NaRc-UzI vs Ambid
 

Battle Rules:

8 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No d/r
No hate.

Minimum posts to vote: 300

Check in by: 07-03-05 at 12:07 PM

Must drop verse in 55 minutes after check in.

CLosed - Expired battle / Tie

NaRc-UzI has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-03-05 11:38 AM.

Ambid has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-03-05 11:41 AM.

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Ill give a sweet tooth with this punch and ill take the cake and make you RE-treat
Your second rate and ur losses are like mike jones rhymes they just seem to repeat
Please tell me that your not trying to get a deal cause your chances are no good
Cause admib got a lesser chance of getting signed than a retards yearbook
Im suplying the crack while reminding the whole Rv that admin is tryin to put on an act
Its a matter of fact that the only time i failed at something was when i tried to be wack
Your gonna idol the man cause im a life taker and murdering to me is a bad habbit
Cuz Im gonna need three rolls of toilet paper after im done shitting on this faggot

you cant play me chump, you just shaking hands w/ doom.
i mean you thought homo, when i said i was gonna beat-on-you!
you aint raw, when my flow connects you'll dissolve to shit.
an' my punches will have ya seeing stars so i guess you could say i put your asterisk!*
dont be optimistic b, your a waist so i'ma just strangle you witha belt.
you nothing man, coz like an' inside joke yo, you just kidding yourself.
so make do like a spanish foster, and simply adopt the "el".
an' just swallow this slug hoe, fore you get pumelled by shells.

* a star is a asterick or w/e its called. so punches will have you seeing stars and asterisk = ass-to-risk.
if you dont get the wordplay dont vote :thumbup:.

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damn. lets get some votes all up in here. stop sleeping.

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Nice nice pollz family................................

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Voted For: Ambid

Ill give a sweet tooth with this punch and ill take the cake and make you RE-treat
Your second rate and ur losses are like mike jones rhymes they just seem to repeat
^^1st line too long....and punch is played
Please tell me that your not trying to get a deal cause your chances are no good
Cause admib got a lesser chance of getting signed than a retards yearbook
^^OK..........
Im suplying the crack while reminding the whole Rv that admin is tryin to put on an act
Its a matter of fact that the only time i failed at something was when i tried to be wack
^^Self glorifing......
Your gonna idol the man cause im a life taker and murdering to me is a bad habbit
Cuz Im gonna need three rolls of toilet paper after im done shitting on this faggot
^^^Played.........

This verse dissapointed Narc.try to shorten your lines a bit.Ur punches were played and uncreative and you had a whole bar of self-glorifing.There was only one bar that was good.and that was all it was....good.Nutin spectacular.

you cant play me chump, you just shaking hands w/ doom.
i mean you thought homo, when i said i was gonna beat-on-you!
^^^Nah.....uncreative and weak....
you aint raw, when my flow connects you'll dissolve to shit.
an' my punches will have ya seeing stars so i guess you could say i put your asterisk!*
^^^Creative yes.....but weak
dont be optimistic b, your a waist so i'ma just strangle you witha belt.
you nothing man, coz like an' inside joke yo, you just kidding yourself.
^^^1st line was nice but 2nd wasn't.
so make do like a spanish foster, and simply adopt the "el".
an' just swallow this slug hoe, fore you get pumelled by shells.
^^horrible closer

U had nice structure but you had some lines that were long.Ur punches were pretty weak.but you had some nice wordplay.the star line was creative but weak.U didn't self glorify or use played punches like Narc.

Vote-Ambid
(VOTE IN LINK BELOW OR THIS VOTE WILL BE REMOVED)
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=197910

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Voted For: NaRc-UzI

aight, this waz hapnin'

Narc Uzi - Nice vocab, flow, structure, good creativity, jus make em personals mo' hard hittin..

Ambid .- Nice flow, fucked structure, nice vocab, aight creativity, no personals

Openin - Tie
Closin - Ambid

Overal
Narc Uzi - 8/10
Ambig - 7/10

**Ambid had no personals and a fucked structure**

V/ Narc Uzi

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Voted For: Ambid

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AMBID U TAKE THIS OUT EASY...no hate to NAr..u kool aiight..ur rhymes lacked vocab ..and the overall punch u know??/

Ambid good werd play..wit the 1st and 2nd bar and ... good structure and .... flow...

Return the favour in my battles below//

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

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Voted For: NaRc-UzI

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=198924
RTF HERE OR VOTE WILL BE REMOVED.

Ambid:
Good drop, obviously an alias....but that dont matter much, nice drop...punches hit they mark for the most part, few lines was stretched so it took longer to get to the point, took the sting out the flow too.....wordplay could of been better, not a bad drop tho...

Narc:
Good stuff, wordplay was much better than ambids, punches were alright, pretty even in that department to be honest, try using a few multies in ya bars to improve your flow...but other then that, you got this easy.....mettas was strongt throughout, nothin too personal from either

so here:
Punches_ even
Mettas_Narc
Personals_ none really
Structure_ narc
Vote=...................................NARC

RTF OR VOTE WILL BE REMOVED NARC, Link is at the top of my Vote.

thanks and teph your link is not working..................

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checkin pollzzzzzzzzzzzzzz........................

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Checkin pollz homie i think u got this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

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Voted For: Ambid

you cant play me chump, you just shaking hands w/ doom.
i mean you thought homo, when i said i was gonna beat-on-you!
^^^weak.....4/10
you aint raw, when my flow connects you'll dissolve to shit.
an' my punches will have ya seeing stars so i guess you could say i put your asterisk!*
^^good wordplay......6/10
dont be optimistic b, your a waist so i'ma just strangle you witha belt.
you nothing man, coz like an' inside joke yo, you just kidding yourself.
^^good......6/10
so make do like a spanish foster, and simply adopt the "el".
an' just swallow this slug hoe, fore you get pumelled by shells.
^^set-up was nice...punch itself sucked ass...4/10
Ok..good verse.Had some good wordplay in the middle bars.But the 1st and last bars lacked.Work on your set-ups and such.Try to use personals too.All your bars were generic....and could be directed towards anyone.So..use personals.And try to upp ya flow up a bit.

Ill give a sweet tooth with this punch and ill take the cake and make you RE-treat
Your second rate and ur losses are like mike jones rhymes they just seem to repeat
^^Mike Jones lines with the repeating is played out now...3./10
Please tell me that your not trying to get a deal cause your chances are no good
Cause admib got a lesser chance of getting signed than a retards yearbook
^^bad....uncreative too....2/10
Im suplying the crack while reminding the whole Rv that admin is tryin to put on an act
Its a matter of fact that the only time i failed at something was when i tried to be wack
^^self glorifing...not a punch....1/10
Your gonna idol the man cause im a life taker and murdering to me is a bad habbit
Cuz Im gonna need three rolls of toilet paper after im done shitting on this faggot
^^Not much of a punch...1/10

Ok..all your lines were either played...or not a punch at all.From the minute still tippin was released...that repeating line from mike jones got played.The 2nd bar was uncreative and weak.Not signed like retard yrbooks?..Nah..The 3rd and 4th bars were not punches.You ain;t whack and you gonna shit on him...self glorifing right there.

Vote-Ambid
RTF BELOW
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=203538

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y0 tHaT sHiT wUz FiRe SuN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!