R-Rated vs Tekneek
 

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Check in by: 07-03-05 at 04:37 PM

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Tekneek has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-03-05 07:39 AM.

R-Rated has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-03-05 02:39 PM.

Ya Skill's Thin Mine's Brim Filled...S'why's This Battle I Will Win.
Amma Kill Him Coz I Know His Verse Suck's "B.I.G". Like Lil Kim.
This Aint a Contest, ..I'll Take This Victory With Little Ease.
Chk.. His Alias Is "Restricted".. Stands For His Rhyme Abillity.
where'as im the toatal opposite ...ma tekneeks dope,
your shit's so boring it even makes my computer go'to sleep mode.
jus like your gurl dog your not hot at all.
fucking hell.... The way I'm on fire....... I should stop drop and roll.
your punches hit like bitch slaps ... mine are Way Greater.
you could be to lift light farm machinery & still not throw a haymaker.

This was feedback posted for R-Rated
 

Kind of weak, both had some played lines. But its all good no hate. I think that R-Rated took this out just barely and I know for a fact this wont be a KO.

Both needa up their rhyme game, but ® did have better punches than tekneek. Tek, you needa think of better concepts than "your shits so boring" and I wouldnt of even tried to use the restricted line cause every emcee whos ever battled this dude has prolly used that atleast once.

Basically, up ya creativity and rhyming to both, but I aint gonna say this was a bad battle.

v/R-Rated

Cant vote- Guess I'll have to get more posts.

This was feedback posted for R-Rated
 

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aight lets get these votes in........................

Voted For: R-Rated

Tekneek:
Ya Skill's Thin Mine's Brim Filled...S'why's This Battle I Will Win.
Amma Kill Him Coz I Know His Verse Suck's "B.I.G". Like Lil Kim.
Eh...Not doing it for me. 7/10. Okay opener.

This Aint a Contest, ..I'll Take This Victory With Little Ease.
Chk.. His Alias Is "Restricted".. Stands For His Rhyme Abillity.
Okay personal. 8/10.

where'as im the toatal opposite ...ma tekneeks dope,
your shit's so boring it even makes my computer go'to sleep mode.
Sort of self-glorification here...pretty good though. 8/10

jus like your gurl dog your not hot at all.
fucking hell.... The way I'm on fire....... I should stop drop and roll.
All and roll doesn't really rhyme that well. Not really original at all...5/10

your punches hit like bitch slaps ... mine are Way Greater.
you could be to lift light farm machinery & still not throw a haymaker.
[/b]Okay. 7.5/10[/b]

Overall: 7.1...

Info: I didn't like how you self-glorified in your verse...you didn't come all that original, and the roll-all line really ruined the whole thing and brought your overall average down a lot.


R-Rated:
This Kid Reminds Me of A Commercial Disclaimer..How This Fakes Been Caught..
Cause You Couldn't Make An Impact With Your Verse If You Changed The Font..
Okay...pretty good opener. Second line was okay. 7.5

In This Battle You're Beat but If This Was A Costume Contest You Woulda Won..
Because You Next To Wackness....Is The Defining Moment of Exactness Son..
Not feeling it all that much. Okay. 7.2

This Kid Reminds Me Of G-Unit....How This Kid Comes Without Game..
How He Gonna Beat Me Lyrically?..When This Cat Mispells His Own Name..
Pretty good personal...8/10

Like Cheap Car Owners...When Despretly In Need He Refuses To Re-Tire..
And If This Was A Game..Seriously...In Levels I'm Thirty-Three Higher..
Pretty good...the Re-Tire line has probably been used a good few times before. 7.5

In This Mission..You Have No Back-Up...So Its About Time To Abort..
Cause Those Maxi-Pads Are The Only Time This Pussy Recieves Support..
Okay closer. 7.2

Overall: 7.5

Info: Okay battle. You didn't self-glorify as much as Tekneek, and you had some okay lines.

My vote goes to R-Rated because the higher average and shit... good battle.

uppin this.............................................. ...................

Voted For: R-Rated

Ya Skill's Thin Mine's Brim Filled...S'why's This Battle I Will Win.
Amma Kill Him Coz I Know His Verse Suck's "B.I.G". Like Lil Kim.
-Played. The set up Lines was messed up for me cause of the grammar. And the punchline (2nd line) was played out.

