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.Kan.i.Bul. vs flow verse
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6-10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Etc....... Enjoy Losin!!! :thumbup: Minimum posts to vote: 75 Check in by: 07-03-05 at 09:40 PM Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in. |
.Kan.i.Bul. has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-02-05 10:11 PM.
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listen nigga....
Act Stupid I'll Deal Wit You....Ya Friends Dont Even Want A Deal Wit You Mills? U Deal Nickels....Dis "Dicks Green"....Finish Jerkin Ya "Dil Pickle"!! You Still Livin A Cunts Life...."Bone" Husbands Den Literally "Dog" Wives This Dogs Trife....He Paid His Cock 2 Quit Drugs....Cuz It Foamed White!! (get it?) Everyone Knows U Sideways....But "Rainbow Brain".....I Dont Mind Gays So Continue WACKIN YASELF EVERY WEEK...Like Abusive Bod-Days!! U Dont Deserve A Verse, Must Be 50 Cent...Cuz All Ya Flows Get Worse Last Time U Cursed...Ya Mom Beat Ya Pants So Hard It Became A Skirt!! Owned?.... |
flow verse has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-03-05 09:53 AM.
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Laughter is the best medicine so ur rhymes are a cure
Bitch keeps posting bull shit like we asking for more This is like a game of hungry hungry hippos The winner is the one with the most “marbles” So dumbass go away . . . you passé Couldn't pour piss out of a boot if the instructions were on the heel . . . And now u’ve lost so just deal And remember I’m the hero bitch . . .and if you lucky I’ll flip u and put u to the left of me like my side kick (get it) |
"and if you lucky I’ll flip u and put u to the left of me like my side kick (get it)" just in case no one gets it my---t-mobile "side kick"--
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Voted For: .Kan.i.Bul.
flow verse - hippos and marbles doesnt rhyme...your punches were weak...had no personals.....lacked vocab and multis.not real good .Kan.i.Bul. - had some good wordplay and punches...had a multi...some of it wasnt great but u took it...nice job Return The Favor: http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=197751 |
word to hydro --- two words don't have to be spelled the same to ryme --- who do you say marbles? its pronouces marbols.. and hippos... "os" sound hear it? na i might be nuts (sarcasm) what ever at least u backed up ur vote with words . . . FLOW VERSE
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Voted For: .Kan.i.Bul.
Kanibul get it for using decent punches and concepts, he had a better structure, flow and everything...still room to elevate a lot though, but a lotta potential. flow, hit up the tuts man, you came weak as fuck...gotta learn punches and personals man. no hate rtf vs verbal shoota in 3 days or this vote gets DQ'ed!! |
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Voted For: .Kan.i.Bul.
Laughter is the best medicine so ur rhymes are a cure Bitch keeps posting bull shit like we asking for more ^^u said his rhymes got wit,complement...0/10 This is like a game of hungry hungry hippos The winner is the one with the most “marbles” ^^no....0/10 So dumbass go away . . . you passé Couldn't pour piss out of a boot if the instructions were on the heel . . . And now u’ve lost so just deal ^^C'mon..at least one punchline.. 0/10 And remember I’m the hero bitch . . .and if you lucky I’ll flip u and put u to the left of me like my side kick (get it) ^^NO......0/10 What the hell.There was not one punchline in this shit.Ur flow was horrible due to stretched lines and worst structure.But the punches was the worst part.It like you didn't even try. Act Stupid I'll Deal Wit You....Ya Friends Dont Even Want A Deal Wit You Mills? U Deal Nickels....Dis "Dicks Green"....Finish Jerkin Ya "Dil Pickle"!! ^^^didn't rhymes.....suks...3/10 You Still Livin A Cunts Life...."Bone" Husbands Den Literally "Dog" Wives This Dogs Trife....He Paid His Cock 2 Quit Drugs....Cuz It Foamed White!! (get it?) ^^^OK...not all that though...4/10 Everyone Knows U Sideways....But "Rainbow Brain".....I Dont Mind Gays So Continue WACKIN YASELF EVERY WEEK...Like Abusive Bod-Days!! ^^OK....4/10 U Dont Deserve A Verse, Must Be 50 Cent...Cuz All Ya Flows Get Worse Last Time U Cursed...Ya Mom Beat Ya Pants So Hard It Became A Skirt!! ^^^No.....2/10 ur verse flowed and was structured far better than the other guyU had some weak punches in there.U also need to work on punches.But the differnece between you and the other guy was that you actually had punches while the other guy had none. Vote-KAn-I-Bul (VOTE IN LINK BELOW OR THIS VOTE WILL BE REMOVED) http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=197910 |
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This was feedback posted for .Kan.i.Bul.
Nice Shits Man...........................
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Thanx Animosity and Chief............Raise This
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Someone ane1 give him his last fuckin vote i'm trying to get a new battle started . . . good win kanibul i guess ur name does fit u-- u love to eat up beef-- yea i know i could think of word plays when i was battling u and now i can---- :) whatever good battle on ur part man
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Tommorow is your deadline. :thumbup: |
This was feedback posted for .Kan.i.Bul.
kanibul if i could vote u would get my vote but i can sry . .flow verse i have seen better post from u there was like no effort in this one not even worth a critque
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Voted For: .Kan.i.Bul.
kani had a great punch for the opening, his closing wasnt bad either flowverse had bad flow, punches were really weak neither had any personals, vocab very close but i'ma vote for kanibul cause of his opening and closing punches please vote on my battle with madik http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=200158 |
Voted For: .Kan.i.Bul.
Laughter is the best medicine so ur rhymes are a cure Bitch keeps posting bull shit like we asking for more flow was off line was played horrible opener no personal 6/10 This is like a game of hungry hungry hippos The winner is the one with the most “marbles” didnt really rhyme it was creative but it was corny 6/10 So dumbass go away . . . you passé Couldn't pour piss out of a boot if the instructions were on the heel . . . And now u’ve lost so just deal yea not gettin it but flow was horrid no personal again 4/10 And remember I’m the hero bitch . . .and if you lucky I’ll flip u and put u to the left of me like my side kick (get it) corny no personal and ur structure was messed ok work on ur structure some of ur lines were short and others were stretched ur flow was one of the worst ive seen on rv u need to stop using pre writtens and use some personals also work on metas and ur vocab way tooo basic overall u need to improve on everything personally Act Stupid I'll Deal Wit You....Ya Friends Dont Even Want A Deal Wit You Mills? U Deal Nickels....Dis "Dicks Green"....Finish Jerkin Ya "Dil Pickle"!! umm good creativity i guess but i didint reall feel it 7/10 You Still Livin A Cunts Life...."Bone" Husbands Den Literally "Dog" Wives This Dogs Trife....He Paid His Cock 2 Quit Drugs....Cuz It Foamed White!! (get it?)lol this was funny 8/10 Everyone Knows U Sideways....But "Rainbow Brain".....I Dont Mind Gays So Continue WACKIN YASELF EVERY WEEK...Like Abusive Bod-Days!! ive seen this line b4 :( U Dont Deserve A Verse, Must Be 50 Cent...Cuz All Ya Flows Get Worse Last Time U Cursed...Ya Mom Beat Ya Pants So Hard It Became A Skirt!! bad closer u had no personals so work on it however ur wordplay and creativity outweighed his so good battle |
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