Bernonedown vs blisss
 

Battle Rules:

8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Bullshit
No Hate

gl homie

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 07-05-05 at 03:24 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

blisss has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-02-05 03:26 PM.

smashing a crushing...bitch is about to be ground to nothing
cause even bern has admitted he wont amount to something
doesn't have much, but i see being whack is a steady desire
ya couldn't come hot bitch........and you're already on fire
but i admire your effort, best try and go out in a blaze of glory
i can easily light this herb up.......but he's doing it for me
putting an end to your story, this will be your final chapter
cause the only way you're verse kills anybody...is with laughter
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should be easy.

Bernonedown has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-02-05 06:16 PM.

whaeva happen to battlin face 2 face, u might stand a chance if that was the case, but its not, so ur nuttin but a disgrace, u may lay down a verse at a fast pace, but mine will put a queer look on ur face, cant believe u just got beaten, as i taste victorious sweetness, i can beat u, words are your weakness, and i know the administration is patiently waiting for a painfully sounding anal injury u will get from me winnin, as this whole verse keeps ur head spinnin, might lead to death but i wouldnt consider sinning, cause even ur bitch ass knows sins are forgiven, even the darkest of dark wouldnt hide ur fear, because u know that chances are the end is near, all u have to do is look in a mirror, lose this battle, and listen to my niggas cheer....

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Voted For: blisss

Bernonedown - it's really hard to follw when you type it as a paragraph...anyways, you didn't have any personals, u had some pretty funny punches, but once again, u gotta organize it better....keep elevatin

blisss - you had some nice punches in there....the closer was the best one...i lol'd......anyways ur vocab was pretty decent...had some wordplay and a peronla or two....good job

V/ blisss

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Voted For: blisss

easy to vote on....V/ bliss

bern- your structure was FUCKED.....and u weren't even rhymin half way thru ur verse...

bliss- ur structure was good ur verse didnt have the best punches but it got the job done this time...dont force your rhymin wordes eitha try to get more creative and think it all through both should get more personals.....you should try multites...thats what i do a lot....
with that said

v/bliss

forcin rhymes? lol, where exactly?

and how was i not creative, i basically played off his name yo, so almost everyline was a personal....oh, and one-word rhyming is not multies....but thanks yo

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what i meant by forcin rhymes is dat words u used....like u could have found better ones is all im sayin....and i dont consider playin off his name as a personal....personals to me is shit dats about him...and who said anything about one-word rhymin...when i do multies its like 4 rhymin words in one line so thats 8 rhymin words a bar and the shit still makes sense...thats multies....

just be happy you got the fuckin vote..be thankful.....yall kids now a-days b wallin out when sum 1 critique your work...just because they say shit that u didnt want them 2 say...ne wayz no beef...just tellin u how it is

This was feedback posted for blisss
 

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^ word judicial, your explanation was pretty gay

like bernonedown has been here for what? a month, with like 8 posts.....not much personals dude, and there was like nothing forced....

but anyways, practise what ya preach

drakel....you know there could have been better personals thought of....he had good name play yeah....and do u honestly think you have to go through and give 100% detail on your votes...nah...but still i gave him the vote cuz he had the better verse...i just gave him ideas to make him better...

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Voted For: blisss

BERN-YOUR STRUCTURE WAS GARBAGE AS HELL....FLOW WAS AIGH BUT YOU HAD ONE LINE IN THERE THAT WAS STRECHED LONGER THEN GIRAFES NECKS...AND YOUR PUNCHES WERE THROWN BUT FELT LIKE SLAPS....




bLISS-VERSE HAD BETTER STRUCTURE AND SOME PUNCHES WERE THROWN AND HIT AND SOME WERE THROWN WIT YOUR GLASSES OFF...BUT YOUR VERSE WAS ENUFF TO WIN

Voted For: blisss

bern- o wow what was that no punches no flow structure was horrible......you need to elevate..alot

bliss-you need to get more punches and work on everything 2

v/bliss..you kno why

Voted For: blisss

alright im voting for u because ur punches were alot better and the other kid dint even rhyme lol
sern work on ur struc seriously