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Texxus 06-30-05 07:56 PM

+ThaProblem+ vs blisss
 
Battle Rules:

8 Lines(4barz)
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
no hate votes and d/r votes


Minimum posts to vote: 650

Check in by: 07-01-05 at 08:01 PM

Must drop verse in 1445 minutes after check in.

System 06-30-05 09:01 PM

+ThaProblem+ has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-30-05 09:01 PM.

Texxus 06-30-05 09:38 PM

This dude for real,pop a gun at him and watch his cartwheel
Homeboy ya wack and lack verbal skill,cant even buy a deal
Dont even front like ya gangsta,I see thru ya like fiberglass
Think im playin I'll shatta ya ass,like a cup made out of glass
You could rap while takin Herion and still couldnt "flow dope"
Take my dick out ya mouth,so no reason why you choked
This fool the kinda rapper to bring his own mic to the studio
Or put his own tape in the stereo,and say that he's in the radio

System 07-01-05 04:19 PM

blisss has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-01-05 04:19 PM.

El Taco 07-01-05 04:20 PM

dudes straight garbage, has some issues and needs help to solve em
add whack to front, herb to the back....and that equals tha problem
tryna sniff out a win here....my punches leave ya with a torn nose
need skills man, but your gobblin more cock than thanksgiving pornos
this whore knows hes beaten, not one for abuse but i gotta bust ya
cause you play boys all night long....so we know you aint a hustla
took a chance with this battle, cause always the possibility ya win it big
but you rolled wrong, and only 10's ya ever see are the ones in your sig
__________________________
1st bar....name play
2nd bar....easy
3rd bar....play boys, hustla's....porno mags.....
4th bar....sig play

word, dont get it, dont vote

El Taco 07-01-05 05:31 PM

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El Taco 07-02-05 02:53 AM

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El Taco 07-02-05 04:22 AM

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El Taco 07-02-05 02:31 PM

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El Taco 07-02-05 06:09 PM

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El Taco 07-02-05 09:23 PM

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Sik Wit It 07-02-05 11:32 PM

This was feedback posted for blisss
 
.............checkin

El Taco 07-03-05 03:23 AM

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El Taco 07-03-05 12:54 PM

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El Taco 07-03-05 04:48 PM

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El Taco 07-03-05 08:31 PM

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El Taco 07-04-05 07:59 AM

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El Taco 07-04-05 05:45 PM

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El Taco 07-04-05 08:46 PM

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Germ 07-07-05 07:57 PM

This was feedback posted for blisss
 
checkin...........................................

El Taco 07-09-05 01:47 AM

uppin............................................. .

Germ 07-11-05 08:34 AM

whats happening here?...............................

13th. 07-12-05 04:32 PM

This was feedback posted for +ThaProblem+
 
checkin pollzz....................................

Germ 07-15-05 06:09 PM

checkin........................................... ......

El Taco 07-30-05 05:11 PM

bump fuckas!......................................

Pro. 07-30-05 05:56 PM

This was feedback posted for blisss
 
Cezar=

1.This dude for real,pop a gun at him and watch his cartwheel
Homeboy ya wack and lack verbal skill,cant even buy a deal
^^That was weak as an opener...plus not a good punch,Really useless!

2.Dont even front like ya gangsta,I see thru ya like fiberglass
Think im playin I'll shatta ya ass,like a cup made out of glass
^^^Again,WTF!?!...you cant rhyme glass with glass...and yet another played line from tha 90's.Bad choice!

3.You could rap while takin Herion and still couldnt "flow dope"
Take my dick out ya mouth,so no reason why you choked
^^^Eh?...1st line is okay this time,2nd line is really useless...should've left that in diss cypher!

4.This fool the kinda rapper to bring his own mic to the studio
Or put his own tape in the stereo,and say that he's in the radio
^^^Now Im feelin like bliss just hopped on ta another computer an made an alias so he could get an eazy win.
REALLY cezar...Elevate ur game 4 real,cuz that was bad.

