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Magic5 07-10-05 08:25 PM

K-Trin vs Mimesis
 
Battle Rules:

6 - 10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 50

Check in by: 07-11-05 at 05:35 AM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

System 07-10-05 09:06 PM

K-Trin has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-10-05 09:06 PM.

K-Trin 07-10-05 09:07 PM

47 wins eh?yeah,cause you be spewin like groups a queers in the grass
You farewells reminds me of geography class,cause all I hear is AT-Las!!!
Like trippin in the 100 meter dash.........you embarrisin ya own race
Jewlery with ur intials imprinted s' how you get M-braced
His first bath in prison is only time he gets hoes/hose on him
&Memisis seems to be a bad smell cause nobody here nose him

Explainin some
In Ur first bath in prison they spray you with a hose.
100 meter dash is a race in the olmypics......

Understand both verses before votin :thumbup:

K-Trin 07-10-05 11:55 PM

damn.......where this pussy at?????I'll gladly take a no-show win..........

System 07-11-05 03:57 AM

Mimesis has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-11-05 03:57 AM.

Magic5 07-11-05 03:57 AM

T is outta luck.. it's simple.. nobody likes you, just now seeing ya fucked
Cause you're only giving the "Ooohh," K.. when people agree that you suck

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Stuck in punches.. fuck your crew.. you gettin more rep then you should
But you're giving ME a Reality Check?..
..Man, you still think that you're good!
Everybody knows I could kill you.. just admit you got nothin on me
Now you're stating I suck?.. Then you must own a vaccuum company
Watch me rip you.. Thinkin you can beat me? Ima just be winning fair
So just get your mind out the gutter.. right after you stop living there

(X)eed 07-11-05 04:15 AM

Voted For: K-Trin

vote has to go to K.... had harder punches...
overalll flow was aiight..... mimiesis had good punches too jus felt them more from k trin.... he had dope punches
His first bath in prison is only time he gets hoes/hose on him
&Memisis seems to be a bad smell cause nobody here nose him
^^^^ good stuff

MIMesis Now you're stating I suck?.. Then you must own a vaccuum company
Watch me rip you.. Thinkin you can beat me? Ima just be winning fair
^^^^wdf is dat ,,,,, i thought u wud drop better than dat... bro

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Magic5 07-11-05 05:18 AM

ROFLLFMFAO

AHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHA

A knows/nose line is better then the shit I used?!

PLEASE

Fuck outta here herb..

Magic5 07-11-05 01:03 PM

I won this battle.

Fuck you.

That vote sucked shit.

K-Trin 07-11-05 04:23 PM

uppin.............................and mimesis......why ya actin like dat for????

K-Trin 07-11-05 07:11 PM

uppin............................................. .....

Predator 07-11-05 08:05 PM

This was feedback posted for K-Trin
 
This is garbage.
If y'all wanna see a real battle look how I smashed Gangrene

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=198547

Magic5 07-11-05 08:09 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by K-Trin
uppin.............................and mimesis......why ya actin like dat for????


Because of your dr.

A KNOWS/NOSE line is NOTHING compared to the shit I used.

I won this battle and it pisses me off when you get your dr in here to vote for you.. That's why I'm acting like "this."

Predator 07-11-05 08:19 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Mimesis
Because of your dr.

A KNOWS/NOSE line is NOTHING compared to the shit I used.

I won this battle and it pisses me off when you get your dr in here to vote for you.. That's why I'm acting like "this."




That nigga did the same against me

4fil 07-11-05 08:26 PM

This was feedback posted for Mimesis
 
checking polls.

Magic5 07-12-05 02:21 AM

Somebody drop a real vote up in this bitch.

Fa real..

K-Trin 07-12-05 03:22 PM

Damn........only 1 vote and it was removed...........uppin....

rooq 07-12-05 04:33 PM

This was feedback posted for Mimesis
 
*just passing through and wonderin what tha scores are*

K-Trin 07-12-05 07:33 PM

^^Who created that checkin polls shit?????????........It mad annoying

K-Trin 07-13-05 08:47 AM

uppin............................................. ....