This Aint a Contest, ..I'll Take This Victory With Little Ease.
Chk.. His Alias Is "Restricted".. Stands For His Rhyme Abillity.
-Hmmmmm Really wasn't a effective punch, couldnt find it insulting. Weak


where'as im the toatal opposite ...ma tekneeks dope,
your shit's so boring it even makes my computer go'to sleep mode.
-Ok Played wordplay and weak punch

jus like your gurl dog your not hot at all.
fucking hell.... The way I'm on fire....... I should stop drop and roll.
-Weak Punch.

your punches hit like bitch slaps ... mine are Way Greater.
you could be to lift light farm machinery & still not throw a haymaker.
-Ok for once, this was a good punch nice wordplay and a good closer.

=overall this verse was weak from the start, punches weren't connecting. Wordplays are played. The closer is what stood out the most though.




This Kid Reminds Me of A Commercial Disclaimer..How This Fakes Been Caught..
Cause You Couldn't Make An Impact With Your Verse If You Changed The Font..
-Hmmmm I like the 1st line, the 2nd line was ok the concept was played though, but word differently


In This Battle You're Beat but If This Was A Costume Contest You Woulda Won..
Because You Next To Wackness....Is The Defining Moment of Exactness Son..
-HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA nice punch, decent


This Kid Reminds Me Of G-Unit....How This Kid Comes Without Game..
How He Gonna Beat Me Lyrically?..When This Cat Mispells His Own Name..
-Decent punch


Like Cheap Car Owners...When Despretly In Need He Refuses To Re-Tire..
And If This Was A Game..Seriously...In Levels I'm Thirty-Three Higher..
-I see glor which didnt make a punch in the 2nd line but i like the wordplay you did on the 1st line


In This Mission..You Have No Back-Up...So Its About Time To Abort..
Cause Those Maxi-Pads Are The Only Time This Pussy Recieves Support..
-Lol Nice wordplay and a good closer

Overall= I liked your verse, had some decent punches loved the g-unit line and the halloween line too. Creative and decent.

Ok my vote goes to R-Rated. He had better punches than TekNeek, with decent wordplays and good punches. Tekneek i felt your punches were weak and the grammar is what the main problem is. The wordplays was played, but until the closer which was good but still wasn't enough to beat R-Rated.


Bye.

ummmmmmmmm....blah blah...........................

^Come Join UE Bro...For Real..You Got Potential Kid.

~R~

Voted For: Tekneek

This Kid Reminds Me of A Commercial Disclaimer..How This Fakes Been Caught..
Cause You Couldn't Make An Impact With Your Verse If You Changed The Font..
haha nice
In This Battle You're Beat but If This Was A Costume Contest You Woulda Won..
Because You Next To Wackness....Is The Defining Moment of Exactness Son..
ok
This Kid Reminds Me Of G-Unit....How This Kid Comes Without Game..
How He Gonna Beat Me Lyrically?..When This Cat Mispells His Own Name..
first line was nice...second was ok
Like Cheap Car Owners...When Despretly In Need He Refuses To Re-Tire..
And If This Was A Game..Seriously...In Levels I'm Thirty-Three Higher..
real nice..first line was nice
In This Mission..You Have No Back-Up...So Its About Time To Abort..
Cause Those Maxi-Pads Are The Only Time This Pussy Recieves Support..
nice closer


Breakdown-this was a pretty good verse...your punches seemed to hit nice...they could have been a lil harder though...not much complexity but your punches and personals took up for the lost space....overal 7.5/10



Ya Skill's Thin Mine's Brim Filled...S'why's This Battle I Will Win.
Amma Kill Him Coz I Know His Verse Suck's "B.I.G". Like Lil Kim.
wow...nice
This Aint a Contest, ..I'll Take This Victory With Little Ease.
Chk.. His Alias Is "Restricted".. Stands For His Rhyme Abillity.
haha nice
where'as im the toatal opposite ...ma tekneeks dope,
your shit's so boring it even makes my computer go'to sleep mode.
ok.....fell off a lil
jus like your gurl dog your not hot at all.
fucking hell.... The way I'm on fire....... I should stop drop and roll.
ok
your punches hit like bitch slaps ... mine are Way Greater.
you could be to lift light farm machinery & still not throw a haymaker.
nice closer


