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"If Life's A Song"
Pretty deep shit here, def worth a peep.
Left feed on Tito and Tha Q's True Dope and Omens Soc diss Enjoy, and please hook me up with some feed. Thanx http://www.soundclick.com/bands/3/b...tionz_music.htm First track |
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beat is dope....im feelin it....its different pretty lyrical peice right here....im feelin it... hook is pretty good...pretty catchy.... damn man...what can i say....good flow on this....delivery is pretty good....multies are killin the verse....good shit man... props on this.... |
iight...beat ill..voice, you sound like that nigga whiteboi, lol, go along wit the beat. this shit pretty hot...1st verse was iight...second verse was hot...3rd verse nice...i was feelin this shit. sound like something i'd bounce on the regular...delivery was there and all that..never checked ya shit. this was pretty nice
imma come back with a link. |
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voice starts out grimey as hell lol, sounds dope wow at the first verse, wasnt expectin this, cant find nothin wrong..voice,flow,delivery,lyrics is ALL on point..sickk verse man hook is real nice also, good job there 2nd verse is just as good also, really feellin this joint man! sickk track |
niiiice, very nice, like people sed ur voice starts awt griiiimey im feelin this, ye wel DUN xXx
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WOW, this was fuckin mint, beat is decent, im feelin the hook...
On flow for the most part good lyrics sick multis, overall a dope peice. Different but one of the best i heard in a bit. Props. |
Thanx yall for all this positive feed...Recorded it a while back ago, but I appreciate this...Everyone who has a piece that they'd like me to RTF on, leave a link, and I will...Uppin this shit
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beat is grimey......... feeling it.......
theme is deep........... flow is tight........ nice multies kid..... "Spark one up and let my mind drift back...... if lifes a song i wish i could remind this track..." HAHA feeling it fo real........ ayo holla at me on a collab tip........ feel me? stay up man "ez" |
hook was good
beat was okay flow was good quality was good delivery a touch monotonous...but pretty decent solid drop dawg 1 |
Beat is coo...flow and delivery fit the beat nicely...quality is pretty good...lyrics are nice...hook is coo over-all pretty solid track...return the feed on my track HATRED.
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Will do...Uppin This shit
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^^Weerd...I make all my own beats...Thanx for the feed man...Uppin this
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Hit up a link in my sig if ya want :cool:
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you said 2004 and its 2005,
Emotion is good lyrics are good and this shit is nice and beat is crack |
I recorded this shit last summer so thats why...Thats also why my voice sounds so different than how it sounds now...Thanx for the feed tho man
Uppin this shit |
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yo, in my opinion you the best emcee on this site. you got tha flow man, the multi's, everythin well structured, good emotion put in it, you got it all man. 10/10
peace yo BM, if you wanna do a text collab, post up in my thread i made, or pm me. |
Haha I dont know about the best, but good looks on the feed fam...Yeah I'll collab with you just pm me the details as to a topic and what not.
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listening...
nice beat... nice flow.. and good lyrics so far man.. damn for a 14 year old ur pretty good.. really luvin the beat man.. your voice goes really good with the beat.. and you are showin alot of emotion not only lyrically but verbally.. pretty good man.. and the chorus is very nice..sorta reminds me of eminem man lol.. 8/10 |
Thanx
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Nice shit right here man...You got some good lyrics and ya flow is pretty decent. The beat was hot as shit, and I think you jumped on the beat well. You had good emotion too, overall there was nothin wrong with the song really
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Thanx for the feed
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The beat had some problems with the harmony but I'm a pianist so that's the only reason why I notice them things....I don't understand the concept, and the lyrics don't stick out enough for me to not have to try to listen. You got your multies and everything but that's something everybobys supposed to know by now.....I mean it's good for what it is, and that you make your own beats and shit. THis is a classic underground track, but then I don't like underground music anywayz lol. So it's good for what it is.
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Thanx for the feed uppin this shit
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I really liked it, I listened to it 5 or 6 times, nigga youre shit is really good....I look up to cats like you...flow good...rhymin on point...RTF to "my dedication" thanks loads
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Thanx fam I appreciate it
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I've kept an eye on your songs, and you've improved a whole lot..........
Yea, the 2004 thing threw me off, lol, but its still coo....................The storyline was built through the metaphors that you used....Which created the foundation of the song....The chorus was tight.....Overall, good track....................... 8.5/10 |
Thanx man...Hit me up for a collab sometime...
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Fa sho, i'll hit you up sometime this week playa............
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Iight sounds good
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yo the beats aight...ur flow is dope...ur quality is perfected....it kinda a deep song...the hook is straight....cant be mad 8.5/10..RTF on "Still Incomplete"
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when the hells our collab gonna jump off Cecil???????????
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i was feelin the beat, simple but nice... flow is nice, storyline is str8.. chorus is aight. there are a few places were your dubs don't match up real good.. but quality is str8, lyrics is aight as well... you sound like this chi-town rapper, White Boi... just a bit. Str8 track overall..
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Thanx yall
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NEGRO YOU DONT SEE ME???????????????????//
lol HOLLA FOO 'ez' |
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I see you now :thumbup: |
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