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HoTgIrL06 07-06-05 09:40 PM

MC:Philosopher vs HoTgIrL06
 
Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 07-09-05 at 09:40 PM

Must drop verse in 360 minutes after check in.

System 07-06-05 09:41 PM

HoTgIrL06 has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-06-05 09:41 PM.

HoTgIrL06 07-06-05 09:48 PM

You Claim I Was Runnin From U, Nigga Please Why Run?
I'm Not Scared Of U, I'll Shoot Yo Philosophy Lookin Ass Wit A Uzi Gun.

U Know What, Ima Have U Ridin In A Hearse.
If U Keep On Stalkin My Ass Everytime I Get On Rapverse.

Mc:philosopher Im Sorry 2 Tell U This, But U A Whimp.
I'll Fry Yo Ass In Yo Own Skillet, Like U Was A Piece Of Shrimp.

Where U Gettin Yo Punchlines U Dumbass Homo?
Boooo.....nigga If U Ask Me, U Gone Be Da Next Lil' Romeo.

Nigga I'm Sorry To Tell U Dis But Yo Ass Is Mad Corny.
I Know U Neva Had A Girl, So Battle'n Me Must Make U Horny.

HoTgIrL06 07-07-05 12:37 AM

mc: philosopher, u need to hurry up and check in.

System 07-07-05 06:42 AM

MC:Philosopher has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-07-05 06:42 AM.

Confucius 07-07-05 07:05 AM

somebody get a thermometer her temperatures a negative 2
so u wouldnt be a hot girl if cash money wrote the song for u//
hotgirl now come on i think your names a lier
cause she'll still have a cold if i set this chick on fire//
the only way u can get hot is if u die and got to hell
cause u couldnt drop hot shit if u just came from taco bell//
the batlles here now the pressures on u feeling it
i turn the heat on and this chicks still shivering//
its illegal to be this good like crystal meth
but bri couldnt spit fire with dragon breath//
hot girl................ cold lady is a correction
the only way she burning me is if i dont use protection

keystyled something quick

Confucius 07-07-05 07:15 AM

okay that was a solid flow let the votes choose the winner

Confucius 07-07-05 01:21 PM

uppin this battle to get some votes in here drop a link

Confucius 07-07-05 05:23 PM

uppin............................................. .................................................. .........

Confucius 07-07-05 08:53 PM

uppin for some votes........................................

bdotones 07-07-05 09:49 PM

Voted For: MC:Philosopher

somebody get a thermometer her temperatures a negative 2
so u wouldnt be a hot girl if cash money wrote the song for u//
hotgirl now come on i think your names a lier
cause she'll still have a cold if i set this chick on fire//
the only way u can get hot is if u die and got to hell
cause u couldnt drop hot shit if u just came from taco bell//
the batlles here now the pressures on u feeling it
i turn the heat on and this chicks still shivering//
its illegal to be this good like crystal meth
but bri couldnt spit fire with dragon breath//
hot girl................ cold lady is a correction
the only way she burning me is if i dont use protection

hot girl your verse was ok, but you have to put more word play and use harder punches

philosopher won this battle handily
punches, hella hard
word play, ok
great structure

vote on my battle at this link
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=198435

Confucius 07-08-05 09:01 AM

uppin............................................. .............................

C-Hood 07-08-05 09:33 AM

Voted For: HoTgIrL06

MC P
somebody get a thermometer her temperatures a negative 2
so u wouldnt be a hot girl if cash money wrote the song for u//...
ok i am feelin it
hotgirl now come on i think your names a lier
cause she'll still have a cold if i set this chick on fire//
ok...not very creative
the only way u can get hot is if u die and got to hell
cause u couldnt drop hot shit if u just came from taco bell//
are you serious....wow this was nice..LMAO
the batlles here now the pressures on u feeling it
i turn the heat on and this chicks still shivering//
this was an ok attempt at a personal
its illegal to be this good like crystal meth
but bri couldnt spit fire with dragon breath//
haha...nice
hot girl................ cold lady is a correction
the only way she burning me is if i dont use protection//
great finisher...this had me rollin


Breakdown-An actual good verse....wasn't very complex but the punches in it made up for it...real nice overall rate is 8/10


You Claim I Was Runnin From U, Nigga Please Why Run?
I'm Not Scared Of U, I'll Shoot Yo Philosophy Lookin Ass Wit A Uzi Gun.
gun play wit no creativity=PLAYED
U Know What, Ima Have U Ridin In A Hearse.
If U Keep On Stalkin My Ass Everytime I Get On Rapverse.
ok
Mchilosopher Im Sorry 2 Tell U This, But U A Whimp.
I'll Fry Yo Ass In Yo Own Skillet, Like U Was A Piece Of Shrimp.
Elementary
Where U Gettin Yo Punchlines U Dumbass Homo?
Boooo.....nigga If U Ask Me, U Gone Be Da Next Lil' Romeo.
this is a no no
Nigga I'm Sorry To Tell U Dis But Yo Ass Is Mad Corny.
I Know U Neva Had A Girl, So Battle'n Me Must Make U Horny.
haha good finisher...


Breakdown-this wasn't very good...i liked your verse V.S. me better then this...this was real elementary and not very creative...if you put more thought into your rhymes it would be better...overal rate of this verse= 4/10



VOTE-MC:Philosopher


Vote switched

C-Hood 07-08-05 09:34 AM

um...my fault i voted in the wrong slot...that vote was intended for MC Philosopher

Confucius 07-08-05 12:36 PM

uppin............................................. ......

