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KEEP YA MOUTHS SHUT (feat. Flomore)
KEEP YA MOUTHS SHUT
(Intro) Niggaz around here open their mouths just ta beef wit a nigga whaz hapnin', betta keep ya mouths shut (Flomore) Think before you speak, fuck it! who does? I put a blunt in my mouth and catch a new buzz So I start talking shit just to get attention I done fucked around got my ass some henchmen So I rap up a verse instead of throwin up news Don't make me run around and say "Fuck You!" That's how I feel and I know I can do it And I know I can lose it, some call me stupid I ain't down with that, so I might shit gats And wipe my ass with some bullets and get bats I'm swinging for an homerun, the bases are loaded Or else the ball hits your mouth, it's been voted Should I be strapped sitting down to a electric chair? Or how about me laying down with tetris spares? I would like to see someone put me in silence I have to fight this, you should fucking be quiet! (Hook Ax)x2 Believe me....... Don't say our names Ya'll must know we ain't playin no games We don't go and threat ppl in vain Keep ya mouths shut and continue playin' (Ax) Sometimes beef makes you leave homies back and somettimes mothafuckaz make crews for wacks think we will but I don't consider it like that, wack or not I can make a lyrical attack, I ain't a perfectionist, and neither a perfidious man but I seem peripatetic lookin for a serious band I don't want to cause beef, shit that's why I left em if niggaz is disrespecting me, ama disrespect em votin against me in all battles SABOTAGING my record but not gon' make it cuz ama SABOTAGE you in a second and look at that nigga AX postin givin propz to crews n' nuttin but disrespect back, yo pen put that on the RV news I've left niggaz frazzled so they use otha niggaz rhymes 4 a diss I'm the real DAWG and I write my own shit, u ain't lookin 4 peace? And I ain't lookin for beef in this muthafucka, just talent 3-1, take it muthafucka, who's jealous now?, u fallin' The game hurt ya'll, this a torture, nah, this an emulate cuz you aint' compared to me. my rap left u stimulated Ma nigga Flomore, that's a real nigga, Loyal no matter what I owe you.. where's da muthafuckin hook??... Bring it Back! (Hook Ax)x2 Believe me....... Don't say our names Ya'll must know we ain't playin no games We don't go and threat ppl in vain Keep ya mouths shut and continue playin' (Outro) Jus keep ya mouths shut n nuttin will go wrong do your thing.. Don't hate on a nigga Ax Dogg niggaz!... Flomore niggaz!.... W.A.R. Still family!..... PEACE! _____________________________________ If you retarded PM me and I'll explain you shit |
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the flow is really basic homie and nobody gives a fuck about your intros and outros and u better find someone to start doin your hooks not tryin to hate just tryin to help
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^^^^ what he said!
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Yo this was aiiite...I liked the intro and outro...hooke _NO...I Didnt like it too much
Flo - your verse was aiite........6/10 Ax Dogg - Verse was better.....7/10 overall 6.5/10 RTF Link in sig to my "Let Loose Summer 2005 Remix" |
maybe you should pm someone to work with ya. someone knowen. wouldnt be bad to get a big named guy up in here.
maybe ppl dont like the intro's and it turns them away. I like it.. you have to catch the eye of the reader man.. Nice to see you too in here. Sweft |
Thanx Ya'll.
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ay mayne, breakdown:
im feelin dis rite here.....flow was ok and on point....concept was kinda a basic along with tha rhymes but i dont kno why peeps is knockin on ya's hook kause i think its koo Flomore- ya verse really didnt catch my attention, basic wordplay and vocab but you stayed on ya concept Ax- i was really feelin ya verse, i wouldnt mind collabin wit you, stayed on concept nice vocab and word play.... overall; i feel this, there's haterz everywhere...bitches hatin...all they gotsa do is KEEP THEY MOUF SHUT!!! lmao grade- 7.5/ 10 ---nice drop! :thumbup: |
yall better start puttin up links when you UP or you're gettin banned from OM...~1~
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^^^^ aight, that is a new rule from me.... I'll post links... peace
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2279813 |
this is ok. some nice lyrics. flow is medium,bit patchy in spost..punches are lacking.originality is lacking bit i did like this from flomore
ain't down with that, so I might shit gats And wipe my ass with some bullets and get bats overall originality is what its lacking. |
LOL
thanx anyway |
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^^^ werd
.........uppin................... http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2282012 *fuck the links* |
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You guys suck..
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^^^^ well thanx
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yo flomore,
so what up with the song homie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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you should stop free posting on your own thread. Harder for ppl to read other members feedback.. and your ego has to go.. FloMore. The guy said the lyrics suck.. that dont mean you tell him to suck a dick. ask what to change and hwo to make better. Do colab's without AX Dog's. Ya'll ryding eachother and it's not going to help you grow as an artist unless youre open minded. You too AX.
Keep it up man, sweft |
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=199488 |
^^^haha werd......
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