un-fuck-widable vs {D.N.A.}
 

Battle Rules:

10 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

simple battle but bring da heat witcha...!!!...

Minimum posts to vote: 75

Check in by: 07-02-05 at 02:03 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

un-fuck-widable has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-29-05 02:07 PM.

ima spit now kk?




Bitch, You Couldn't Cum Fresh, If You Stored Ya Sperm In A "Zip-Lock"
DNA Could Have A Dragon'z Throat And He Still Wouldn't "Spit-Hot"
Kid You Just Shyt Outta Luck, Thinkin' That You Can "Defeat-Me"
I'd Cut Out Yah Vocal Cordz, Just So You Could "Speak-Free"

It'z Like I Got You Upside-Down, By Tha Way, You "Facin-Defeat"
You Could Have A Miami Jersey On And You Still Wouldn't "Throwback-Heat"
I'm Droppin' Strate Flamez And Ima Leave You Verbally "Scortched"
You Remind Of Midgetz On Bikez, Kuz Your Verse Iz "Riding-Short"

Kid, You Alwayz Missin' Yah Punch, So Ima Rename You, "Kool-Aidz-Wife"
I'll Rip Out Yah Heart, Touch It To Mah Cock, Even Tho U Have Enough "Dick-In-Yah-Life"
You Got No Flow, And All Of Yah Shyt "Just-Missed"
Just Forfiet, You Couldn't Win Thiz Shyt, Even If Thiz Battle "Waz-Fixed"

I Use Thiz Keyboard Az A Weapon, And Make You "Fold-In-Secondz"
Kid, Don't Eva "Swallow-Mah-Lyricz" Or You'll Be Murdered By "Ur-Own-Intensionz"
I Can Tell By Yah Flow, That You Came Wit Yah "Best-Wieght"
I Don't Know Where You Live, But Im Sure I Just Increased Tha "Death-Rate"

ypu yup yo u spit dogg

{D.N.A.} has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-29-05 02:12 PM.

AYO

EXPLAIN ya NAME cuz I Picture thiz pussy lozin, vicious wit verbal contusions/
That are Proven, to leave ya Fucked up like Vaginal Bruisin/
Im not gone f*ck witcha, im gone Temp ya before i Finish ya till ya Temperature rise into a integer/
You New to da Community So let me Greet you wit Hospitality/
Grab for Gravity, cuz when i Commence wit Assault and {Battery} its no Charge Thatz gone (Hole) me like a Lunar Cavity/
The ODDZ are stacked Against ya like opposite of da Even Page, im Breavin Aidz, just to Spit sick on you when i Seed ya Grave/
Call me Tyson and Believe my Name, I need a Fight, Peep da Light cuz itz no way in Hell you can See da {Mike}/
You Kiddin Me? Kid Please Im the Definition of Disease when it comez ta Spittin Liquidz/
Im sendin ya ta Meet da Grim One, So ill make sure ya {D.N.A} has no Traces for findin Symptomz/

holla back im gettin to my old potential...
and good luckkk..

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Bitch, You Couldn't Cum Fresh, If You Stored Ya Sperm In A "Zip-Lock"
DNA Could Have A Dragon'z Throat And He Still Wouldn't "Spit-Hot"
Kid You Just Shyt Outta Luck, Thinkin' That You Can "Defeat-Me"
I'd Cut Out Yah Vocal Cordz, Just So You Could "Speak-Free"

It'z Like I Got You Upside-Down, By Tha Way, You "Facin-Defeat"
You Could Have A Miami Jersey On And You Still Wouldn't "Throwback-Heat"
I'm Droppin' Strate Flamez And Ima Leave You Verbally "Scortched"
You Remind Of Midgetz On Bikez, Kuz Your Verse Iz "Riding-Short"

Kid, You Alwayz Missin' Yah Punch, So Ima Rename You, "Kool-Aidz-Wife"
I'll Rip Out Yah Heart, Touch It To Mah Cock, Even Tho U Have Enough "Dick-In-Yah-Life"
You Got No Flow, And All Of Yah Shyt "Just-Missed"
Just Forfiet, You Couldn't Win Thiz Shyt, Even If Thiz Battle "Waz-Fixed"

