un-fuck-widable vs ChImNeY
 

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Check in by: 07-09-05 at 01:02 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

un-fuck-widable has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-09-05 12:34 PM.

ChImNeY has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-09-05 12:35 PM.

imma try sommik a lil different......take your time to read it voters....

Plead to your maker, maybee He'll savior/save-ya, but theres no stopping this, so neva say that your greater, or i'll be there serving till your ate Up, then shove binaculars down ya esouphagus just to see what your made off...

Your Fuckin wack-n'-you-know-it, Weakling, step in da Ring I'll swing yo Ass-to-da-Ropes punchin till you collaps-to-the-Flo' then watch you garggle Bloody Balls after I punt-cha Nutts to tha Back-ov-ya-Throat

It's 'Hate Crimes' the way I 'Beat-dis-Faggit', make him dissapear like dis here is Teaching-Magic, you cant win wit that wack shit, Nor 'Think outside the Box' so i'll be glad to burry ya mind 'Beneath-the-Casket'
'picture ya self addicted to blood loss' cuz when my punches come across ya 'develope Bleeding-Habits'.. cuz the screaming fact is you seem tha wackest wit phrases cuz your career couldn't 'Raise Hairs' if ya job was 'Breeding-Rabbits'...

I'll rip your raps apart with darkness, dam, I thought you had some smart witt, regardless, I sliced your cardiac in two's to show you how to have/halve some Heart Kid...

yea you got served...


-peace out-

Ok. Just-Save-It-C, Because By The Looks Of It Youve Just Been To KFC
And How you Said No Time Limit "Lazily", Heres "Weight Watchers", Now youll Be Praisin-Me
Its All About this bitch chimney, Until A Day Ago No One Had Seen-Or-Heard-yah*1
All The Effort Of "Clicking" A Mouse Has Grown an Appetite, Now he Needs-A-Burger
I Aint Usually the One To Pick-A-Fight, But your The sort After Cutting A "Cake" To Lick-The-Knife
This Bitch-Is-Right, "ICEWORKS" Should Have Made Your "CLOTHES", Because My *Sig-Is-Tight
And Look At Your Fucked Up Hair-Game, No Wonder You Aint On Long, I Bet Youve Bent All Ya Chair-Frames
Ever Heard Of Duck Tape? Use It As Hair-Tape, And Id Advise You To See A Doctor Because Your Going Pear-Shape
Im Comfortable, But You Look At "Anyone" And I Think Whats Got-You-Brudy, Was Afraid Id Accept This Battle
I dont Think Anyones Feeling Your Shabby-Trend, And You Make A Right Pair Along with Your Batty-Friend
I Didnt Want This To Sadly-Commence, Because Your Too Much Of A "Loser" For This To Badly-End

jus sum shit come on spit yours man

Ok. Just-Save-It-C, Because By The Looks Of It Youve Just Been To KFC
And How you should have Said No Time Limit "Lazily", Heres "Weight Watchers", Now youll Be Praisin-Me
Its All About this bitch chimney, Until A Day Ago No One Had Seen-Or-Heard-yah*1
All The Effort Of "Clicking" A Mouse Has Grown an Appetite, Now he Needs-A-Burger
I Aint Usually the One To Pick-A-Fight, But your The sort After Cutting A "Cake" To Lick-The-Knife
This Bitch-Is-Right, "ICEWORKS" Should Have Made Your "CLOTHES", Because My *Sig-Is-Tight
And Look At Your Fucked Up Hair-Game, No Wonder You Aint On Long, I Bet Youve Bent All Ya Chair-Frames
Ever Heard Of Duck Tape? Use It As Hair-Tape, And Id Advise You To See A Doctor Because Your Going Pear-Shape
Im Comfortable, But You Look At "Anyone" And I Think Whats Got-You-Brudy, Was Afraid Id Accept This Battle
I dont Think Anyones Feeling Your Shabby-Trend, And You Make A Right Pair Along with Your Batty-Friend
I Didnt Want This To Sadly-Commence, Because Your Too Much Of A "Loser" For This To Badly-End

wrote dat cause i dun the thing wrong so jus as i cant edit s read second 1

upping........................................dont sleep on dis vote an i will return the favour!

yeah..................dont sleep............................................