1/8..no h8 just being real.


Bliss=

1.dudes straight garbage, has some issues and needs help to solve em
add whack to front, herb to the back....and that equals tha problem
^^^That's a nice opener..okay punch but good wordplay,multi's!

2.tryna sniff out a win here....my punches leave ya with a torn nose
need skills man, but your gobblin more cock than thanksgiving pornos
^^^^That was an aiight punch,but still it connect'd.

3.this whore knows hes beaten, not one for abuse but i gotta bust ya
cause you play boys all night long....so we know you aint a hustla
^^^I think u used tha punch wrong,but it was okay...Eh?

4.took a chance with this battle, cause always the possibility ya win it big
but you rolled wrong, and only 10's ya ever see are the ones in your sig
^^^^^Nice personal,okay punch and aiight ending.


3/4

My vote is 4 Bliss,got it hands down.

Cezar......keep elevating.

Sorry,but I aint gotta enough post ta vote....Shit!
So its feed back an my breakdown!

P.H. 07-30-05 05:58 PM

This was feedback posted for blisss
 
Yo This Was A Hot Battle Both Had A Good Flow Both Had Nice Pers But Cezar Was Just To Got There4 He Gets Ma Vote

Macreep 07-30-05 07:37 PM

Voted For: blisss



dudes straight garbage, has some issues and needs help to solve em
add whack to front, herb to the back....and that equals tha problem
^^^bah...weak and uncreative...but an attempt
tryna sniff out a win here....my punches leave ya with a torn nose
need skills man, but your gobblin more cock than thanksgiving pornos
^^OK............
this whore knows hes beaten, not one for abuse but i gotta bust ya
cause you play boys all night long....so we know you aint a hustla
^^^NIce...........
took a chance with this battle, cause always the possibility ya win it big
but you rolled wrong, and only 10's ya ever see are the ones in your sig
^^DOPE

Ok.ya got the concepts and shit.So set up your punches better.I like how you didn't have the basic rhyme sheme.SOme of your punches could have hit harder with some better wording.

This dude for real,pop a gun at him and watch his cartwheel
Homeboy ya wack and lack verbal skill,cant even buy a deal
^^^NO...wat the fuck is this?
Dont even front like ya gangsta,I see thru ya like fiberglass
Think im playin I'll shatta ya ass,like a cup made out of glass
^^How does he act gangsta?HUH?
You could rap while takin Herion and still couldnt "flow dope"
Take my dick out ya mouth,so no reason why you choked
^^PLAyed as fuck in 1st line and whack
This fool the kinda rapper to bring his own mic to the studio
Or put his own tape in the stereo,and say that he's in the radio
^^NO......this bullshit

Dawg...wat the hell.Ya got structure.But you also have basic rhyme scheme.Ya punches suck.Had some played out basic shit.I seen elementary kids talk better trash that wat you spit.NO hate.

Vote-Bliss

Hit my battle with marv in sig....

And please.....don't hate vote

El Taco 07-30-05 09:32 PM

yay, one vote..........word...............................

El Taco 07-31-05 04:39 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by P.H.
Yo This Was A Hot Battle Both Had A Good Flow Both Had Nice Pers But Cezar Was Just To Got There4 He Gets Ma Vote



you're a fucking idiot..............

El Taco 07-31-05 11:23 PM

word, bump this shit yos............................

El Taco 08-01-05 03:12 PM

:shoot::shoot::shoot::shoot::shoot:...............

