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SPuL aka Reckless vs Verbal Shoota
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8-10 lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 100 Check in by: 07-08-05 at 09:45 PM Must drop verse in 20 minutes after check in. |
Verbal Shoota has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-08-05 09:24 PM.
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STUPID KIDS
SMH Dudes a virgin, yeah he got ''hot text''...when he fourplay in E-Sex Trigga finger? dudes barely got muscle to shift a key, let alone Flex! Alias for a diffrent day, immitatin celebrities from will smith to Eminem Ya know its sad...when you start writin, an the Ink runs away from the pen! Fuck RV's top 10, you aint even number 20,refrain from typin n take a seat c';mon Spul..you got sickness? HA! you've twice been banned for cheatin! Who you defeatin? it cant be me, son...fake thug never walkin wita Gun playin pretend parties, smokin e-blunts, but hey...if thats your idea of fun '' :shoot: '' my puns will have you runnin..........l....ike ya playin track an field only yopu aint pushin the right buttons to have this win Sealed! Blaaaah, fuck explanations, it was a quick drop, 15 minutes, dont understand it? dont vote an if your a spul dick rider, dont vote, 'cause i KNOW Who his d/r's are. |
SPuL aka Reckless has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-08-05 09:41 PM.
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http://community.rapverse.com/attac...tachmentid=9717
http://community.rapverse.com/attac...tachmentid=9718 ^his faggot lookin' pics Just by lookin' at your pic... I can see you need some help You can brush dirt of your shoulder, but you jus brushin' it back on yourself I'm not suprised you forgot your two L's to me, man, you're walkin' kilm Everyone got photographic memory, but you seem to not have any film Tryin' to hide your huge lips, cuz even you kno that shit's fat I would suckerpunch you on your lip, but I'm afraid it would hit me back Tryin' to get over the hump. You gettin' a win? ha! long shot I mean, how go over the hill, if you've never ever been on the top? Posted your pics up, and "straights pics" were all over the place But when they were talkin' straight, they meant the flatness of your face bitch....... |
LOL At the daubs approach
your personals are played establishement used that shit against me months ago, an daubs did it a few days ago weaaak verse i keyd my shit in 12 minutes |
^I had to take a shit, so mine took me like 5 mins. 15 mins of shittin' ~_~
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This was feedback posted for SPuL aka Reckless
spul won
sorry, i dont vote for gay ppl teph......:laugh: |
LOL ^^^
Dont diss spul like that ''spul won but i dont vote for gay people'' LOL You gon let him call you gay spul? |
read the post again dip-shit
i said sorry, i dont vote for gay people teph i know you dropped out of school so you aint exactly high on the intellectual scale but really, you should be able to understand basic grammar like that |
^LMAO word... but uppin.................................
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Voted For: SPuL aka Reckless
Damn, I was expecting better man. This was weak as hell. Spul you lacked hard punches like whoa.. I was gonna vote against you till I read verbal shoota's verse.. I guess, fair enough since it was quick, but you both definatly need to work on bar concepts cause at some points you were making disses out of nothing. Spul is getting the vote, but only barely.. RTF on my battle: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=198308 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
sorry Nos, but me and Rev are like crew, man... would kinda be a biased vote. If you got any other battles PM them to me. but uppppp
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Im voting for ya both :thefinger
lollllll coz ur both BUFFFFF lol xxxxx :thumbup: |
This was feedback posted for SPuL aka Reckless
checkin da polls a real real nice battle dawgs....
