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Streetz vs Wes City
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6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 30 Check in by: 07-04-05 at 01:34 PM Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in. |
Wes City has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-04-05 01:13 PM.
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Like opposites of front flips ya gonna flop out
streetz got no class… like highschool dropouts And fuck this kid……………… I got him beat Everyone walks over him no wonder he’s street this aint a battle of skill, man you have no talent gotta be afraid of heights you aint up for the challenge cant top me we all know streetz is just a rookie and im excited….my post has never been this close pussy this kid is really hard and got me bored like wood and he is from the streets….of a suburban neighborhood ill run you over and drive over your heat im wes CITY….shit I OWN the STREETZ |
Streetz has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-04-05 01:27 PM.
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Wes admit im dope, even ur friends'll-wanna-vote-Matt/
only time u "DRAW LEAD" is when u SKETCHIN a "PENCIL" on a "NOTEPAD"/ i smoke-lads, while u tha kind ta hail-Cops, u get hit wit "SHELLS" but not tha kind a SNAILS-got/ Wes be like a "POSTMAN", tha way he delivers ojbects in "MALE'S-BOX/(mailbox, Queer) Streetz'll Fail-not, this kids tha kind ta run his mouth where tha D's-work/(snitch ta detective's) so ima have ta pull tha blade out, and put "3 STRIKES" down his chest, like an "Adidas" T-shirt/ ayo deze-hurt, my bullets im referin to, im leak this Punks-Hardened-Head/ tha only "SLUGS" Wes fuck wit, were in his Front-Garden-bed/(slugs=insects) Wes could have "VIAGRA" stuck in his throat, and still not VOCAL-HARD/ someone warn Wes, when i say ima "LAY ROUNDS ON THA HOUSE" i aint talkin bout shoutin alcholic drinks at tha LOCAL-BAR...(get it?) |
nice battle bruz, good luck, we uppin for votes.
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Voted For: Streetz
all i hav to say is......well done streetz......but if u wanna...cum battle me to see if u tough enough to be in my crew...NO 15 minutes after check in like what wes city tried to cheat....every house rules aiiight i'll check in asap Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
i'll gotta finish off deze other battles i got on and i'll battle u sometime soon, uppin on votes here
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Voted For: Streetz
Wes admit im dope, even ur friends'll-wanna-vote-Matt/ only time u "DRAW LEAD" is when u SKETCHIN a "PENCIL" on a "NOTEPAD"/ ^^whack....doesn't rhyme i smoke-lads, while u tha kind ta hail-Cops, u get hit wit "SHELLS" but not tha kind a SNAILS-got/ Wes be like a "POSTMAN", tha way he delivers ojbects in "MALE'S-BOX/(mailbox, Queer) ^^forced multis in 1st line....but nice wordplay Streetz'll Fail-not, this kids tha kind ta run his mouth where tha D's-work/(snitch ta detective's) so ima have ta pull tha blade out, and put "3 STRIKES" down his chest, like an "Adidas" T-shirt/ ^^ight..... ayo deze-hurt, my bullets im referin to, im leak this Punks-Hardened-Head/ tha only "SLUGS" Wes fuck wit, were in his Front-Garden-bed/(slugs=insects) ^^^played....... Wes could have "VIAGRA" stuck in his throat, and still not VOCAL-HARD/ someone warn Wes, when i say ima "LAY ROUNDS ON THA HOUSE" i aint talkin bout shoutin alcholic drinks at tha LOCAL-BAR ^^^Nah...........this one whack Structure your verse better.It was ugly and tough to read.Sometimes....people might not even look at your verse if it's structure bad.But you got potenial.U had some nice wordplay and shit in there.But you also had lines that didn't rhyme,forced multis,and some played concepts. Like opposites of front flips ya gonna flop out streetz got no class… like highschool dropouts ^^OK... And fuck this kid……………… I got him beat Everyone walks over him no wonder he’s street ^^Nice...... this aint a battle of skill, man you have no talent gotta be afraid of heights you aint up for the challenge ^^Nah.......weak cant top me we all know streetz is just a rookie and im excited….my post has never been this close pussy ^^A lil clique and weak this kid is really hard and got me bored like wood and he is from the streets….of a suburban neighborhood ^^Too simplisitic ill run you over and drive over your heat im wes CITY….shit I OWN the STREET ^^Self glorifyed U startd off nice with 2 nice punchlines.But then after that you fell off.U self glorified and was just to basic.U had nice structure and flow.Better than the other guy.But the reason you lost is because of punches. Vote-Streetz (VOTE IN LINK BELOW OR THIS VOTE WILL BE REMOVED) http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=197910 |
[QUOTE=K-Trini]Voted For: Streetz
Wes admit im dope, even ur friends'll-wanna-vote-Matt/ only time u "DRAW LEAD" is when u SKETCHIN a "PENCIL" on a "NOTEPAD"/ ^^whack....doesn't rhyme i thought did straight wit that bar, how dont it ryhme? its a nice multi, friends'll-wanna-vote-Matt pencil on-a notepad uppin for a KO i think. |
thats not a multi kis and you did not specify 3 votes = ko and slik flo's vote is being removed for hate/no explanation.......nice try kid
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shut up...just coz u lost in our battle...and i reported u so many times coz u just a hater...just watch..in 3 days u will be removed from RV for PMing people
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ok keep dreaming.......................................... .....
