Black_Heart vs lyrickz
 

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BLaCK_HEaRT has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-03-05 07:58 PM.

lyrickz has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-03-05 08:00 PM.

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You couldn't have hot bars even if you was in a africa Jail "Cell All Night"//
You can't tell this guy dosen't have lyrics he couldn't even "spell it right"//(Lyrickz)

Fake ass vocabulary, for this battle "Save The Grammar"//
I'll leave a cut on his face longer than the goatee on "David-Banner"//

When ya bitch top off, she fear-ful of sins, but still a "Dumb-Hoe"//
You a 6-0-1 Repsenta 6 Losses, 0 Wins, and "One-No-Show"//

I'm the answer but i ain't playing ball and make "Cheddar-in-Philly"//
I'll leave more bullet holes in your face, than the # of "Letters in Mississippi"//

If i'm i go to your job, i'm taking ya work "You Ain't Making Pay Then"//
You from jack town ??? It must mean yall "Masterbate-Men"//

No Fighting Friends, Slugs as big as Heinkens, GET YA WEIGHT UP "Like you Diet-in"//
Have ya crew steady dyin when, ya hood i'm drivin in You couldn't dodge it if you had the "spidy sense"//

Put it to your dome, YA KNOW ... imma let the "Chrome-Bake"//
To your "Bones-Break" and leave in the river of your "home state"//(MISSISSIPPI)

Is it Generic, that your family can't "spit lyrics"//
Have FEAR PRICK, even deaf cliccs can't still "Hear-This"//
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EXPLANATIONs

You couldn't have hot bars even if you was in a africa Jail "Cell All Night"//{a Jail cell has bars, and you know africa is hot.. and you know rap bars}
You can't tell this guy dosen't have lyrics he couldn't even "spell it right"//(Lyrickz){Self explantiontary .. his name Lyrickz .. LYRICS}

Fake ass vocabulary, for this battle "Save The Grammar"//{He told me he has the best vocab on the site}
I'll leave a cut on his face longer than the goatee on "David-Banner"//{David put mississppi on the rap map, and David has the longest goate almost down to his nipple}

When ya bitch top off, she fear-ful of sins, but still a "Dumb-Hoe"//{Just talking bout his slut}
You a 6-0-1 Repsenta 6 Losses, 0 Wins, and "One-No-Show"//{6-0-1 in sig as his area code 6(losses)-0(Wins)1-(No Show)}

I'm the answer but i ain't playing ball and make "Cheddar-in-Philly"//{u know a.i play b-ball for philly 76ers and is the most paid on da roster}
I'll leave more bullet holes in your face, than the # of "Letters in Mississippi"//{he from m-i-s-s-i-s-s-i-p-p-i DATS 11 HOLES IN YA FACE}

If i'm i go to your job, i'm taking ya work "You Ain't Making Pay Then"//{im a HUSTLa ill take ya job like ya bitch}
You from jack town ??? It must mean yall "Masterbate-Men"//{He from jackson mississippi aka jack-town .. so jack off bka masterbating}

No Fighting Friends, Slugs as big as Heinkens, GET YA WEIGHT UP "Like you Diet-in"//{alot of killa mulis..you know heinkens are big, slugs = bullets he ain't working hard in dis game so he need to get his weight up}
Have ya crew steady dyin when, ya hood i'm drivin in You couldn't dodge it if you had the "spidy sense"// { he has spider man as his avy.. and you know spidy doges bullets with his spidy sense"}

Put it to your dome, YA KNOW ... imma let the "Chrome-Bake"//
To your "Bones-Break" and leave in the river of your "home state"//(MISSISSIPPI){you know one of da biggest rivers}

Is it Generic, that your family can't "spit lyrics"//{Generic = runs in ya famz }
Have FEAR PRICK, even deaf cliccs can't still "Hear-This"//{Deaf can't hear..but i'm so ill dey can't}

Wanna be thug, i'll leave this fake crip crippled/
you poppin off slugs,me and my niggas launching missiles/
trying to be hard, showcasing blue and black images(in his sig)/
you're pride will be scarred; leave u with black and blue blemishes/
you aint ready-to-flow, u like a ho....always ready-to-blow/
i'll chop u up and toss u up like confetti-to-throw/
wanna be street sergent, you just a bad-soulja'/
like Catholics at lent, this nigga gets passed-over/
like atheists-turned preachers, (i'll) make black a believer/
give u this holy ghost, well actually, its just a seizure/
cuz once i seize-ya, all of your worldly hope will leave-ya/
(you'll) wake up from ya coma, probably swearing you spoke-with-jesus/

quote:"Fake ass vocabulary, for this battle "Save The Grammar"//{He told me he has the best vocab on the site}"

what?????
i just got on this site dawg

Let's Get Some Votes In This Bitch! So Wuts Craccin ..uppin Dis Topic

uppin.........................

Voted For: lyrickz

Yo, I'mma have to go with lyrickz in this one. Lyrick zhad a few decent punches.

wanna be street sergent, you just a bad-soulja'/
like Catholics at lent, this nigga gets passed-over/

Black, I wasn't really feelin ya flow, u kinda over did tha Missippi thing. Yeah, it woulda been cool once...maybe twice, but u gotta play of otha stuff. Ya structure was kinda fucked...and I wasn't really feelin any of ya punches....

