R.A.W. Diss....So Many Bars of Keystyling
 

mic check one,two my lyrics gon calm you,
cuz i'm the top gun like tom cruise,
2 faced hypocrital nigga how tephlon move,
rap phenomenom, i'm strapped n arm'd with bombs too,
can't harm the dude cuz like a horny bitch on the rag yall suck,
just a warning spits towards u fags consider it luck,
chief how am i gonna diss u with personal spits,
when to me you don't even exist,
why u fuckin with vick cuz like gas i'm raising to an all time high,
sit n shit on all yalls fucking spits so now u can say yalls rhymes fly,
look in the eyes of ur idol, but don't stare at me too hard,
u read of me in the bible, jus air out cuz noone knows who you are.....


Just lettin teph know,
you reap what you so
whats funny tho, nigga all huggy on my nuts over msn,
could finish it now but i'ma leave him guessin....
whats next!!!

i'ma pass the word and thats realtalk,
and the underground is war, thats truth like how he feel balls,

....................ouch.....................


this verse is proof i fuck up stanzas,
couple bars of death and thats what i'ma hand ya,
call me ludacris but i'ma stand up n rip these assholes,
naht tryna be rude n shit but yall spit wack flows,
I ain't hit a bitch for a week but today i smack hos,
shark nigga neva bit scripts but i attack tho...
I'm north of carolina, proven fact slates above stan,
movin gats, ya face get slugged man...
I rip ciphers iller than you,now known the infamous killer of crews,
Bitch, Vick got rhyme books bigger than you.


When you talk about a great emcee, you gotta mention-me
so i high i must have hemp in me, for u i give no sympathy



lmao if u don't get anylines then forget about it..
links-on the way

Flow was ight.....but I didn't like the content.The disses in particualr were weak.Need more personals.90% of an OM diss should be personals.U had a lot of shit that could be directed to anyone.Get more personals.

LOL Shitty


I Thought You Was gonna do some seirous shit like SOme seirous Shit LOL

man This is average

But I Wouldnt Care for battle

Accept it whore

6 lines
1hr check
1he drop
3-0 ko
4-1 ko
House rules

You down whore

chea good looks

ha serious shit..? muahaha on yall nope
quik key to light the match

musta been good enuff for u to ask for a battle....;)

chump

Do You Wanna Battle or Not Ass cake ?
...............

Yo Vick...................you in a crew???And why ya beefin with RAW?

Bcuz he got kicked off for being to wack

so he was cut for takin space

You in RAW?...........if not..then wat ur problem with him?

well i Told him he could diss raw Jus leave my name outta it but he still put my lil 10 mins of fame in it so I told him if he did then we gonna batle so now we bout to battle

Do You Wanna Battle Or Not You Sorry Excuse for a MC

Battle him Vick..........dun be scared.....................

Thats the Point He is Scared he sittin here hangin around the OM Area and aint replying

Im Setting up The battle i fyu decline then your a bitch and you betta not mention my name no more

lmao...love how u stick aroun my piece...

Drop a link to an Om you have left feedback on or thsi will be closed

hey this was nice but th evocab wasn't great at all overall ok piece got your point across for real loved the opening lines best

mic check one,two my lyrics gon calm you,
cuz i'm the top gun like tom cruise,
2 faced hypocrital nigga how tephlon move

this OM=completely weak and terminated soon......and it was mostly stupid in my opinion cuz you tried to aim this at the crew but then you spit about stanza...thats one person of the whole crew..you mixed up ya concept...and ya structure was the worst i've seen for a while....flow was aight...punches were wack...personals lacked...vocab was plain....opener was ok and closer didnt make since because it was choppy...

overall-3/10

keep workin on your diss tracks but not towards RAW or even me because I will come back with heat....werdness

haha ur gay..

hate is weak....honestly
give honest feed

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2275046
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=198806

u dumbass
the structure was fucked up for a reason

This verse is proof i fuck up stanzas,

whole reason i fucked up the structure

god ur wack..n u dont get that line quit rapping

yea i get the line and no im not hating Im sayin my opponion....you're the one hating on RAW cuz you got cut...woop-d-doo its just the net get a life...and idk why you hatin on me its not i made a diss about you....so think before speakin...~1~

and plus your bitchmade for givin out the password....~1~

upp upp n away.

yup...........................

Im wiv raw n all but a reall head or some1 hu aint ignorant to the diss wud realise this is a tight drop
no offence to my fam cus like
it was nice aint even gonna lie about it

The stanza concept was sick

I agree the stanza shit was nice... but really you shoulda dropped something with a little more time an effort to make it really hit harder... i know im in raw... but really it was aight... id like to see some more though.. where u actually put ur best into it and are confident its your best... pz..

lmao that just sounds made up! like u just sed it to justify bad structure, because y would u 'fuck up the stanzas' if it was a diss to the whole of RAW?

Cus Stanzas a main member of R.A.W and it was a metaphor concept wich was v.creativ

^^ genious that was a line from the verse..... u didn get it obviously...

good looks on the feed..
maybe more to come
been busy with work

upp

Aye yea It was hot I was likin the lines N everythang but you should came a lil bit stronger cause I really know how the beef started but It'll come into light some time but some back wit sum else do. Keep that shit up fam.

This kid seveirely brain damaged???? wdf.???? u cant even mock or let alone rap for shit.??/

And 2nd why diss... u kno u hate us now... and in hte future.. if we decide to squash the shit ..we be all sweet then this garbage verse will be wasted??/ dnt u reckon... so why beef

are u gay?.....

all my rhymes are RAW,
n its yalls time to fall...........