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Voted For: Verbal Shoota
Dudes a virgin, yeah he got ''hot text''...when he fourplay in E-Sex Trigga finger? dudes barely got muscle to shift a key, let alone Flex! decent start... Alias for a diffrent day, immitatin celebrities from will smith to Eminem Ya know its sad...when you start writin, an the Ink runs away from the pen! ha decent N funny... Fuck RV's top 10, you aint even number 20,refrain from typin n take a seat c';mon Spul..you got sickness? HA! you've twice been banned for cheatin! WOW HE HAS?? i aint even know why did he? biting? GOOD PERSONAL thou Who you defeatin? it cant be me, son...fake thug never walkin wita Gun playin pretend parties, smokin e-blunts, but hey...if thats your idea of fun '' '' aight... my puns will have you runnin..........l....ike ya playin track an field only yopu aint pushin the right buttons to have this win Sealed! aight ending could of been better u had a good personal, some decent punches, u made me lol flow was good and creativeness was on-point nice drop... 8/10 Just by lookin' at your pic... I can see you need some help You can brush dirt of your shoulder, but you jus brushin' it back on yourself ooookay I'm not suprised you forgot your two L's to me, man, you're walkin' kilm Everyone got photographic memory, but you seem to not have any film decent meta... Tryin' to hide your huge lips, cuz even you kno that shit's fat I would suckerpunch you on your lip, but I'm afraid it would hit me back ha kinda funny Tryin' to get over the hump. You gettin' a win? ha! long shot I mean, how go over the hill, if you've never ever been on the top? weak.. Posted your pics up, and "straights pics" were all over the place But when they were talkin' straight, they meant the flatness of your face ha aight ending, u had a couple of personals of hes pic, which u shouldnt had focus so much on, some was decent but then it got boring punches was aight and all decent drop... 6/10 |
aiight uppppppppppppppppppppppppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
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This was feedback posted for Verbal Shoota
just checkin pollz.......cant vote cuz of crew just checkin checkin checkin........
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Voted For: SPuL aka Reckless
Dudes a virgin, yeah he got ''hot text''...when he fourplay in E-Sex Trigga finger? dudes barely got muscle to shift a key, let alone Flex! horrible open.. Alias for a diffrent day, immitatin celebrities from will smith to Eminem Ya know its sad...when you start writin, an the Ink runs away from the pen! ummm NO.. Fuck RV's top 10, you aint even number 20,refrain from typin n take a seat c';mon Spul..you got sickness? HA! you've twice been banned for cheatin! ^WTF.....LOL Who you defeatin? it cant be me, son...fake thug never walkin wita Gun playin pretend parties, smokin e-blunts, but hey...if thats your idea of fun '' '' Ok..WTF WAs Dat...No Punch my puns will have you runnin..........l....ike ya playin track an field only yopu aint pushin the right buttons to have this win Sealed! ^OMG Stop Please Stop ^Elevate Overall:4.3/10 . . . . . . . Just by lookin' at your pic... I can see you need some help You can brush dirt of your shoulder, but you jus brushin' it back on yourself ight ight.. I'm not suprised you forgot your two L's to me, man, you're walkin' kilm Everyone got photographic memory, but you seem to not have any film LOL...werd Tryin' to hide your huge lips, cuz even you kno that shit's fat I would suckerpunch you on your lip, but I'm afraid it would hit me back [bn]LMFAO!!!...Owned..[/b] Tryin' to get over the hump. You gettin' a win? ha! long shot I mean, how go over the hill, if you've never ever been on the top? Kinda fell off but str8 Posted your pics up, and "straights pics" were all over the place But when they were talkin' straight, they meant the flatness of your face LMFAO.....owned... Nice Verse Overall.. Overall:8.7/10 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: SPuL aka Reckless
aight spul took this one easily, verbal you had one good punch and that was about the ink running from the pen, besides that your verse was garbage. Spul not your best shit but you had a few punches. I'm not suprised you forgot your two L's to me, man, you're walkin' kilm Everyone got photographic memory, but you seem to not have any film, was you best line. vote spul Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Verbal Shoota
