56 PM

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M.C. has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-29-05 01:17 PM.

Weak punches is all you carry, there not going to hit
“This is only the beginning,”..
..but you don’t have nothing to begin with*
But, fucka of beating, I’ll literally smash this dude
If this verse is wack..
..then you actually have nothing to lose
Told me to bring my a-game, yeah, but you won’t bring shit*
You have no skillz, and this is why someone needs to..


*“This is only the beginning” = in his sig
*He told me to bring my a-game

criminal has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-29-05 01:38 PM.

Most who are REAL feel my flow, but I always Knew-More-Cowards-Doubted-It * M.C *
but I’ll STILL “put ya lights out” on a larger scale than “New-York-Power-Outages”!

ya skills a joke better known as a FAGGOT clowns, this Wacky-Coward’s-Bars-is-Girly
Whether you planned on “getting messed up” or not, Happy-Hour’s-Startin-EARLY!

It’s Insane I Became-Rap's-New-Don…
maybe cuz,
the only time ya “text could SCAR me forever” is if i got your Name-TATTOO’D-ON!!!...

blah i had 10 but then notice u only ask for 6 lines

uppin this.....

uppin this.....

Voted For: criminal

this battle was weak as hell for real. but i'm leave my opinion anyway. both of you need to work on all aspects of your lyrical styles for real. without a shadow of a doubt.
but criminal actually took this one.
don't get it twisted you both had really....really wack verses but criminal managed to pull through this battle.
this verse lacked hard hitting punches, decent vocab, and there was seriously weak wordplay from him. but this was still better than the quality-less verse from MC.
i couldn't find any decent aspect about his rhyme and on top of that his structure was really off.
In fact this is the main thing that swung my favour in criminals way cos content wise, neither of you had winning material.
Anyway. Criminal had the very slightly better verse so he gets this win.

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Voted For: criminal

Aii

Criminal

U did Aii man Yor structure threw your flow out the windown man And thats what u really need to work on Really abd and it makes your style look newbish and rookiesh if you ask me and I Think That you Need to try to Mix up Your wordplay and punchez a lil better than you did in this battle Oevrall But I Think That you do Take this battle :)

MC

You dropped pretty weak and pretty quick small ine and Uneven structure and you didnt supply hard hitting punchez all you had was an aii concept which will not help you win a bttle these days .....So You dont take this battle bud srry

i bet mc had our votes taken of cos he can't accept that he lost this battle.
doin shit like thats the best way of making sure your battles never get looked at or voted on by anyone.

Voted For: M.C.

meh

mc got this one, he had witty punches, a nice personal and an okay personal....and his was creative/funny...quote was pretty aight, criminal, i dunno...you had okay concepts, but nothing really that great....you're wording and vocab was a little off, and your attempts at multi punches just made your punches sound whack....like the second bar came off really stupid....so you need to elevate wording of punches....you know how to form punches, you had decent punches, just nothing stood out cause your wordplay sucked.....word,

v/MC....RTF in the link in my sig

what are u fuckin talkin bout? ..shit was like that..
..since u whine so much.. battle me then, or fuck off

^^^ oo-its on mother fucker peep open mic for ya diss and fuck undestructable emcees EZ!!!!

lol.. that's y u have no crew? stfu.. dbz-faggot..

uppin this battle

upp'in this battle for more votes and M.C staple ya lips shut plez....

Voted For: criminal

jus a quick voyte for for a quick battle...........
criminal took the win has he had everything better than emcee........
the only thing mc came better with was structure......

both need a lot of practice though.......

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upp'in this battle for more votes plez............

shaddup.. ya weak rhymes

its soopuse to be 3-1 but someone keep getting the voted deleted.....
so shut ya weak ass up

Voted For: M.C.

MC won he jus too dope. the nigga on fire like Lloyd Banks wit them lines. I be feeelin' him like he was a fine lady yo. too much. But those rhymes were pretty tight. criminal you were pretty good too but noit good neough. work on structure my nigga from a bigga figure. but fashos MC got this. pc out

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uppin this shit

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uppin this old ish

upp'in to end this madness that m.c cused by deleting all my votes

Voted For: criminal

yo i know those were quick ones and criminals was better man he had some good punches for a quick battle man nice job both of u
rtf by dropping a honest vote at my battle vs hotgirl06

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upp'int o end this battle mang............................

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upp'in this battle for more votes plez............

uppin

WILL RETURN DA FAVOR HONESTLY...............

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upp'in this battle plez explain ya vote or this bitch M.C will get it deleted

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Voted For: criminal

Structure-Both had poorly presented structures, this is a problem simply becuz the reader needs to create a flow but that is almost impossible with very poor structure.

Vocab-I see no vocab in this battle what so ever, how ever this would not be an issue if both verses were intacted with good punches and fufilling multis.......

Multis-Both also lacked multis on both sides, this is good to have them so it will enhnace ur flow...and make it more enjoyable to read....both up on ur multis....got a lot of elevation to do

Personals-Both had good personals but CRIMINALs personals were the most effective and noticeable.M.C. had ok personals but i wasnt feeling that they were presented in a way that could be respected.

Punches-Clear to see that criminal had the more enhnaced punches that hit hard, M.C. u need to up on ur whole verse present it with fresh punches.......

Originality-Criminal took this with his straight up fresh punches and personals....couldnt give the vote to anyone else.


v/criminal


rtf in 3 days in my sig links or this vote will be dqd

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check-in pollz........................................

Voted For: M.C.

M.C. - You had an iight flow, punches were decent.

Best Line - But, fucka of beating, I’ll literally smash this dude
If this verse is wack..
..then you actually have nothing to lose

Worst Line - Weak punches is all you carry, there not going to hit
“This is only the beginning,”..
..but you don’t have nothing to begin with*

criminal - You had iight flow, some attempts at wordplay, and ok punches.

Best Line - It’s Insane I Became-Rap's-New-Don…
maybe cuz,
the only time ya “text could SCAR me forever” is if i got your Name-TATTOO’D-ON!!!...

Worst Line - Most who are REAL feel my flow, but I always Knew-More-Cowards-Doubted-It * M.C *
but I’ll STILL “put ya lights out” on a larger scale than “New-York-Power-Outages”!

OVERALL - This was a close battle but I have to give my vote to M.C. He had some iight wordplay, and some decent punches. Criminal your punches wernt all that great and your wordplay was weak.

Vote - M.C

RTF in SIG