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PS........just coz hes up by 2 and u none....no y...coz u 1 rude son
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This was feedback posted for Wes City
ill get ppl to vote guys..........................
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Voted For: Wes City
dopeness....u spit wayyyyyyyyyyyyyy better than a new comer would, or so i imagined. you both had good verses, but streets, yours fell apart after the adidas line structure-wes flow-wes metaz-wes overall...i think wes ripped this 1 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Streetz
Flow- Tie Punches- Streets Personals- Streets Mets- Wes City Multies- Streets Wordplay- Streets Complexity- Tie Creativity- Tie Opener- Streets Closer- Streets Vocab- None Vote- Streets I Thought Streets Edged This Out.. Seems Like He Put More Effort In His Punches.. Wes City Didnt Have Ne That Stood Out.. They Where Played.. Streets Just Came Out With Multies.. And Punches.. Thats Why He Won Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Wes City
vote=wes city his verse was kinda simple wit simple rhymes but had some decent punches. the personals in his verse were nice... the "im wes city, shit i own the streetz" was a really nice line. that was his best line in the verse. the structure was alright and was waaay better than streetz's structure and the rhyme scheme was better too. streetz's verse was really newbish. the quotes and /// and all them unneeded explanations really fucked his verse. none of his punches were hard hittin and the concepts were pretty wack. gay lines are soo played. i liked the adidas line but nothin else was worth mentioning. with only one good line and a wack verse from streets one good line and an average verse from wes, this battle goes to City!!! V/ Wes City |
alright good lookin, uppin for votes
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wtf's this 2-1 him??, one of my votes has been takin off but that woulda made it 2-2
why tha fuck u bitchin to peeps wes city???? |
EYO....battle me streetz.........its either now or never
i aint got battle cred so u set it up.....all the normal house rules aiight |
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cause "peeps" aint followin the rules.......................................... |
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^^^^inadequate vote????? wtf, how tha fucks that an inadaquate vote?? if that is then wtf's that vote by the king d.hug???? 4 lines of bullshit... ex.haust has left a whole grid of explanation and 3 lines of feedback, i feel cheated, wes city duck ridin mods to help u win is tha only way u'll win.... can i a mod fix this problem up please, this battle should be 2-2 at least. uppin for votes |
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it specifically says in the rules that your not allowed to vote like this punches- wordplay metas- ect. he broke the rules not me get over it |
cheers tha problems been fixed, uppin on votes lads.
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Voted For: Wes City
dang yo honestly its hard chooseing a person to win this one. a close battle man both had good punches. i think this could be the only battle ive seen thats not one sided. im gonna vote for wes cause his personals. thats the only difference between u two. Everyone walks over him no wonder he’s street im wes CITY….shit I OWN the STREETZ these two personal pulled me over to vote wes |
a yo repay the favor by dropping an honest vote at my battle against slik flo please
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aye uppin on this
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a i dropped a vote here yall could repay the favor by voting honestly on my battles
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drop a link cause i cant find ya battle. . . . ................ |
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Voted For: Wes City
lmao Wes crushed. He had witty punches and decent wording. Streetz was to basic and the quotations were herbin. Fa real. |
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Voted For: Streetz
Flow- Tie Punches- Streets Personals- Streets Mets- Wes City Multies- Streets Wordplay- Streets Complexity- Tie Creativity- Tie Opener- Streets Closer- Streets Vocab- None Vote- Streets I Thought Streets Edged This Out.. Seems Like He Put More Effort In His Punches.. Wes City Didnt Have Ne That Stood Out.. They Where Played.. Streets Just Came Out With Multies.. And Punches.. Thats Why He Won Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. __________________ why did i lose that vote?? |
because that voting style is illegal.....like i said before
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Voted For: Wes City
Wes City...ya opener was a little weak and ya closer was self glory... other than those two things ya bars were hard hittin'... they flowed really good and ya structure was really good.... best bar: this aint a battle of skill, man you have no talent gotta be afraid of heights you aint up for the challenge worst bar: ill run you over and drive over your heat im wes CITY….shit I OWN the STREETZ Streetz...ya was also a little weak... ya closer was sttttrrrreeeettccchhheeddd... so was most of ya bars... makin bars that stretched ruins the punch, flow and structure to the whole verse... ya punches were good but ya have to work on the structure *No hate just honest opinion* |
sorry.... forgot to put this in the vote....
Streetz best bar: Wes could have "VIAGRA" stuck in his throat, and still not VOCAL-HARD/ someone warn Wes, when i say ima "LAY ROUNDS ON THA HOUSE" i aint talkin bout shoutin alcholic drinks at tha LOCAL-BAR...(get it?) ^^^ even though it was stretched the first line was really good.... 2nd line would of made it hot if it was shorter and to the point worst bar: Wes admit im dope, even ur friends'll-wanna-vote-Matt/ only time u "DRAW LEAD" is when u SKETCHIN a "PENCIL" on a "NOTEPAD"/ |
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