Confucius 07-08-05 09:34 PM

yo uppun and can sombodoy fix that little voting problem

Confucius 07-09-05 09:15 AM

uppin for votes in here drop a link

Confucius 07-09-05 01:33 PM

yea uppin for some votes in here drop your link and u get an honest vote back

flow verse 07-09-05 02:10 PM

Voted For: MC:Philosopher

You Claim I Was Runnin From U, Nigga Please Why Run?
I'm Not Scared Of U, I'll Shoot Yo Philosophy Lookin Ass Wit A Uzi Gun.

Elementary—I see where you going with it but could have been better

U Know What, Ima Have U Ridin In A Hearse.
If U Keep On Stalkin My Ass Everytime I Get On Rapverse.

Ok— not over the edge but ok

Mc hilosopher Im Sorry 2 Tell U This, But U A Whimp.
I'll Fry Yo Ass In Yo Own Skillet, Like U Was A Piece Of Shrimp.

Still Ok--- I see the wordplay but I think u could have been more creative with it

Where U Gettin Yo Punchlines U Dumbass Homo?
Boooo.....nigga If U Ask Me, U Gone Be Da Next Lil' Romeo.

I thought it was just funny . . . I liked the line J

Nigga I'm Sorry To Tell U Dis But Yo Ass Is Mad Corny.
I Know U Neva Had A Girl, So Battle'n Me Must Make U Horny.

Good finisher --- especially how it connected back to the stalking line . . .

IP:
somebody get a thermometer her temperatures a negative 2
so u wouldnt be a hot girl if cash money wrote the song for u//

OK----- kinda elementary but definitely better than hotgirl’s opener

hotgirl now come on i think your names a lier
cause she'll still have a cold if i set this chick on fire//

Again kinda simply

the only way u can get hot is if u die and got to hell
cause u couldnt drop hot shit if u just came from taco bell//

LIKE IT------

the batlles here now the pressures on u feeling it
i turn the heat on and this chicks still shivering//

OK---

its illegal to be this good like crystal meth
but bri couldnt spit fire with dragon breath//

Not impressive @ all--

hot girl................ cold lady is a correction
the only way she burning me is if i dont use protection

LOL----- Yea crazy closer --- I’ll give it to you

Also MC: Philosopher, I like how you held the “cold” motif--- a motif is a reoccurring theme for anyone who didn’t know---
TRUTH

Confucius 07-09-05 04:39 PM

yo yo yo yea uppin for some votes in here drop your link and u get an honest vote back

Confucius 07-09-05 07:59 PM

uppin for some votes in here u know the rutine drop a link ill hit u back

Confucius 07-10-05 09:28 AM

uppin need a few more votes to end this battle .........

Confucius 07-10-05 01:01 PM

uppin need some more votes in here....................

Confucius 07-10-05 06:49 PM

uppin for some votes in here drop your link ill hit u back

lyrical mage 07-10-05 07:03 PM

Voted For: HoTgIrL06

You Claim I Was Runnin From U, Nigga Please Why Run?
I'm Not Scared Of U, I'll Shoot Yo Philosophy Lookin Ass Wit A Uzi Gun.
nice opener
U Know What, Ima Have U Ridin In A Hearse.
If U Keep On Stalkin My Ass Everytime I Get On Rapverse.
ha ha good punch
Mchilosopher Im Sorry 2 Tell U This, But U A Whimp.
I'll Fry Yo Ass In Yo Own Skillet, Like U Was A Piece Of Shrimp.
ok
Where U Gettin Yo Punchlines U Dumbass Homo?
Boooo.....nigga If U Ask Me, U Gone Be Da Next Lil' Romeo.
ok
Nigga I'm Sorry To Tell U Dis But Yo Ass Is Mad Corny.
I Know U Neva Had A Girl, So Battle'n Me Must Make U Horny.
not a bad ending 5/10

somebody get a thermometer her temperatures a negative 2
so u wouldnt be a hot girl if cash money wrote the song for u//good opener
hotgirl now come on i think your names a lier
cause she'll still have a cold if i set this chick on fire//
mad funny
the only way u can get hot is if u die and got to hell
cause u couldnt drop hot shit if u just came from taco bell//
i get it tight
the batlles here now the pressures on u feeling it
i turn the heat on and this chicks still shivering//
ok
its illegal to be this good like crystal meth
but bri couldnt spit fire with dragon breath//
good one haha
hot girl................ cold lady is a correction
the only way she burning me is if i dont use protection
mad closer off the chain
7/10

overall i think mc phil came more and had better punches
if hottgirl would have came a little better she would have won


Vote switched

lyrical mage 07-10-05 07:05 PM

yo i meant to vote for MC:Philosopher changed vote somebody

Confucius 07-11-05 08:11 AM

yea lets get that vote fixed but still uppin for votes

Confucius 07-11-05 01:29 PM

uppin one more vote to win lets get it and if your slik flo dont vote bitch

RhymnSicC 07-11-05 01:56 PM

Voted For: MC:Philosopher

yea u got diz one mc: philosopher u had sum nice punches...like 4 ex. hotgirl now come on i think your names a lier
cause she'll still have a cold if i set this chick on fire//.....
the only way u can get hot is if u die and got to hell
cause u couldnt drop hot shit if u just came from taco bell//...
and da best line of em all is...hot girl................ cold lady is a correction
the only way she burning me is if i dont use protection....dat shit was mad fiyah rite dere, it juz ended everything yo

Hotgirl u had a few nice punches to...like for example..
U Know What, Ima Have U Ridin In A Hearse.
If U Keep On Stalkin My Ass Everytime I Get On Rapverse....
yo best line was da last one...Nigga I'm Sorry To Tell U Dis But Yo Ass Is Mad Corny.
I Know U Neva Had A Girl, So Battle'n Me Must Make U Horny....
But u needed to come a lil harder.

so my vote goes 2 Mc: philosopher


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