Lawless (Hs) vs STAY FOCUS
 

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No Recycling
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Check in by: 07-12-05 at 11:38 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

let's get it goin' cuz.... let's get this shit in affect.

oops... well we can have a rematch later on. lol..

Lawless (Hs) has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-09-05 11:42 PM.

STAY FOCUS has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-09-05 11:43 PM.

He really wants to be battle me? Yo check it. . .
Kid even if you were named “Hennessey” you wouldn’t have a shot/
I am a true freestyle so my lines are “fresh” yours just starting to “rot”/
Come on people even if lawless was a “backwards” poet he still couldn’t write “in-verse”/
Its kinda sad cause you as time passes your flow just becomes worse/
Its not your fault the same mentality u have with “dicks” you bring it to verse/
Lawless thinks the more he “sucks” the higher the rank he will get on RapVerse/
I know you hate me cause I’m flawless/
Cat this battle is over— anarchy spread -- you could say I just made RV “lawless”

He bluffin ya see... I don't give nuttin' for free/
you gotta be a LifeStyle condom... other wise you ain't fuckin' wit me/

I'm 'Focused'... ready to put bullets from the revolver through ya/
pussy you gon take more shots then a Alcohol abusa'/

you can't move me... emotionally or physically cuz/
I'll stick yo ass against every wall like electricity plugs/

nigga don't worry bout nuttin' you gettin' LAST/
I ain't the Judge on divorce court but I too can split ya shit in half/

yea yo raps weak c'mon you know that's sweet/
I bet even if you had a Old Miami Jersey you still couldn't 'throwback heat'/

yea you might have gats but you couldn't shoot/
nigga I'll put the medal to ya brain like u was Damon Wayans in bulletproof/

stop flowin' like a BITCH.. and reply wit menz rhymes/
Focus is under the top like them try again signs/

jus an imaginary nigga... there's no other fan of you/
what glock? what the fucc do you pop besides a rubberband or two/

am I worried not at all/
not when I can put feet to this nigga like he was a Select Soccerball/

Law... LAWLESS we one in the same/
talk shit and see ya life flash before ya eyes like the pac pics under my name/

we uppin'.........................................

come on yall we need some votes from yall.............
favors will be given

This was feedback posted for Lawless (Hs)
 

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Let's get some votes people... We need votes.. favors will be given.

Lets gets some votes in ppl . . . Thanks in ADVANCE

comon people some votes in please i would like to get this over with it would be much appreciated . . . ThANK YOU IN ADvance

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lets get some honest and sirius votes and drop a link and i will return the favor with an honest vote

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Voted For: Lawless (Hs)

aight man this was a close battle to me.
fucous: im a little disappointed man u got potential dwg u did good but i thought your punches could have been harder and u could have had more personals. not saying u did bad but saying u could have done better.nice closer

~v.s.~

lawless: you did good also your punches were okay could have been harder also. u hadmore and they were eventually harder than focused. u had like one or two personals also.
your punches won this battle for me man

return the favor here please:
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upping for votes . . .comon ppl . . . .THANKS

This was feedback posted for STAY FOCUS
 

from your last few battles this your best 1 yet keep it up man

Voted For: Lawless (Hs)

Nice battle going on here

Lawless:::
He bluffin ya see... I don't give nuttin' for free/
you gotta be a LifeStyle condom... other wise you ain't fuckin' wit me
Sick opening there

Law... LAWLESS we one in the same/
talk shit and see ya life flash before ya eyes like the pac pics under my name/
nice closure

Best Punch:::
yea yo raps weak c'mon you know that's sweet/
I bet even if you had a Old Miami Jersey you still couldn't 'throwback heat'/

Weakest punch:::
am I worried not at all/
not when I can put feet to this nigga like he was a Select Soccerball/

SF:::
He really wants to be battle me? Yo check it. . .
Kid even if you were named “Hennessey” you wouldn’t have a shot/
Very weak opening--Didnt even rhyme

