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Black Queen 07-08-05 10:29 PM

.:F.ate:. vs Black Queen
 
Battle Rules:

6 - 8
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 07-11-05 at 10:29 PM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

System 07-08-05 10:30 PM

Black Queen has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-08-05 10:30 PM.

System 07-08-05 10:30 PM

.:F.ate:. has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-08-05 10:30 PM.

.:F.ate:. 07-08-05 10:44 PM

ok ..........i'mma start this shit off by bein honest...
u got a great chance of beatin me......................
................................in a dick measurin contest!!!!!


and if you post before me, all i can say is oh well
your pc SHOULD run faster ..........wit those DSL's!!!!


see i really can't front, you make my dick stand erect
but instead of fuck u...i'd rather take a shit on ur chest!!

i really don't need a closer, shawdy just face facts.......
i beat u with 3 bars like a fuckin face mask

Black Queen 07-08-05 10:45 PM

Wussy crooks get knuckle-touched, I’ll fuck this bitch ass Fate up
Bust ya up with more uppercuts than an octopus could muster up
Your verse say my word spray will hit you in the back and lymphs
Only way'd you'd get signed... is by unabbreviating your acronymn
Speak flows from me like faucets, I’ll leave your doused an’ soakin’
Beat ya from your closet, with a bike wheel, so you'll be 'out-spoken'
Ya spits get's me ‘pissed off’, like condoms flying off a virgin
Ya shit couldn't lift eyebrows if you become a plastic surgeon

.:F.ate:. 07-08-05 11:59 PM

aight....20 views, no feedback. i'm bout 2 go k-trini in this bitch

Princess14 07-09-05 12:02 AM

Voted For: Black Queen

I go with Black Queen, she just had more to say!...and she's real good at it. ;)

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

K-Trin 07-09-05 12:09 AM

This was feedback posted for Black Queen
 
FAte got this.....................................

NaRc-UzI 07-09-05 12:36 AM

Voted For: Black Queen

polls............................................. ......

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

.:F.ate:. 07-09-05 12:48 AM

^^lmao.....damn u smart dawg........damn...........

.:F.ate:. 07-09-05 06:13 PM

uppin...............dont make this like tha topical battle...please

Black Queen 07-09-05 08:49 PM

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.:F.ate:. 07-09-05 11:37 PM

uppin..........i swear 2 god somebody betta vote on this shit b4 i go andy milonakis in this bitch

B.I.G. 07-10-05 01:42 AM

This was feedback posted for Black Queen
 
checkin tha pollz............................................. .

Skriptz 07-10-05 02:20 AM

Voted For: Black Queen

ok ..........i'mma start this shit off by bein honest...
u got a great chance of beatin me......................
................................in a dick measurin contest!!!!!
nope
and if you post before me, all i can say is oh well
your pc SHOULD run faster ..........wit those DSL's!!!!
okay
see i really can't front, you make my dick stand erect
but instead of fuck u...i'd rather take a shit on ur chest!!
nah
i really don't need a closer, shawdy just face facts.......
i beat u with 3 bars like a fuckin face mask
weak


Wussy crooks get knuckle-touched, I’ll fuck this bitch ass Fate up
Bust ya up with more uppercuts than an octopus could muster up
coo opener
Your verse say my word spray will hit you in the back and lymphs
Only way'd you'd get signed... is by unabbreviating your acronymn
weak
Speak flows from me like faucets, I’ll leave your doused an’ soakin’
Beat ya from your closet, with a bike wheel, so you'll be 'out-spoken'
aight
Ya spits get's me ‘pissed off’, like condoms flying off a virgin
Ya shit couldn't lift eyebrows if you become a plastic surgeon
decent closer


fate.. ur punches need some help, ur structure was okay
and the flow was decent, but elevate on ur punches here
cause u need to come way harder than that though,

bq.. ur punches were aight here.. structure was in place
and the flow was coo, but overall you came on top in this
battle here though..

Black Queen 07-11-05 12:55 PM

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.:F.ate:. 07-12-05 01:58 PM

uuuuuuuupppppppp.................................. ..........................

Static 07-13-05 09:53 PM

Voted For: Black Queen

Ma vote goes to black queen
she had better punches
way better wodplay
and way better structure den Fate

Dirty Nigga 07-14-05 11:09 AM

This was feedback posted for Black Queen
 
LOL Damn

y'all went at it like woah

Good drop both of y'all....nice stuff

Uppin this for y'all two

Black Queen 07-14-05 03:37 PM

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I-Cunt-Troll 07-14-05 04:22 PM

Voted For: Black Queen

ok ..........i'mma start this shit off by bein honest...
u got a great chance of beatin me......................
................................in a dick measurin contest!!!!!
^^^2nd line fuked flow...but a decent punch
and if you post before me, all i can say is oh well
your pc SHOULD run faster ..........wit those DSL's!!!!
^^^NO.......this didn't hit
see i really can't front, you make my dick stand erect
but instead of fuck u...i'd rather take a shit on ur chest!!
^^^NO.......not really a punch
i really don't need a closer, shawdy just face facts.......
i beat u with 3 bars like a fuckin face mask
^^^NO......kinda self glorifies

Ur first bar was OK.It actually dissed.I don't know wat the fuck you were tryna to say in the other lines.Run faster with DSL?,shit on her chest?,3bars/face mask?What the fuck is dat?Work on you punches.

