Lawless (Hs) vs flow verse
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 20
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 07-12-05 at 11:11 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

flow verse has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-09-05 11:12 PM.

Lawless (Hs) has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-09-05 11:19 PM.

Let's do this kidd..........

Did you spit already...

Shit... I had every intention of harmin' the fella/
I'll put a knot on ya head the size of the tits on Carmen Electra/

homie jettin' cause the rocs reflection remind of siren lights/
nigga my fist will tat ya face up.. so you can have sumtin' in common wit iron mike/

trust the brute force uh' leave tha nigga checked/
STOP.. before I pop and put you in a box like Newport ciggarettes/

Look BITCH... I've already dismanteled ya verse/
at age 8 this punk was rockin' pumps and knew how to handle a purse/

I got the machete I beheaded the last nigga/
don't front chump.... the only thing sprayin' from ya pump is unleaded gas nigga/

you still leanin' behind even if you was double teamin' the rhyme/
you a PUSSY that take more punches then any teen at the prom/

I don't give a fucc what people a think/
I'll see to it you got denchers by the time you legal to drink/

yea bring ya hoe niggaz to get on my back/
even if you was a contract killer you still couldn't put a 'hit' on the track/

you prolly roll wit bitches in fact..../
fucc wit me and ya life span uh' be shorter then the dick in ya lap/

Flow Verse?.. shit I neva even heard of dude/
I'm bout ready to cock back and pop caps till ya dome resemble gerber food/

Alright listen up . . .
Yo after this your gonna be like a “hunger clock” and go back “four seconds”/
To the point, before you agreed to battle and hit accept it/
I know u think you the best and might go against RV’s “judgments”/
Cat just does understand rank u could say he’s “lawless”/
And I know types like you --- just like “grapes”/
Just “whine” after getting “smash” by greats/
In this battle you came so close but it wasn’t enuff/
Like “Viagra” salesman, who just “couldn't keep up”/

I Posted My Verse . . .

we uppin' cuz....

cmon let's get these votes in

uppin yall....Voters Please...

We Need votes A.S.A.P

votes please... we'll definitely return the favor.

come on yall.... we need some votes in this battle.

Voted For: Lawless (Hs)

Good battle...
Lawless. I was feeling your style an flow. Everything you said was a punch an it hit.....

flow- you had it going for you to. But face the fact that you didnt have as many lines as he did so there for it was anonaymous.... keep reppin.... rtf to my battle sig battle vs conflict

Voted For: Lawless (Hs)

No doubt bout it...lawless won.....i'll tell u why

Shit... I had every intention of harmin' the fella/
I'll put a knot on ya head the size of the tits on Carmen Electra/

Flow Verse?.. shit I neva even heard of dude/
I'm bout ready to cock back and pop caps till ya dome resemble gerber food/
....sickest opening and closure........

The other guy just dropped shit...maybe he typed up his battle in the toilet...resembling shitness...no hate....

or maybe his freestyle is just unpure to science...he needs more tests carried out.......battle me homie........not lawless but flow verse.....

This was feedback posted for flow verse
 

nice battle...wow...................................... .

uppin this . . ..

comon ppl upping this for votes . . . . . . . . thanks . . .

uppping this for votes . . . THANKS

upping . ................vote plz ..............thanks

upping this for votes . . . . comon ppl . . . .THANKS

Voted For: Lawless (Hs)

flow verse was ok but really uninspired
n boring

lawless killed him with concepts and better delivery

This was feedback posted for Lawless (Hs)
 

it's plain to see Lawless got this but i can't vote but he had a longer verse wit better punchlines the only downfall is the it looks like it was written think about it but big up law do yo thing man

Voted For: flow verse

yo dis was an ok battle but i feel like flow verse could've came harder than wat he did and his structure wasn't great yo lawless that spacing u left between ur bars i don't like dat but overall lawless came harder with punches and personals he took this one and ran with it

V/Lawless

upping for votes . . . comon ppl . . .thanks . . . . .

uppin this shit right here........ let's got some votes

we uppin for this shit right here.. come vote on it

Voted For: Lawless (Hs)

return the favor here
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=201879

nice verses

for a short vers flow u came aight i must say but lawless got it
even though u r personals almost didnt exsist u had nice punche man

flow i liked the grape line it was the bet thing u apit next time though come harder wit a lil more punches and personals say more about him cause he got u

nice job

return the favor here
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=201879

we are uppin for some votes on this battle... come on yall

whilke yall uppin u can return the favor for the vote i posted

Voted For: Lawless (Hs)



Alright listen up . . .
Yo after this your gonna be like a “hunger clock” and go back “four seconds”/
To the point, before you agreed to battle and hit accept it/
-wack no personal probably prewritten played concept horrible choice for an opener 5/10
I know u think you the best and might go against RV’s “judgments”/
Cat just does understand rank u could say he’s “lawless”/
-no personal but it wasnt horrible i guess 6/10
And I know types like you --- just like “grapes”/
Just “whine” after getting “smash” by greats/
-creatie but no personal once again 7/10
In this battle you came so close but it wasn’t enuff/
Like “Viagra” salesman, who just “couldn't keep up”/
played concept bad closer no personal 6/10
OVERALL U NEED TO WORK ON UR STRUCTURE EVENIN OUT UR LINES AND LOSING THE /// PERSONALS THATS HOW UR GONNA WIN BATTLES U HAD NO METAPHORES AND WORDPLAY WAS BASIC OVERALL U NEED ALOT OF ELEVATION



Shit... I had every intention of harmin' the fella/
I'll put a knot on ya head the size of the tits on Carmen Electra/PLAYED NO PERSONAL BAD OPENER 6/10

homie jettin' cause the rocs reflection remind of siren lights/
nigga my fist will tat ya face up.. so you can have sumtin' in common wit iron mike/
NEVER HEARD IT B4 BUT NO PERSONAL 6/10
trust the brute force uh' leave tha nigga checked/
STOP.. before I pop and put you in a box like Newport ciggarettes/
CREATIVE LINE 7/10
Look BITCH... I've already dismanteled ya verse/
at age 8 this punk was rockin' pumps and knew how to handle a purse/PLAYED AS HELL WORST LINE IN THE BATTLE 5/10

I got the machete I beheaded the last nigga/
don't front chump.... the only thing sprayin' from ya pump is unleaded gas nigga/
PLAYED BLAH 6/10
you still leanin' behind even if you was double teamin' the rhyme/
you a PUSSY that take more punches then any teen at the prom/PRETTY GOOD NOTHIN SPECIAL THOUGH 6/10

I don't give a fucc what people a think/
I'll see to it you got denchers by the time you legal to drink/
GAY AS HEL 6/10

yea bring ya hoe niggaz to get on my back/
even if you was a contract killer you still couldn't put a 'hit' on the track/
PLAYED BUT BETTER THAN ANY OF HIS LINES 7/10
you prolly roll wit bitches in fact..../
fucc wit me and ya life span uh' be shorter then the dick in ya lap/PLAYED BAD STRUC 6/1O

Flow Verse?.. shit I neva even heard of dude/
I'm bout ready to cock back and pop caps till ya dome resemble gerber food/ GOOD LINE CREATIVE U USED HIS NAME THATS FIRST IN THIS BATTLE 8/10
OK U NEED TO WORK ON PERSONALS AND STOP GLORIFYIN URSELF WORK ON VOCA ABD STRUCTURE
OVERAL IM VOTIN FOR U BECAUSE UR LINES WERENT AS PLAYED AS HIS