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HoTgIrL06 07-05-05 04:45 PM

HoTgIrL06 vs one mic
 
Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 07-08-05 at 04:45 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

System 07-05-05 04:46 PM

HoTgIrL06 has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-05-05 04:46 PM.

System 07-05-05 04:47 PM

one mic has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-05-05 04:47 PM.

HoTgIrL06 07-05-05 04:54 PM

Are you tryna battle me cause u know i'm a girl?
If so, you gonna get burnt as if yo black ass waz toastin in hell.

U betta bring yo A game, even though I am a rookie.
Wen I get thru beatin u, Imma be yo friend, n make u a cookie.

I bet ur momma left u, cause u were so fuckin ugly.
U prolly went around sayin, "Are u my mother?" lyke da ugly duckling.

Imma expert in tha rap game, my flows flow swiftly.
I'll shoot u in da mouth, n have u talkin like Fifty.

U a stupid ass dude, damn u stupid as a bitch.
Imma help u out myself, n get u HOOKED ON PHONICS.

Aint no shame in my game, cause i know, i know how 2 rhymn.
So unlike you I put my hand on my keyboard, n type my lines in no time.

Have u ever watched Freddy Krueger, if not u should.
Cause he favors u, I think he yo long lost brother from the hood.

J.D 07-07-05 02:24 PM

yo, uh, this hoe's Jumpin at a chance to get an easy win/
it wont happen now, have to wait until we meet again/
your lyrics are full of played punches and normal gunplay/
never takin off, like you was stuck on a runway/
my tongue spray, cant you see, we dont match, i roll with heat and thunder/
cant get a man with your looks, so you're after stevie wonder/
why you even on this site? you obviously wack fam/
when it comes to "swallowin", this bitch does it faster than pac-man/

J.D 07-07-05 02:25 PM

no hate, just rhymin. uppin.......................

HoTgIrL06 07-07-05 03:14 PM

nice free one mic

J.D 07-07-05 05:11 PM

yer you had a good verse aswell. uppin............

.Barz Of Steel. 07-08-05 02:22 AM

This was feedback posted for HoTgIrL06
 
U betta bring yo A game, even though I am a rookie.
Wen I get thru beatin u, Imma be yo friend, n make u a cookie.

WOW

LMFAO

J.D 07-08-05 01:45 PM

uppin..........

J.D 07-09-05 06:15 AM

uppin..........

flow verse 07-09-05 09:00 AM

Voted For: one mic

At the begining of one mic's drop i thought it was a tie or maybe even leaning toward HoTgIrL06 . . . but one mic closed it out . . . "cant get a man with your looks, so you're after stevie wonder/
why you even on this site? you obviously wack fam/
when it comes to "swallowin", this bitch does it faster than pac-man/" ------- that did it . . .

J.D 07-09-05 10:09 AM

thanx for the vote man. uppin.....................

J.D 07-09-05 01:46 PM

uppin...........

J.D 07-10-05 06:35 AM

uppin, c'mon people...............................

AITZ 07-10-05 07:03 AM

Voted For: HoTgIrL06

gurl u no what ur doin and u got him i recon.
~1`

J.D 07-10-05 12:16 PM

appreciate it for votin, but that aint well explained! lol, uppin...

J.D 07-11-05 02:15 PM

uppin...........

Da King 07-11-05 07:01 PM

Voted For: one mic

One mic got this shit. no offense hotgirl but you fucking suck. i hope ur just playing around. anyway one mic had betta metas, punches, and his shit mad sense. hotgirl you need to practice.

Viva 07-11-05 07:29 PM

This was feedback posted for HoTgIrL06
 
didnt no who to vote 4 so checkin polls instead...

J.D 07-12-05 02:20 PM

uppin............................................. ..

Tanto 07-12-05 03:16 PM

This was feedback posted for one mic
 
you both are wack mc's
im sorry but, hotgirl stay on your knees

you'll do better and have more hits
if you stay home and lick my dick

not to omit you one mic
you missed all your punches on this un even fight

dayum thats a shame
bye bye

J.D 07-13-05 02:46 PM

yo, if gonna make feedback, make it worth hearin lol. uppin this shit

Mc Mystique 07-14-05 09:18 AM

Voted For: one mic

lol.. Faster then pac man thats hot.... hands down...

J.D 07-15-05 02:19 PM

uppin.................

J.D 07-16-05 06:38 AM

uppin this shit, c'mon people............

J.D 07-16-05 11:58 AM

uppin..........

Willa 07-16-05 02:02 PM

Voted For: one mic

i guess u win
ur flow was better but basic work on ur vocab
no personals whatsoever so get some
ur metaphores werent really good
girl
ur flow was off in ur opener lol
work on ur vocab
work on personals
work on metaphores
u didnt really d anything good lol

Sargeant Sarcasm 07-16-05 07:19 PM

This was feedback posted for HoTgIrL06
 
[SARCASM]you're the best text battler i've ever seen[/SARCASM]

Nynth Degree 07-16-05 09:41 PM

This was feedback posted for HoTgIrL06
 
Quote:
Originally Posted by HoTgirl06
U betta bring yo A game, even though I am a rookie.
Wen I get thru beatin u, Imma be yo friend, n make u a cookie.

^ You are my favorite textcee on all of RV. :)

To.DA.T 07-16-05 09:52 PM

Voted For: one mic

Are you tryna battle me cause u know i'm a girl?
If so, you gonna get burnt as if yo black ass waz toastin in hell.
^^^no.....worded terribly and just whack
U betta bring yo A game, even though I am a rookie.
Wen I get thru beatin u, Imma be yo friend, n make u a cookie.
^^^^Again...worded bad,basic,and just whack
I bet ur momma left u, cause u were so fuckin ugly.
U prolly went around sayin, "Are u my mother?" lyke da ugly duckling.
^^^NO....basic and stupuid concept
Imma expert in tha rap game, my flows flow swiftly.
I'll shoot u in da mouth, n have u talkin like Fifty.
^^^stupuid...not one punch trowned yet either
U a stupid ass dude, damn u stupid as a bitch.
Imma help u out myself, n get u HOOKED ON PHONICS.
^^^Basic.........
Aint no shame in my game, cause i know, i know how 2 rhymn.
So unlike you I put my hand on my keyboard, n type my lines in no time.
^^^^NO....
Have u ever watched Freddy Krueger, if not u should.
Cause he favors u, I think he yo long lost brother from the hood.
^^^NO.....not one punch in it
Not one punch in your verse.You were talking about beatin him up or some bullshit like dat.Ur lines were basic and whack.You had no wordplay or metaphors.U had nothing here.

yo, uh, this hoe's Jumpin at a chance to get an easy win/
it wont happen now, have to wait until we meet again/
^^^no....suks like hell
your lyrics are full of played punches and normal gunplay/
never takin off, like you was stuck on a runway/
^^suks..but first line...she had normal gunplay lines...but she got NO punches
my tongue spray, cant you see, we dont match, i roll with heat and thunder/
cant get a man with your looks, so you're after stevie wonder/
^^^NO....basic
why you even on this site? you obviously wack fam/
when it comes to "swallowin", this bitch does it faster than pac-man/
^^Lmao....best line and only punch

Well...you atuoumatically won for actually throwing a punch.That girl had none.U had a lot of basic shit in your verse.It's all about werdplay and metas.

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