I know you hate me cause I’m flawless/
Cat this battle is over— anarchy spread -- you could say I just made RV “lawless”
Again a very weak closing--not that hard of a punch

Best Punch:::
Its not your fault the same mentality u have with “dicks” you bring it to verse/
Lawless thinks the more he “sucks” the higher the rank he will get on RapVerse/

Weakest Punch:::
I am a true freestyle so my lines are “fresh” yours just starting to “rot”/
Come on people even if lawless was a “backwards” poet he still couldn’t write “in-verse”/
Didnt ven rhyme( let down )

Opening: Law
Closing: Focus
Punches: Law
Multis: None
Structure: None
Rhyming Skills: Both
Verbal Usage: Law







Overall Vote: Lawless

uppinf for votes

UPping for Votes THANKS

Voted For: Lawless (Hs)

Punches-Lawless...mainly because more lines and shit.Focus...next time...try to have just as much lines as oppenent.Gotta match up to them

Flow-Lawless...Focus...read the tutorials.You can't go having a line with 20 words then a line with 4.UNless you have multis though...which you didn't.

Multi-Neither.

Creativity-Lawless.....Focus had some played lines

Personals-Both of you elevate greatly in this catergory

Vote-LAwless
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This was feedback posted for STAY FOCUS
 

i think you had a great drop forcus . . . but Lawless (Hs) drop more lines which might be to ur disadvantage. . . good luck man . . . good battle tho . . both of you had good drops. . . good luck to both keep writing . . .

we uppin' yall. let's get some responses on this so called 'close battle'

Voted For: Lawless (Hs)

Stay Focus:

Kid even if you were named “Hennessey” you wouldn’t have a shot/
I am a true freestyle so my lines are “fresh” yours just starting to “rot”/
^^1st line ok 2nd weak 4/10
Come on people even if lawless was a “backwards” poet he still couldn’t write “in-verse”/
Its kinda sad cause you as time passes your flow just becomes worse/
^^ehh 3/10
Its not your fault the same mentality u have with “dicks” you bring it to verse/
Lawless thinks the more he “sucks” the higher the rank he will get on RapVerse/
^^ok 4/10
I know you hate me cause I’m flawless/
Cat this battle is over— anarchy spread -- you could say I just made RV “lawless”
^^stretched but ok 3/10

Overall: 14\40 (35%)


Lawless (HS):

He bluffin ya see... I don't give nuttin' for free/
you gotta be a LifeStyle condom... other wise you ain't fuckin' wit me/
^^decent opener 4/10
I'm 'Focused'... ready to put bullets from the revolver through ya/
pussy you gon take more shots then a Alcohol abusa'/
^^played 2/10
you can't move me... emotionally or physically cuz/
I'll stick yo ass against every wall like electricity plugs/
^^good bar 6/10
nigga don't worry bout nuttin' you gettin' LAST/
I ain't the Judge on divorce court but I too can split ya shit in half/
^^decent 4/10
yea yo raps weak c'mon you know that's sweet/
I bet even if you had a Old Miami Jersey you still couldn't 'throwback heat'/
^^decent meta played concept 4/10
yea you might have gats but you couldn't shoot/
nigga I'll put the medal to ya brain like u was Damon Wayans in bulletproof/
^^ehh 4/10
stop flowin' like a BITCH.. and reply wit menz rhymes/
Focus is under the top like them try again signs/
^^decent 4/10
jus an imaginary nigga... there's no other fan of you/
what glock? what the fucc do you pop besides a rubberband or two/
^^ok 5/10
am I worried not at all/
not when I can put feet to this nigga like he was a Select Soccerball/
^^ok bar 5/10
Law... LAWLESS we one in the same/
talk shit and see ya life flash before ya eyes like the pac pics under my name/
^^decent 4/10

Overall: 42/100 (42%)

Vote: Lawless (HS)


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