Diss To Animosity
 

DISS TO ANIMOSITY

ANIMOSITY your plan is an atrocity you stand with curiosity
Knowing your velocity is slow and like cheap oil your viscosity
Boil under heat so you can’t toil and thunder streets with stamina
You poke and jab but a joke with vocab so your grammar
Has no glamour you spit the verbs of herds stuff don’t hammer
Microphones like Mike Jones your type gone with the wind
Like Clark Gable you don’t spark fable, heart not able to blend
My friend, you only glitter with yuppies even with a litter
Of puppies you bark long, art wrong can’t uplift this critter
Need stronger juice you no longer produce good rhymes
Should resign as the man who never prospered with his lines
I offer you hope but you came softer with quote best accept
My help then step with pride, missed the appointment overslept
You need practice don’t front whackness is up this month
Look never test a winner you can only be a guest at my dinner
Best wipe feets before you enter

DONT YOU FUCKIN GET IT YET


Youre shit is weak...you need to elevate so much and stop makin these stupid diss tracks..............THEY SUCKKKKKKKKKK

Look never test a winner you can only be a guest at my dinner
Best wipe feets before you enter

WHAT THE HELL IS THIS

OMG this was crap and im not just sayin that cause ur wack.....but u are a total wack head........and you dont want to fuck wit Animosity....but its to late now consider urself OWNED already..

I offer you hope but you came softer with quote best accept
My help then step with pride, missed the appointment overslept
^^^^ur weak face the facts be a man and admit it

yo this shit wasnt good it was wack but good concept...yup...just work on ya shit or just stop rapping its yur decission?...2/10....~1~

Hey Man These Cats Can't Multi-rhyme That's Why They Act So Stupid On This Site Right Here None Of These Cats Even Close To My Ability Ask Any Pllatinum Artist About Them Multi's You Cats Are A Bunch Of Whack Fuck That Can't Multi-rhyme

lmfao....yeah u got the skills ta sign shady/aftermath :roll:
u just fuckin retarded get a fuckin life and realize what the fuck ur doin..oh he's merked cuz he's invited as a guest for dinner :wtf:

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i think we should call OMB over here and teach this wack ass a lesson....

Need stronger juice you no longer produce good rhymes
Should resign as the man who never prospered with his lines

^ i laughed at this line...although it does kinda contradict itself, if you think about it...

Straight Off The Hook Yall Cats Use Played Out Shit I Come With New Shit Every Damn Day

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damn, son.... thought the whole thing was a run-on sentence... had to backtrack to figure out what the hell you were talking about... some shit didn't even make sense... that viscosity line was terrible... ya multies need adjusting... there is a tut on this on the main page... find it... use it... for a diss it was n't hard-hitting at all... no real punches... you gotta put some real truth behind ya shit to make it connect... all you did was basically freestyle some shyt that kinda sorta sounded aiight together... that ain't gon cut it... if you gon diss someone publicly you need to come at 'em hard or stay on the porch, nah mean?... no hate... just real talks...

3/10

my link (http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=198432

cats should wake up and compare themselves before talking doe

your right you do come out with new shit every day...new wack shit that people tell is wack but u still think your a hot piece of shit...fuck off with these lil open mics

lmao..i think we might have ta call the men wit white jackets for this crackhead

shit be off the heezy

Your shit is wack... And I aint even trying to beef with you, its just the truth.

And your shit will stay wack unless you realise your faults. No point sayin people dont understand your multis and arent close to your level... I understand multis, and yours are forced... real forced... theres very little sense in that whole verse. And I bet you aint even gonna realise that... Youre just gonna tell me im wack and I dont understand it. Bnd if you do that, you wont get any better... Instead of talkin defensive shit and getting insulted when someone points out a fault, try to improve it...

cats can't say why its whack that means its all good ok thanks to everyone for responding for real

i said why.... just keepin it real... either take the advice or don't ...that's up to you

Your set ups suck, and then you completely change the topic of the punch. Work on keeping a bar relatively bout an idea.

Animosity man you got served likei people in a restaurant HA! HA! HA!

chill out you stepped and got handle fairly easy

Are you an alias?

CuntHead Set It up Fag Boy

MADDRAPPER u pathetic

this is over ole boy got stomped on now respect me for having skills up in here

dang....thats all i got to say, i think you know you arent that good but your just trying to play it off so people think your an alias or this isnt you, just admit it your stuff really wusnt that great, i dont mean to hate or nuttin but if you admit to your errors people will respect you more than if you trying to act hella hard with a verse like that....so i guess wut im trying to say...being the new guy and all.....is just be humble and elevate with the rest of us......

shit was off the hook if anyone think they can do better show me 9BUT ANYWAY THANKS FOR THE RESPONSES DOE)