MaRVJay 08-01-05 03:43 PM

Voted For: blisss

thaproblem:
This dude for real,pop a gun at him and watch his cartwheel
Homeboy ya wack and lack verbal skill,cant even buy a deal
^^^LOL VERY WEEK OPENER....DA MULTI DIDN'T EVEN RYHME RITE
Dont even front like ya gangsta,I see thru ya like fiberglass
Think im playin I'll shatta ya ass,like a cup made out of glass
^^^NO..I'LL SHATTA YA ASS LIKE A CUP MADE OF GLASS??...STEP YA RAP GAME UP
You could rap while takin Herion and still couldnt "flow dope"
Take my dick out ya mouth,so no reason why you choked
^^^DOPE LINES DONE BEEN SAID IN EVERY WAY
This fool the kinda rapper to bring his own mic to the studio
Or put his own tape in the stereo,and say that he's in the radio
^^^NO....WHERE'S DA CREATIVITY??

blisss:
dudes straight garbage, has some issues and needs help to solve em
add whack to front, herb to the back....and that equals tha problem
^^DECENT OPENER
tryna sniff out a win here....my punches leave ya with a torn nose
need skills man, but your gobblin more cock than thanksgiving pornos
^^LOL...OKAY DIS LINE WAS GOOD
this whore knows hes beaten, not one for abuse but i gotta bust ya
cause you play boys all night long....so we know you aint a hustla
^^LOL...DOPE I WOULDN'T OF GOT IT IF U AINT EXPLAIN IT
took a chance with this battle, cause always the possibility ya win it big
but you rolled wrong, and only 10's ya ever see are the ones in your sig
^^^*LOOKS IN HIS SIG*....I DONT GET IT FAM

V/BLISS...REAL EASY

PROBLEM HAS DA RYHME SCHEME OF A LIL KIDD AND HE'S NOT CREATIVE

RETURN DA FAVOR

Willa 08-01-05 11:35 PM

Voted For: blisss

dude for real,pop a gun at him and watch his cartwheel
Homeboy ya wack and lack verbal skill,cant even buy a deal
Dont even front like ya gangsta,I see thru ya like fiberglass
Think im playin I'll shatta ya ass,like a cup made out of glass
CPRNY OPENER NOT EVEN A PUNCH REALLY 6/10
You could rap while takin Herion and still couldnt "flow dope"
Take my dick out ya mouth,so no reason why you choked
PLAYED ASS LINE NO PERSONAL 5/10
This fool the kinda rapper to bring his own mic to the studio
Or put his own tape in the stereo,and say that he's in the radioBESTLINE IN UR VERSE TU STILL NO PERSONAL 8/10
UR ALL PLAYED WORK ON CREATVITY PERSONALS UR FLOW AND STRUCTURE WERE GOOD BUT THATS IT REALLY U LOOK LIKE U PREWRITE



dudes straight garbage, has some issues and needs help to solve em
add whack to front, herb to the back....and that equals tha problem WORST LINE IN UR VERSE NOT REALLUY NAME PLAY LOL 5/10
tryna sniff out a win here....my punches leave ya with a torn nose
need skills man, but your gobblin more cock than thanksgiving pornos
THIS WAS FUNNY BUT NO PERSONAL 7/10
this whore knows hes beaten, not one for abuse but i gotta bust ya
cause you play boys all night long....so we know you aint a hustla GOOD LINE I LIKED IT IT WAS FUNNY 8/10
took a chance with this battle, cause always the possibility ya win it big
but you rolled wrong, and only 10's ya ever see are the ones in your sig ONLY PERSONAL IN THE WHOLE BATTLE PROPS KID 9/10
OK U WERENT AS PLAYED BUT U STILL NEED TO WORK ON UR CREATIVITY WORK ON UR VOCAB U HAD THE ONLY PERSONAL LOL BUT ID LIKE TO SEE MORE UR FLOW WAS GOOD PROPS ON THIS WIN

El Taco 08-02-05 03:13 AM

if you didn't already figure it out, he changed his name, it was +tha problem+, so it is name play, and yeah, he changed his sig too.........had some dice in there before

word, i'll try returnin the favours tomorrow, tired as of now :shoot:

El Taco 08-02-05 11:51 AM

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Germ 08-07-05 02:07 PM

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noname 08-07-05 03:04 PM

This was feedback posted for blisss
 
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Germ 08-08-05 05:07 PM

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El Taco 08-15-05 01:54 PM

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