Pen N' Paper vs Verse190
 

Battle Rules:
No Feeding

6 - 10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 07-07-05 at 06:55 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Pen N' Paper has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-04-05 07:02 PM.

Verse190 has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-04-05 07:03 PM.

hahahahaha, excellent. and no votes from your b.o.b. k-trini, cause hes next

yea man so if he votes it just gets DQued then wuteva........

your a loser, i really couldnt stress the point further//
your word ill bust worser than your breasts in joint gurders//
cause all your raps are murdered like they never had life in em//
your rappin fucced up like i spiked your mic wit vicatin//
what a site it is seeing you question my credibility//
the city i rep makes florida a jelly bean//
your profusly stupid without a taste in music//
this cock raps without punchlines like slapboxing roosters//
its humerous cause hell probably stay true to his intergers//
last time i check, hes 0-9, getting SWITCHED like his signatures//

for real though, how many times have you lost?
SWITCHED = hit with a switch + hes had like 10 differnet ones, the punk ass

still aint post? you looking ugly for the picture...

yo its 3 days to drop man i got other things to do than rap on the net aight so calm down im givin u time to be4 u get merked ok bitch

hahahahaha, you still talking shit!!! be a man and fuccin drop you bunns ass faggot

hahahahahahaha!!! and he got a new sig now too!!! goddam you helpin me out by being so wanksta, i appreciate it
now post you bitch, cause you know you aint got nothin better to do, i seen you profile, 73 posts a day. tell me that aint herbish?

u been here since april 2004 and only have 89 posts????? cmon fag u drop bitch ill drop wheneva ok bitch

cause i aint a herb your bitch ass. see, i dont know what ya do in miami, but we GO OUTSIDE in NYC. faggot ass, post already so i can get my win

uppin this battle up lets get some votes on this ez battle..........

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wow, that DID suck. you talk all that shit for that? thanks for the easy knockout. oh yeah, and 190 is my street you wannabe

man stfu mn u didnt even ahve no personaels or anythin man didnt even mention my name.......lol u suck and i kno that was bitten.......lol

hahahahaha, since when do i gotta mention your wack ass name?? your sig switching tendencies was a personal, you lack of music sence was a personal, you being a loser is personal. thats your life right there. how the fucc could i bite someone and still peg you down with such truth? ohhhh, i see what i missed, the fact that you cant read. my bad

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uppin.........................uppin............... .

This was feedback posted for Pen N' Paper
 

POLLS.......

Decent drop, you serve n murder, i like that yo

:shoot:

Its nothin.

anyway....
can we please get some fuccin votes? uppin

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come on people it aint fuccin hard to vote , this thread got like 1000 views and not one of you can vote something? well returen the favor.
upppppppppppppppin\

uppin this fo more votes cmon voting plz..........

uppin this for votes cmon peeps...................

wtf? post some fuccin votes!!!!uppinuppinuppin....

uppin this man..........uppin...........cmon

uppin this cmon votes.....................................

uppin for this tired ass battle..... vote!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

uppin this fo votes cmon pplz.....................

can we get some fuccin votes???? shit!!! we will return the favor!!!
uppin

Voted For: Pen N' Paper

You win because you had punches and flow and your lines made sense.

Verse: what a site it is seeing you question my credibility//
the city i rep makes florida a jelly bean//
your profusly stupid without a taste in music//
this cock raps without punchlines like slapboxing roosters

^this made no sense to me, had no punches, and didnt even rhyme. the city i rep makes florida look like a jelly been? wtff..
that line was wack as shit. then you just post random sentances TRYING to diss him that dont even rhyme

Pen'N Paper.. you need mad work on your wordplay. your lines were longer than stretch armstrong. however, you did make frequent attempts at similies and metaphors, and flow was there, actually looked like a rap. pz.

thnx for voting uppin this for more votes plz.......

This was feedback posted for Pen N' Paper
 

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Voted For: Pen N' Paper

Verse -
ok this waz hapnin'.. nice personals n punchlines but yo flow was fucked up, no creativity, there wus a forced rhyme (that's bad)

Pen -
whoa! nice punchlines, creative punches, but still gotta fix that struture

opener - tie
closing - Pen

fav lines:
Verse:
"its humerous cause hell probably stay true to his intergers//
last time i check, hes 0-9, getting SWITCHED like his signatures"

Pen:
"Just face it man ur a piece of shit, ur compared to acid cuz u a waste
Tryin to start e-beef but he aint got no guts, so he gots his intestines to taste"

CONCLUSION
both had great personals but pen n paper's wuz more hard hittin' no hate...

V/ Pen

aight thnx for voting uppin this..................3-0 will be a k.o.

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uppin dammit vtes plz.............................

Voted For: Pen N' Paper

Pen N' Paper- your verse was pretty good...yo punches were good but didnt seem good lets just say decent...but they were good enough to win...your structure was blah...easy to read n all...could be fixed up a little bit...had some nice personals up there....but overall- 7.9/10...You got this battle with just simple and wayyyy better punches...

Verse190- your verse was aight, but seemed like a 10 year old raps like that seriously...yo punches were decent...nothing speical i saw...they didnt seem to hit hard or connect well...yo structure was good...but elevate on punches kid seriously...overall-5.0/10...Just elevate n all you'll get better hoepfully...