RaDiKaL vs K-Trini
 

Battle Rules:

6 - Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 07-02-05 at 10:33 PM

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K-Trini DQ'ed for PMing for votes
-strobe

RaDiKaL has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-02-05 10:11 PM.

K-Trini has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-02-05 10:15 PM.

This bitch neva ruled from the start,so how'm I ending his reign?
And why be complex gainst you,fuck dat,I'm sayin ya lame
Like girls with AIDS,not even starving vampires would bite you
&Ur lines,like a boomerang,are fired at me,but backfires to hit you
Ur head hollow when you ween,so ya must be born in October
&I'd say I'ma rip ya ass to shreds,but you'd probably bend over


ween means to think.Look it up in the dictionary if ya don't believe me.

Dis battle is over in a ~slight sec~ you're a ~light threat~
you 'puttin da Nike sign on Jordan forehead' is da closest you'll get to a ~'mic check'~
Im ~twice just as bad as Satan~ my rhymes are ~slicin dis faggots face in~
and da only way you 'passed ya time' is if ya ~'lifes and exxageration'~
Now its ~time to face~ ya death,you're now runnin ya ~final race~
cause you 'act guilty,but ya truly innocent' like 'Micheal's ~Trial Case'~

uppin............................................. .......

Voted For: K-Trini

Radikal
Dis battle is over in a ~slight sec~ you're a ~light threat~
you 'puttin da Nike sign on Jordan forehead' is da closest you'll get to a ~'mic check'~
5/10 nice wordplay weak punch
Im ~twice just as bad as Satan~ my rhymes are ~slicin dis faggots face in~
and da only way you 'passed ya time' is if ya ~'lifes and exxageration'~
3/10 trash
Now its ~time to face~ ya death,you're now runnin ya ~final race~
cause you 'act guilty,but ya truly innocent' like 'Micheal's ~Trial Case'~
2/10 this is hardly dissing him
10/30 weak verse that lacked a hard punch or a good flow

K-Trini

This bitch neva ruled from the start,so how'm I ending his reign?
And why be complex gainst you,fuck dat,I'm sayin ya lame
3/10 weak
Like girls with AIDS,not even starving vampires would bite you
&Ur lines,like a boomerang,are fired at me,but backfires to hit you
6/10 the Third line is fire
Ur head hollow when you ween,so ya must be born in October
&I'd say I'ma rip ya ass to shreds,but you'd probably bend over
6/10 lmao good
15/30 overall good verse not bad came wit some good punches andfunny rhymes

i thought trinis verse was more entertaining,return the favor people

aight....more votes folks...

Uppin....................................

Uppinnn...........

Voted For: K-Trini

RaDiKaL

Dis battle is over in a ~slight sec~ you're a ~light threat~
you 'puttin da Nike sign on Jordan forehead' is da closest you'll get to a ~'mic check'~
6/10....your best bar....decent wordplay
Im ~twice just as bad as Satan~ my rhymes are ~slicin dis faggots face in~
and da only way you 'passed ya time' is if ya ~'lifes and exxageration'~
3/10...in the sceond bar you complimented him...said he wasnt past his time
Now its ~time to face~ ya death,you're now runnin ya ~final race~
cause you 'act guilty,but ya truly innocent' like 'Micheal's ~Trial Case'~
4/10...ok....michael acted guilty?

13/30

K-Trini

This bitch neva ruled from the start,so how'm I ending his reign?
And why be complex gainst you,fuck dat,I'm sayin ya lame
4/10...decent but basic
Like girls with AIDS,not even starving vampires would bite you
&Ur lines,like a boomerang,are fired at me,but backfires to hit you
4/10...was alright
Ur head hollow when you ween,so ya must be born in October
&I'd say I'ma rip ya ass to shreds,but you'd probably bend over
8/10...really nice

16/30

k-trini won pretty easily cuz of his closer

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Voted For: K-Trini

yo k took this in nearly every element like the ur head.... line it funny

radical all i gonna say is elevate before you ask a experienced battler to battle you lol

oh and return the favour in http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=197415
please

uppin.............................................

Dont yall get it......explanations....

1.)'mic check'.......Nike sign=check.....Micheal Jordan=mic{Mike}
2.)If you're passed ya time dat means you're passed ya life.......only time hes 'passed his life' is if his lifes an exxageration.....yall gotta think bout dat one....dats deep.....
3.)What I meant by dis one was he actin 'gangsta but hes not'....he actin like he is but inside,hes truly not.....yall to newbie-ish thinkin......

Fuck it.....

^^^explainin now is futile......the voters can't see ya posts till they vote........

uppin............................................. .....

Voted For: K-Trini

IP:


This bitch neva ruled from the start,so how'm I ending his reign?
-nice opener-
And why be complex gainst you,fuck dat,I'm sayin ya lame
-this secnond line was weak-
Like girls with AIDS,not even starving vampires would bite you
-this shits a classic-
&Ur lines,like a boomerang,are fired at me,but backfires to hit you
-not bad-
Ur head hollow when you ween,so ya must be born in October
-nice here-
&I'd say I'ma rip ya ass to shreds,but you'd probably bend over
-i think this line finished Radikal-




Dis battle is over in a ~slight sec~ you're a ~light threat~
-good multi opener-
you 'puttin da Nike sign on Jordan forehead' is da closest you'll get to a ~'mic check'~
-nice right here-
Im ~twice just as bad as Satan~ my rhymes are ~slicin dis faggots face in~
-filler right here-
and da only way you 'passed ya time' is if ya ~'lifes and exxageration'~
-nice-
Now its ~time to face~ ya death,you're now runnin ya ~final race~
-settn him up here-
cause you 'act guilty,but ya truly innocent' like 'Micheal's ~Trial Case'~
-nice finisher bruz, but i think K-trini got u wit his finisher-

Vote-K-trini

nice battle

This was feedback posted for K-Trini
 

checkin for d/r.............................................

Voted For: K-Trini

I think that K-Trini got this battle because i feel that K-Trini came stronger in the following categories...Punches i felt K-Trini got it was effective and was on point RaDiKaL you should of been a bit more creative on this occasion personals i felt went to K-Trini good lookin wordplay and creativity goes to K-Trini and flow and structure i'll give to K-Trini.

V/K-Trini RTF In My Sig 3 days or vote removed