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PrahJect 07-01-05 02:17 PM

.:Intermental:. - .:This Is Me:. (Straight from the heart)
 
Verse One:

No-one seems to hear me, it seems Im deprived,
It co-insides because it seems its God's plan devised,
My life like a story, but with no fairy ending,
My funeral comes around and no-one's attending,
I always come across fakers who think theyre hard,
My tears are really war torn battlefield scars,
I see you "controllin" the streets, like you were the "mayor"
Faggot fucked one girl and now he thinks hes a "player"
I dedicate my self to Allah, Im true and I do the daily prayer,
But because I swear my own religion calls me a failure,
Teachers think Im shit, because I dont understand this,
So I go and ask them and they shout "You dont understand shit",
Thats why turn my head towards music,
Ive got a brain, I dont abuse it, I use it.

Hook:

If you didnt know now you know
This is me
If you didnt know now you know
This is me
X2

Verse Two:

My feelings are like pebbles, washed away to the shore,
You take time to fuck, but my feelings you ignore,
Theres alot of deceiving people, claimin that they are my friends,
Damn they should really be actors, their best skill is to pretend,
It seems that ill live for 7 days, reverse the story of creation,
Don't give people wellfare, give them some education,
I wanna be a millionaire but used too many lifelines,
To acheive my goals, you would need many many life times,
Im the fruit beared from the seed, that my parents planted for me,
I can truly tell you that I can be what I wanna be till I decease,
If you didnt know, now you know, that this is me.

Hook:

If you didnt know now you know
This is me
If you didnt know now you knoe
This is me
X4 till fades out

PrahJect 07-01-05 02:54 PM

Thanks...will do.....uppin.....

PrahJect 07-01-05 03:24 PM

uppin..................

PrahJect 07-01-05 03:41 PM

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=197662

PrahJect 07-01-05 04:28 PM

uppppin....cmon people why the fuck cant anyone get no feedback

PrahJect 07-01-05 05:17 PM

lets get some fuckin feedbak cmon

Christianite 07-01-05 05:32 PM

good drop, as messenger said good use of emotion, flow and structure was good also...................please RTF on one of my om drops, again good job, keep it up

PrahJect 07-02-05 02:10 AM

Ok thanks dogg.......uppin this...........

PrahJect 07-02-05 10:29 AM

uppppppppppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

Sylvester 07-02-05 11:36 AM

dude, this was nice. you elevating keep it up man. good flow and some nice lines too yo. Good shit. keep it up. pc one.

PrahJect 07-02-05 12:49 PM

thanks dogg........uppin

PrahJect 07-02-05 01:30 PM

upppin...............

PrahJect 07-02-05 03:08 PM

upppppppppin.....................i will RTF

PrahJect 07-02-05 05:27 PM

uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp

New Edition 07-03-05 02:08 AM

yo fam...nice drop...structure was decent,flow ok,and that emotion huge.......nice drop....just keep this up man

Kawn Flixx 07-03-05 02:38 AM

Closed , pm me a link if you wish to have this re-opened

Kawn Flixx 07-03-05 01:44 PM

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=197121

Link

PrahJect 07-03-05 05:23 PM

Thanks for re-opening it.....upppin........

PrahJect 08-15-05 11:03 AM

uppppppppin................


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