Wussy crooks get knuckle-touched, I’ll fuck this bitch ass Fate up
Bust ya up with more uppercuts than an octopus could muster up
^^^C'mon...dun talk bout fighting...DISS!!
Your verse say my word spray will hit you in the back and lymphs
Only way'd you'd get signed... is by unabbreviating your acronymn
^^^OK.......at least an attempt at punch
Speak flows from me like faucets, I’ll leave your doused an’ soakin’
Beat ya from your closet, with a bike wheel, so you'll be 'out-spoken'
^^^Again...this beatin shit.......save that for a gangsta song
Ya spits get's me ‘pissed off’, like condoms flying off a virgin
Ya shit couldn't lift eyebrows if you become a plastic surgeon
^^^OK...............Ur best line

Welll.....ur problem is talkin about beatin him up or something.Just diss the guy out.That all.Fuck tryna look gangsta.Real life it might work.But here....it's no use.But you got the win for actually dissin.......

Vote-Black Queen

.:F.ate:. 07-14-05 08:04 PM

wut a dumbass.....a face mask is tha wiring on a football helmet....facemasks usually have 3 bars.......duh.....wut a herb, at leat he left decent feed tho....uppin

I-Cunt-Troll 07-15-05 08:26 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by .:F.ate:.
wut a dumbass.....a face mask is tha wiring on a football helmet....facemasks usually have 3 bars.......duh.....wut a herb, at leat he left decent feed tho....uppin



Callin me a dumbass eh?U wanna battle?

Next time you got on.......PM me givin me an answer!!!!!!

Sixth Sense 07-15-05 06:17 PM

Voted For: Black Queen

Wussy crooks get knuckle-touched, I’ll fuck this bitch ass Fate up
Bust ya up with more uppercuts than an octopus could muster up
aight not a good opener 4/10
Your verse say my word spray will hit you in the back and lymphs
Only way'd you'd get signed... is by unabbreviating your acronymn
ok good line 6/10
Speak flows from me like faucets, I’ll leave your doused an’ soakin’
Beat ya from your closet, with a bike wheel, so you'll be 'out-spoken'
ok nice line here 6/10
Ya spits get's me ‘pissed off’, like condoms flying off a virgin
Ya shit couldn't lift eyebrows if you become a plastic surgeon
......lol nice closer
vs.

ok ..........i'mma start this shit off by bein honest...
u got a great chance of beatin me......................
................................in a dick measurin contest!!!!!
wack.......kinda embarassed ur self.....lol0/10

and if you post before me, all i can say is oh well
your pc SHOULD run faster ..........wit those DSL's!!!!
what who cares......0/10

see i really can't front, you make my dick stand erect
but instead of fuck u...i'd rather take a shit on ur chest!!
what is this man......0/10
i really don't need a closer, shawdy just face facts.......
i beat u with 3 bars like a fuckin face mask
still dont kno man.....0/10

damn what a weak battle here BQ did aight here u kno some good lines but didnt pack alot of damga just needed more delivery and just some more vocab to make interesting but fate ur verse was wack man......really no offense but need elevation to the maxed check the tutorials....fo real aight ur verse had nothin jsut straight nothin really so....BQ takes this ez .......cuz of the punches and lines and cuz fate didnt come hard.......

C-Hood 07-15-05 07:25 PM

Voted For: Black Queen

ok ..........i'mma start this shit off by bein honest...
u got a great chance of beatin me......................
................................in a dick measurin contest!!!!!
HAHA
and if you post before me, all i can say is oh well
your pc SHOULD run faster ..........wit those DSL's!!!!
OO SHIT NICE
see i really can't front, you make my dick stand erect
but instead of fuck u...i'd rather take a shit on ur chest!!
THAT IS JUS NASTY
i really don't need a closer, shawdy just face facts.......
i beat u with 3 bars like a fuckin face mask
OK


BREAKDOWN-NICE VERSE....HAD ME ROLLIN....HAHA CAN'T REALLY SAY THAT MUCH CUZ IT WAS SO SHORT



Wussy crooks get knuckle-touched, I’ll fuck this bitch ass Fate up
Bust ya up with more uppercuts than an octopus could muster up
OK
Your verse say my word spray will hit you in the back and lymphs
Only way'd you'd get signed... is by unabbreviating your acronymn
NICE
Speak flows from me like faucets, I’ll leave your doused an’ soakin’
Beat ya from your closet, with a bike wheel, so you'll be 'out-spoken'
OO SHIT...HAHA
Ya spits get's me ‘pissed off’, like condoms flying off a virgin
Ya shit couldn't lift eyebrows if you become a plastic surgeon
OK I SEE YOU


BREAKDOWN-REAL NICE VERSE...DIDN'T FALL OFF ANYWHERE THROUGH OUT IT...HAD A LIL COMPLEXITY IN THERE WIT THE OUT-SPOKEN...

VOTE GOES TO BLACK QUEEN JUST BECAUSE SHE GAVE ME MORE...BUT NICE BATTLE


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