Breakdown-this verse was also nice...your seemed to hit a lil harder then r-rateds...but one thing was the sleep mode line didn't really go well wit the rest of your verse...because all of the other bars we on a higher level then you just came up wit some SHIT..but nice verse...overal 8/10

note---this battle was extremly close...wasnt easy to vote

Voted For: R-Rated

This Kid Reminds Me of A Commercial Disclaimer..How This Fakes Been Caught..
Cause You Couldn't Make An Impact With Your Verse If You Changed The Font..
^^OK......not that hard though...5/10
In This Battle You're Beat but If This Was A Costume Contest You Woulda Won..
Because You Next To Wackness....Is The Defining Moment of Exactness Son..
^^^OK....5/10
This Kid Reminds Me Of G-Unit....How This Kid Comes Without Game..
How He Gonna Beat Me Lyrically?..When This Cat Mispells His Own Name..
^^Nice......7/10
Like Cheap Car Owners...When Despretly In Need He Refuses To Re-Tire..
And If This Was A Game..Seriously...In Levels I'm Thirty-Three Higher..
^^1st line was fire....7/10
In This Mission..You Have No Back-Up...So Its About Time To Abort..
Cause Those Maxi-Pads Are The Only Time This Pussy Recieves Support..
^^period/maxipad shit is played.....6/10

U had some good punches.Most of the concepts were original.But that last line ruined it.Even the newbs be using period/maxi pad lines.It's played.But it was a good verse.

Ya Skill's Thin Mine's Brim Filled...S'why's This Battle I Will Win.
Amma Kill Him Coz I Know His Verse Suck's "B.I.G". Like Lil Kim.
^^Good.....6/10
This Aint a Contest, ..I'll Take This Victory With Little Ease.
Chk.. His Alias Is "Restricted".. Stands For His Rhyme Abillity.
^^Lmao......Dope....8/10
where'as im the toatal opposite ...ma tekneeks dope,
your shit's so boring it even makes my computer go'to sleep mode.
^^NO.......self glorified....2/10
jus like your gurl dog your not hot at all.
fucking hell.... The way I'm on fire....... I should stop drop and roll.
^^NO.........3/10
your punches hit like bitch slaps ... mine are Way Greater.
you could be to lift light farm machinery & still not throw a haymaker
^^Too uncreative.......4/10

Damn son.After the first 2 bars I thought you had him.But the rest of ur verse suked.That restricted line was Dope.But then you self glorified and spit some weak punches.R-rated got lucky here cause ur verse faded after the first 2 bars.

Vote-R-Rated

^The Restricted Line Is Played..Look Through All 62 of My Battles and You'll See That Bar LoL

~R~

OOh well my fault....it's new to me.....gotta vote in my opinion here.If the bar new to me....then it new.But I gave ya the vote anyways.

Voted For: R-Rated

Ya Skill's Thin Mine's Brim Filled...S'why's This Battle I Will Win.
Amma Kill Him Coz I Know His Verse Suck's "B.I.G". Like Lil Kim.
^^tight punch but not 2 good a flow

This Aint a Contest, ..I'll Take This Victory With Little Ease.
Chk.. His Alias Is "Restricted".. Stands For His Rhyme Abillity.^^better flo but it aint make sence

where'as im the toatal opposite ...ma tekneeks dope,
your shit's so boring it even makes my computer go'to sleep mode.
^^dumb ass punch

jus like your gurl dog your not hot at all.
fucking hell.... The way I'm on fire....... I should stop drop and roll.
^^lol...dat shit wuz good all around

your punches hit like bitch slaps ... mine are Way Greater.
you could be to lift light farm machinery & still not throw a haymaker.
^^i don kno wut 2 say bout dat cuz i aint git it



R- rated definately had tha best lines all around but wut really made me vote 4 him wuz tha..."In This Mission..You Have No Back-Up...So Its About Time To Abort..
Cause Those Maxi-Pads Are The Only Time This Pussy Recieves Support.."

This was feedback posted for R-Rated
 

R Got it...

Tekneek, you had too much self glorification goin on fam

Cant vote, but thats my opinion

Voted For: R-Rated

straight up..... R gets this....lmfao...
This Kid Reminds Me of A Commercial Disclaimer..How This Fakes Been Caught..
Cause You Couldn't Make An Impact With Your Verse If You Changed The Font..
^^^^^^ haahhhh ahaha good werd play here R.

This Kid Reminds Me Of G-Unit....How This Kid Comes Without Game..
How He Gonna Beat Me Lyrically?..When This Cat Mispells His Own Name..
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ahahhaah good stuff here again ahha lmfao.... good punches soo far
In This Mission..You Have No Back-Up...So Its About Time To Abort..
Cause Those Maxi-Pads Are The Only Time This Pussy Recieves Support..
^^^^^^^^ haha good kloze... good stuff had punches flow and good structure......

Techneek... well u laid good punches... but not as haard
he had better punches...which owned u here... no offence...
u had good flow and construction on ur verse... but R takes this out wit ease

^^^^^^^^^ return the favour in my battle below..... aiiight ..... peace