I Use Thiz Keyboard Az A Weapon, And Make You "Fold-In-Secondz"
Kid, Don't Eva "Swallow-Mah-Lyricz" Or You'll Be Murdered By "Ur-Own-Intensionz"
I Can Tell By Yah Flow, That You Came Wit Yah "Best-Wieght"
I Don't Know Where You Live, But Im Sure I Just Increased Tha "Death-Rate"
there again

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Voted For: un-fuck-widable

EXPLAIN ya NAME cuz I Picture thiz pussy lozin, vicious wit verbal contusions/
That are Proven, to leave ya Fucked up like Vaginal Bruisin/
^^sg.....2/10
Im not gone f*ck witcha, im gone Temp ya before i Finish ya till ya Temperature rise into a integer/
^^^NO.....2/10
You New to da Community So let me Greet you wit Hospitality/
Grab for Gravity, cuz when i Commence wit Assault and {Battery} its no Charge Thatz gone (Hole) me like a Lunar Cavity/
^^^NAH.....2/10
The ODDZ are stacked Against ya like opposite of da Even Page, im Breavin Aidz, just to Spit sick on you when i Seed ya Grave/
Call me Tyson and Believe my Name, I need a Fight, Peep da Light cuz itz no way in Hell you can See da {Mike}/
^^A lil uncreative......3/10
You Kiddin Me? Kid Please Im the Definition of Disease when it comez ta Spittin Liquidz/
Im sendin ya ta Meet da Grim One, So ill make sure ya {D.N.A} has no Traces for findin Symptomz/
^^^NO.....3/10

Too much gangsta talk.Most of your shit spoke about killin him.Shorten your lines up a bit.Structure your verse better so it allows for an easier reas.But seriously work on ur punches.

Bitch, You Couldn't Cum Fresh, If You Stored Ya Sperm In A "Zip-Lock"
DNA Could Have A Dragon'z Throat And He Still Wouldn't "Spit-Hot"
^^played.......3/10
Kid You Just Shyt Outta Luck, Thinkin' That You Can "Defeat-Me"
I'd Cut Out Yah Vocal Cordz, Just So You Could "Speak-Free"
^^OK....5/10
It'z Like I Got You Upside-Down, By Tha Way, You "Facin-Defeat"
You Could Have A Miami Jersey On And You Still Wouldn't "Throwback-Heat"
^^1st line hear was repeat of the other one.....3/10
I'm Droppin' Strate Flamez And Ima Leave You Verbally "Scortched"
You Remind Of Midgetz On Bikez, Kuz Your Verse Iz "Riding-Short"
^^^midget lines are played
Kid, You Alwayz Missin' Yah Punch, So Ima Rename You, "Kool-Aidz-Wife"
I'll Rip Out Yah Heart, Touch It To Mah Cock, Even Tho U Have Enough "Dick-In-Yah-Life"
^^Nice multi but punch missed....4/10
You Got No Flow, And All Of Yah Shyt "Just-Missed"
Just Forfiet, You Couldn't Win Thiz Shyt, Even If Thiz Battle "Waz-Fixed"
^^OK.....5/10
I Use Thiz Keyboard Az A Weapon, And Make You "Fold-In-Secondz"
Kid, Don't Eva "Swallow-Mah-Lyricz" Or You'll Be Murdered By "Ur-Own-Intensionz"
^^OK....5/10
I Can Tell By Yah Flow, That You Came Wit Yah "Best-Wieght"
I Don't Know Where You Live, But Im Sure I Just Increased Tha "Death-Rate"
^^^Self glorifying.....3/10

Well you had one bar that self gloriufied.And a ton of played out punches.Wat separated you from DNA was that you actually had punches and less gangster talk.Just work on coming up with fresh concepts.

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Voted For: un-fuck-widable

good battle. dang, i almost didnt wanna vote on this shit it was o good. ya both had sick ass puchlines and wordplay, but i gotta give this to Un. that closer was alot better plus his flow was tighter. i must say thought that DNA had multies agianst you, but i was feeling Un's punchlines better that DNA.

i dont do that rapperz thing, but just return the favor, ty ^^^^

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This was feedback posted for un-fuck-widable
 

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Voted For: un-fuck-widable

Unfuckwiddable gets this due to him using better punches.

When i first read his verse it seemed to played to get the win.

DNA you need to step your structure up a notch and try using harder hitting concepts with more personals.

Unfuck gets this for being more complex, with multis and over all harder hittin punches.

NO HATE.

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left u a vote i the xeed 1 anyways ppl upping......................