Jameson vs M.C.
 

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Expired battle close - tie

Jameson has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-30-05 07:39 PM.

Buck on these bitches who hate....

This isn't fair cause hes not on my level... After this said hes dead,
Cause him sucking my dick is the closest i'll 'cum' to goin 'head to head,'
It could be 2 on 1... but this dude is so stupid and shit you can tell,
Cause I asked for a handicaped match and he brought a pic. of himself!
M.C. winning this battle.... That would be defying laws and sense,
You making the crowd scream? There must be a gun in the audience...

Meh, quick spit.

M.C. has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-30-05 07:40 PM.

Jameson must think he’s dope.. but your nowhere near the ranks
He told me to paint him a portrait.. but I kept drawing blanks
damn kid.. your rhymes are shitty..
..I’ll smack you with a bar of soap
I wouldn’t let you in my crew, cause we can’t take a joke
& this hoe that my text is nice, that’s the only shit he loves
but, my punches will suck if brought up..
..Anything like Jameson was

don't understand my punches, don't bother voting

Uppage man... Uppage to the fifth.... wordness to the fifth

uppin............................................. ...........

uppin bars.............................................

Voted For: Jameson

Jameson must think he’s dope.. but your nowhere near the ranks
He told me to paint him a portrait.. but I kept drawing blanks
ok............
damn kid.. your rhymes are shitty..
..I’ll smack you with a bar of soap
I wouldn’t let you in my crew, cause we can’t take a joke
no
& this hoe that my text is nice, that’s the only shit he loves
but, my punches will suck if brought up..
..Anything like Jameson was
ok..........
overall.......6/10

This isn't fair cause hes not on my level... After this said hes dead,
Cause him sucking my dick is the closest i'll 'cum' to goin 'head to head,'
ha ha ..best bar of the battle
It could be 2 on 1... but this dude is so stupid and shit you can tell,
Cause I asked for a handicaped match and he brought a pic. of himself!
ok.
M.C. winning this battle.... That would be defying laws and sense,
You making the crowd scream? There must be a gun in the audience...
shit closer.

yo this was close but imma give my vote to jameson coz he had the only bar that made me laugh...
so yeah
vote jameson.

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Voted For: Jameson

v/jameson


all three of his bars had hard hitting punches in them...and his flow was onpoint...MC's was choppy in parts....but, i was feeling some of MC's bars

MC's strongest lines:
He told me to paint him a portrait.. but I kept drawing blanks
I wouldn’t let you in my crew, cause we can’t take a joke
^those were hard....but they were the onli two good ones you had.....

if he had put another good bar in there this damn near would have been a tie

...love it or leave....i can break it down more...but, my vote would still stand.....

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aight.. uppin this

uppin.............................................

Voted For: Jameson

Jameson... ya bars were pretty good, harder punches.. some of ya bars had the funny factor which is good... 1st bar was ya worst... they kinda played.... ya last bar would of been ya best if the 2nd line was reworded... but overall an %85 for this verse

M.C.... ya verse was just alright... yur structure kinda ruined the flow to it... the only reason why you didnt get my vote is because yur punches werent as hard... ya first bar was hot but after that the punches were just ok... dont get me wrong it was still a good verse but just need a little bit extra to get my vote

*No hate just honest opinion* *Return the favor and vote on my battle... see the link below my sig... if you dont Return the Favor I'll remove my vote*

wow.. no1's getting my punches

They get them mate... its just mine were better... :love:

uppin to close this real fast.....................

This was feedback posted for M.C.
 

Voted For: Jameson

MC-
IP:


Jameson must think he’s dope.. but your nowhere near the ranks
He told me to paint him a portrait.. but I kept drawing blanks
Decent punch/opener
damn kid.. your rhymes are shitty..
..I’ll smack you with a bar of soap
I wouldn’t let you in my crew, cause we can’t take a joke
Blah...stupid bar soap/shitty lines are played
& this hoe that my text is nice, that’s the only shit he loves
but, my punches will suck if brought up..
..Anything like Jameson was
Blah closer..

MC- Needs harder hitting punches one of the disses were decent..ok flow though.

Jameson-

This isn't fair cause hes not on my level... After this said hes dead,
Cause him sucking my dick is the closest i'll 'cum' to goin 'head to head,'
cum/head lines are PLAYED AS FUCK
It could be 2 on 1... but this dude is so stupid and shit you can tell,
Cause I asked for a handicaped match and he brought a pic. of himself!
pretty funny bar ok diss
M.C. winning this battle.... That would be defying laws and sense,
You making the crowd scream? There must be a gun in the audience...
decent closer

Jameson- Need more creativity in your punches..disses were decent.

V/Jameson, he had harder disses and punches, flow as good too.

Voted For: M.C.

MC:

Jameson must think he’s dope.. but your nowhere near the ranks
He told me to paint him a portrait.. but I kept drawing blanks

^^lmao....solid punch

damn kid.. your rhymes are shitty..
..I’ll smack you with a bar of soap
I wouldn’t let you in my crew, cause we can’t take a joke

damn, thats 2........

& this hoe that my text is nice, that’s the only shit he loves
but, my punches will suck if brought up..
..Anything like Jameson was

^^setup was kinda hard 2 follow but tha closer was decent

don't understand my punches, don't bother voting

7/10


Jameson:

Buck on these bitches who hate....

This isn't fair cause hes not on my level... After this said hes dead,
Cause him sucking my dick is the closest i'll 'cum' to goin 'head to head,'

lmao...nice

It could be 2 on 1... but this dude is so stupid and shit you can tell,
Cause I asked for a handicaped match and he brought a pic. of himself!

wut tha fuck?????


M.C. winning this battle.... That would be defying laws and sense,
You making the crowd scream? There must be a gun in the audience...

No, no mayn, just ....no

Meh, quick spit.


4/10

MC takes this one mainly because of punches....he ate u alive wit tha line about u tryin 2 join his crew...structure was about even, but some parts in both didn't seem to make sense, easy battle tho.

oh yeah, return tha favor in my topical battle against black queen or i'll have this removed

Voted For: M.C.

return the favor for this vote aight
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=199108

nice close battle man my vote goes to m.c.
both of u had good personals and punches
but mcs was a little better to me but u both did aight
nice sturcture for both of u to

please rtf at my battle:

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=199108