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Uppin This........................................

upping vote ppl!!!!!!!!!!...................................

This was feedback posted for ChImNeY
 

LOL Nice

Un-fuck-widable is an alias, not sure who tho, hmmmm

anyway, good drop, you got this...

Voted For: un-fuck-widable

un-fuck-widable won this, his verse was a straight battle verse, all punches, and nice rhyme structure, with good flow.

Chimney, you had som nice punches, I really liked the the Raise Hairs Breeding Rabbits bit, Dope shit. But you both got shit to learn about text, and that involves making it look appealing, and readble.

I know it dont seem like that shit matters, but most of the time it does.

Anyway, Nice verses from both of you, but un fuck wins with a nice verse packed with punches

Voted For: un-fuck-widable

i vote for UFW

UFW;
your verse was good...structure was terrible but your flow was nice and vocabulary was nicely used here...punches were good hit pretty hard and personals was decent....opener was aight coulda been worded better and closer was ok...good drop

Chim:
your verse was ok...structure was better than his and flow was good...but punches was lackin a bit and personals aswell...opener was ok and closer was decent just keep it up and youll get better,,,decent drop

RTF link in my sig....~1~

upping....................cant vote i aint got 500 posts any uva u need me to vote on?>?

This was feedback posted for ChImNeY
 

Both came dope...

Dont feel like explaining a vote, so Im checking polls....

Voted For: ChImNeY

mmmmmmmmm...... interesting battle........

ima have to go with chimney for the win.... unfuckwidable....... you need to sort out your verse structure.... it's all over the place.... dont put the dashes (-) were your rhyming words are it just gets in the way.... looked messy.... chimney...... that binocular line was pretty good........ pretty good multies...

Your Fuckin wack-n'-you-know-it, Weakling, step in da Ring I'll swing yo Ass-to-da-Ropes punchin till you collaps-to-the-Flo' then watch you garggle Bloody Balls after I punt-cha Nutts to tha Back-ov-ya-Throat

^^^ that section was pretty cool.... good multies... id say you'd be pretty good with audio...

Return the favour and drop a vote on my battles aight...

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This was feedback posted for un-fuck-widable
 

Fix ya fuckin structure up........................

Voted For: un-fuck-widable

Aii

Explanation

Unfuckwidable You dropped a Good verse both of yall Structures was fucked up like fuck .........But Unfuck had the better verse overal good wordplay and some aii punchez helped him take this battle so I really cant say much bcuz you both really need to work on fixin up ya lines better than what you got rii here bcuz its mad sloppy sorry to say

RTF in my Battle ASAP or this gets removed

aight upping............................................ .....

uppin .................................................. .i will rtf

uppimg i will rtf ...........................................

This was feedback posted for un-fuck-widable
 

hahahahaha...........nice homie man i would vote for unfuck but we in the same crew!!!!!!!!!!hahaha....checkin in on reality....nice metaz and vocab homie!!!!!!yo chimney ur drop was aight homie but he had more metaz and strructured lyrics that rocked ur temples homie!!!!!!!!but both ya'll was tight!!!!!

upin this shit i will rtf..........................

uppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn nng vote n i will rtf

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Voted For: un-fuck-widable

Flow-even....both of you fix your structure up.Had some ok multis and shit...but damn.....structure was ugly.

Punches-Not so hot from either cats.But Un-Fuck actually seemed to have some that hit.Chimmney...i don't see how you thought those lines would hit.

Personals-Neither....both of you elevate here badly.....

MULtis-Un-Fuck....he was killer with the multis here.Chimmney...structure your verse better and make the multis easier to see.

Creativity-Un-fuck...flipped KFC into a punch.LoL...had this battle easily

Vote-Un-Fuck-Widable

Voted For: un-fuck-widable

-unf- had much more better punches and very good use of his vocab skills

the other dude needs to elevate...i hav seen him perform but this aint even half of that so chim...u need to elevate....


vote: -UNF-