Sooo....vote goes to Lyrickz

quote:"cuz once i seize-ya, all of your worldly hope will leave-ya/
(you'll) wake up from ya coma, probably swearing you spoke-with-jesus/"

jus wanna say that the first line is supposed to have emphasis on the end like:"hope-will-leave-ya/......." to go with the end of the closer.

but anyway....uppin

Dats some bullshit ... but uppin this topic 4 votes..

uppin for vote........

can we get some mo' votes......

once again....upping for votes........................

This was feedback posted for lyrickz
 

werd, gud battle yooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo o

just uppin again...........

This was feedback posted for BLaCK_HEaRT
 

Voted For: BLaCK_HEaRT

Do i Really Need To Explain My Vote? Dis Blaccs Battle i mean DAMN..'Cmon now look at the verses in length for started and reading it blacc juss well theres no words to describe how badly u juss got knocked da fuck out lyrickz

Voted For: lyrickz

ahhaahahahhahah lmfao.....
cuz once i seize-ya, all of your worldly hope will leave-ya/
(you'll) wake up from ya coma, probably swearing you spoke-with-jesus/
^^^^^^^
hahahahaah lyricz good stuff .. here hard punch


IP:


Wanna be thug, i'll leave this fake crip crippled/
you poppin off slugs,me and my niggas launching missiles/
trying to be hard, showcasing blue and black images(in his sig)/
you're pride will be scarred; leave u with black and blue blemishes/
you aint ready-to-flow, u like a ho....always ready-to-blow/
i'll chop u up and toss u up like confetti-to-throw/
^^^^^^^^^
ahahah good werd play.. and great opener... (man fuck all this gangs and shit..thats why i hate snoop dogg.. .. he alright at timesbut .he a bitch... Pac a true man...

anyways back to the battle i'll chop u up and toss u up like confetti-to-throw/
wanna be street sergent, you just a bad-soulja'/
like Catholics at lent, this nigga gets passed-over/
^^^^^^^^^^^^
lolol ahahah lmfao..good stuf here Lyrics took one //// good battle here..
dat other guy hus in2 all them gangs and wat not... Elevate nuff said..
Lyrics good punches har vocab.. werd play wuz top notch..aiight good stuff..

return the favour.... in my battlesbelow...aiight

Voted For: BLaCK_HEaRT

yo black heart got my vote
his punches were harder and his personals were also
lyrickz u had some nice ones too but not as hard a black

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=199108
return the favor here at my battle

Voted For: lyrickz

Lyrickz:

Wanna be thug, i'll leave this fake crip crippled/
you poppin off slugs,me and my niggas launching missiles/
^^basically filler 3/10
trying to be hard, showcasing blue and black images(in his sig)/
you're pride will be scarred; leave u with black and blue blemishes/
^^ehh ok 4/10
you aint ready-to-flow, u like a ho....always ready-to-blow/
i'll chop u up and toss u up like confetti-to-throw/
^^good flow nice multies decent punch 7/10
wanna be street sergent, you just a bad-soulja'/
like Catholics at lent, this nigga gets passed-over/
^^dope bar nice meta 9/10
like atheists-turned preachers, (i'll) make black a believer/
give u this holy ghost, well actually, its just a seizure/
^^decent 5/10
cuz once i seize-ya, all of your worldly hope will leave-ya/
(you'll) wake up from ya coma, probably swearing you spoke-with-jesus/
^^no 2/10

Overall: 30/60 (50%)


Black_Heart:

You couldn't have hot bars even if you was in a africa Jail "Cell All Night"//
You can't tell this guy dosen't have lyrics he couldn't even "spell it right"//(Lyrickz)
^^nice nameplay decent meta 6/10
Fake ass vocabulary, for this battle "Save The Grammar"//
I'll leave a cut on his face longer than the goatee on "David-Banner"//
^^lol this was alright 6/10
When ya bitch top off, she fear-ful of sins, but still a "Dumb-Hoe"//
You a 6-0-1 Repsenta 6 Losses, 0 Wins, and "One-No-Show"//
^^ehh ok 4/10
I'm the answer but i ain't playing ball and make "Cheddar-in-Philly"//
I'll leave more bullet holes in your face, than the # of "Letters in Mississippi"//
^^decent 4/10
If i'm i go to your job, i'm taking ya work "You Ain't Making Pay Then"//
You from jack town ??? It must mean yall "Masterbate-Men"//
^^good bar 6/10
No Fighting Friends, Slugs as big as Heinkens, GET YA WEIGHT UP "Like you Diet-in"//
Have ya crew steady dyin when, ya hood i'm drivin in You couldn't dodge it if you had the "spidy sense"//
^^too stretched 3/10
Put it to your dome, YA KNOW ... imma let the "Chrome-Bake"//
To your "Bones-Break" and leave in the river of your "home state"//
^^decent bar 5/10
Is it Generic, that your family can't "spit lyrics"//
Have FEAR PRICK, even deaf cliccs can't still "Hear-This"//
^^no 3/10

Overall: 37/80 (46%)


Vote: Lyrickz


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