oooh... im a SPuL D/R... j/k...i owed him this RTF from like last week, but anyways... verbal takes this battle in my opinion... it was a close one tho... at first i thought his verse was gonna be really weak when i read that played opener about four play...but the second line was a decent personal and a funny punch to end it with... the next two lines were pretty good too, i liked the personal about him being banned. even tho the line wasnt all that lyricall dope, it was a decent personal. I liked SPuL's verse roastin this mofo on his pics... it was pretty funny but i think the punches in Verbal's verse came out on top. it was good personals vs. good personals and Verbal came out on top.. v/ Verbal shoota dotn worry about RTF bc i'm returning this favor to SPuL |
Voted For: SPuL aka Reckless
Spul Just by lookin' at your pic... I can see you need some help You can brush dirt of your shoulder, but you jus brushin' it back on yourself Not that big of a punch, but ok. I'm not suprised you forgot your two L's to me, man, you're walkin' kilm Everyone got photographic memory, but you seem to not have any film Haha, I liked this. Not a huge punch, but pretty funny. Tryin' to hide your huge lips, cuz even you kno that shit's fat I would suckerpunch you on your lip, but I'm afraid it would hit me back LMAO. Nice punch. Tryin' to get over the hump. You gettin' a win? ha! long shot I mean, how go over the hill, if you've never ever been on the top? Nice punch. Hit hard. Posted your pics up, and "straights pics" were all over the place But when they were talkin' straight, they meant the flatness of your face Haha, nice flip on the otherwise killing aspect of your punches. Overall, I think you went with trying to be funny, and your punches suffered because of it. Some punches hit hard, some didn't hit at all. Try some more wordplay. Verbal Dudes a virgin, yeah he got ''hot text''...when he fourplay in E-Sex Trigga finger? dudes barely got muscle to shift a key, let alone Flex! Fake personal and the punch could have been a lot harder. Hit somewhat. Alias for a diffrent day, immitatin celebrities from will smith to Eminem Ya know its sad...when you start writin, an the Ink runs away from the pen! Filler, punch was kind of funny, but just didn't hit really hard. Fuck RV's top 10, you aint even number 20,refrain from typin n take a seat c';mon Spul..you got sickness? HA! you've twice been banned for cheatin! Statement and old personal. Different wording could have made it a good punch. Who you defeatin? it cant be me, son...fake thug never walkin wita Gun playin pretend parties, smokin e-blunts, but hey...if thats your idea of fun '' '' Self glorification, but the punch on the 2nd line hit a little. my puns will have you runnin..........l....ike ya playin track an field only yopu aint pushin the right buttons to have this win Sealed! No. Nothing was right in this bar Overall, I think that if you had spent more time in your wording, then you could have won this battle easily. But, your punches, though more consistent, didn't hit nearly as hard as Spul's did. I liked the pen line, but that's about it. My votes goes to Spul for harder hitting punches and personals. Both of you need to work on wordplay though. v-Spul |
Voted For: SPuL aka Reckless
flow-spul structure-spul metaz-spul opener-tie closer-spul i wasnt really feeling VS' verse, the rhymes themes were played, i was very uninterested with it after about 6 lines, i felt spuls punches were better n kept me into it, his metaz were far superior to VS' Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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This was feedback posted for SPuL aka Reckless
checking a claim
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This was feedback posted for Verbal Shoota
yo pollz........gd drops............................
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Voted For: SPuL aka Reckless
Verbal: Dudes a virgin, yeah he got ''hot text''...when he fourplay in E-Sex Trigga finger? dudes barely got muscle to shift a key, let alone Flex! Setup was nice...u set it up nicely then flopped big time on the punch/personal.....wtf son....if u had followed that setup wit a witty personal u woulda won rite there. Alias for a diffrent day, immitatin celebrities from will smith to Eminem Ya know its sad...when you start writin, an the Ink runs away from the pen! Again nice personalized setup then another "WTF?" on the punch...an no its not a "I dun get it" wtf...its a "u can't be serious" wtf....come on son that was weak as hell Fuck RV's top 10, you aint even number 20,refrain from typin n take a seat c';mon Spul..you got sickness? HA! you've twice been banned for cheatin! Setup this time was blah....an where is the punch...everyone knows he be banned....you jus making a statement...no wordplay...no flip....where is the punch!!!!? Who you defeatin? it cant be me, son...fake thug never walkin wita Gun playin pretend parties, smokin e-blunts, but hey...if thats your idea of fun '' '' Setup is seriously blah...an so was punch...absolutely nothing in this bar whatsoever..I aint even gon explain dat shit my puns will have you runnin..........l....ike ya playin track an field only yopu aint pushin the right buttons to have this win Sealed! Setup was first similie a.k.a punchline u used all battle an it was wack as hell..then the punch was weak....I see where u were going but u worded it horribly...it didn't connect at all an even if it did it was a weak/played concept...u seriously gotta up ya game son Spul: Just by lookin' at your pic... I can see you need some help You can brush dirt of your shoulder, but you jus brushin' it back on yourself Ok setup was ok....punch was wack as hell....I see u attempted to use a nice flip but u fucked it up badly I'm not suprised you forgot your two L's to me, man, you're walkin' kilm Everyone got photographic memory, but you seem to not have any film Setup was personalized not saying much but would be effective if punch hits...but it didn't...shit was weak as fuck....wtf? son...dat was terrible Tryin' to hide your huge lips, cuz even you kno that shit's fat I would suckerpunch you on your lip, but I'm afraid it would hit me back Setup coulda been better...punch was very basic but personalized an sumwhat funny....but still wack but also 100 times better than ya previous bars Tryin' to get over the hump. You gettin' a win? ha! long shot I mean, how go over the hill, if you've never ever been on the top? Setup was worded horribly...as well as punch...an the wording of this bar killed any chance of it being the semi-wack bar it woulda ended up being Posted your pics up, and "straights pics" were all over the place But when they were talkin' straight, they meant the flatness of your face Setup personalized--->good thing...then punch....lmao....ah'ight this wasn't anything spectacular at all but it was comical an its the first bar throughout whole better that got a reaction out of me that wasn't a frown....so sadly this barely decent bar is what won you the battle IMO. Overal: Both yall dropped shitty verses....saying it was keyed is a cop out...if u cant think of witty shit on the spot..simply dun key shit...I hope shit u think about looks better than this cuz both of you were horrible...I aint gon sugarcoat it or none of that....this was trash on both sides but somebody gotta win so I gave it to spul for his somewhat comical closer. Vote: Spul |
Voted For: SPuL aka Reckless
well u had personals and they were funny good flow i can see u didnt really try so work on ur vocab lol and add saome more pesonals straight verse verbal ur punches sucked u need to work on ur personals and like spul u need to work on ur vocab but straight verse |
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Voted For: SPuL aka Reckless
Just by lookin' at your pic... I can see you need some help You can brush dirt of your shoulder, but you jus brushin' it back on yourself LOL GOOD OPENER 8/10 I'm not suprised you forgot your two L's to me, man, you're walkin' kilm Everyone got photographic memory, but you seem to not have any film DECENT FOLLOW 6/10 Tryin' to hide your huge lips, cuz even you kno that shit's fat I would suckerpunch you on your lip, but I'm afraid it would hit me back HAHA NICE INSULT 8/10 Tryin' to get over the hump. You gettin' a win? ha! long shot I mean, how go over the hill, if you've never ever been on the top? OHHH 9/10 Posted your pics up, and "straights pics" were all over the place But when they were talkin' straight, they meant the flatness of your face GOOD BAR 7/10 Dudes a virgin, yeah he got ''hot text''...when he fourplay in E-Sex Trigga finger? dudes barely got muscle to shift a key, let alone Flex! NICE OPENER 6/10 Alias for a diffrent day, immitatin celebrities from will smith to Eminem Ya know its sad...when you start writin, an the Ink runs away from the pen! OHHHHHH NICE...9/10 Fuck RV's top 10, you aint even number 20,refrain from typin n take a seat c';mon Spul..you got sickness? HA! you've twice been banned for cheatin! NAH, BEEN SAID TOO MUCH 5/10 Who you defeatin? it cant be me, son...fake thug never walkin wita Gun playin pretend parties, smokin e-blunts, but hey...if thats your idea of fun '' '' DECENT STATEMENT, NO PUNCH 6/10 my puns will have you runnin..........l....ike ya playin track an field only yopu aint pushin the right buttons to have this win Sealed! DECENT 6/10 BOTH YA CAME WITH SOLID VERSES, SHOOTA FELL OFF AT THE END, BUT SPUL HAD THE PICS TO HIS ADVANTAGE AND USED THEM FOR NICE PERSONALS, OVERALL I ENJOYED HIS VERSE BETTER |
aiight thanks for vote.......... uppppppppppi........................
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This was feedback posted for Verbal Shoota
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