K-Trin 07-13-05 11:58 AM

uppin............................................. ....

K-Trin 07-13-05 04:03 PM

uppin............................................. ....

K-Trin 07-13-05 08:43 PM

upppin............................................ ......

Magic5 07-13-05 10:48 PM

Somebody just close this shit..

K-Trin sucks, it's not that hard to see..

Magic5 07-14-05 02:44 AM

Upping this shit again.

Just vote the fuck up already..

Magic5 07-14-05 03:16 PM

Upping this again.

We all I won, just vote up saying so.

I-Cunt-Troll 07-15-05 07:30 AM

Voted For: K-Trin

T is outta luck.. it's simple.. nobody likes you, just now seeing ya fucked
Cause you're only giving the "Ooohh," K.. when people agree that you suck
.^^^Basic concept.....
Stuck in punches.. fuck your crew.. you gettin more rep then you should
But you're giving ME a Reality Check?..
..Man, you still think that you're good!
^^^Basic....there's no complexity....
Everybody knows I could kill you.. just admit you got nothin on me
Now you're stating I suck?.. Then you must own a vaccuum company
^^^suck/vacuum lines are played as fuck...
Watch me rip you.. Thinkin you can beat me? Ima just be winning fair
So just get your mind out the gutter.. right after you stop living there
^^well....this seems to be your best punch

Ur punches were pretty basic.Aside from the last one...the rest was played out concepts.Vacuum/suck?c'mon man.His profile does say reality check...but you could come up with something more complex than wat you did.It seems you didn't even spend time working on it.Where was decent wordplay?Only one line had decent wordplay and that was last.


47 wins eh?yeah,cause you be spewin like groups a queers in the grass
You farewells reminds me of geography class,cause all I hear is AT-Las!!!
^^Nice concept.....but stetrched out.....
Like trippin in the 100 meter dash.........you embarrisin ya own race
Jewlery with ur intials imprinted s' how you get M-braced
^^Nice wordplay on 1st line and nameplay in second
His first bath in prison is only time he gets hoes/hose on him
&Memisis seems to be a bad smell cause nobody here nose him
^^should have switched around so 1st line was punch and 2nd was set-up.But nice punch

This was a good verse.Every line in it had some sort of worplay in it.This is what you gotta do.Just learn to flow better....and you a vet.Only multi was last bar and that was pretty basic.The last bar had played wordplay in nose/knows.But the rest of wordplay was fresh.My opinion......Mimesis got raped.

Vote-K-Trin
drop honest vote in battle with Kool-Col-B

Magic5 07-15-05 02:54 PM

HAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAAHAHHA

ROFLLFLMAD

"this was a good verse"

K-Trin and your fucking dickriders. LMFAO

Only on RV.

I-Cunt-Troll 07-15-05 03:05 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Mimesis
HAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAAHAHHA

ROFLLFLMAD

"this was a good verse"

K-Trin and your fucking dickriders. LMFAO

Only on RV.


wtf?????every line in it had wordplay.Dude killed you.

Sean Gunner 07-15-05 03:30 PM

Voted For: Mimesis

Mimesis
T is outta luck.. it's simple.. nobody likes you, just now seeing ya fucked
Cause you're only giving the "Ooohh," K.. when people agree that you suck
Lol. Nice wordplay on his name.
Stuck in punches.. fuck your crew.. you gettin more rep then you should
But you're giving ME a Reality Check?..
..Man, you still think that you're good!
Ehhh, some people might consider him good. So blah punch.
Everybody knows I could kill you.. just admit you got nothin on me
Now you're stating I suck?.. Then you must own a vaccuum company
Ok punch.
Watch me rip you.. Thinkin you can beat me? Ima just be winning fair
So just get your mind out the gutter.. right after you stop living there
Lol, decent punch.

Overall, not your best. Some of the lines were self glorification and hints of fake personals. Wordplay was good though.

K trin
47 wins eh?yeah,cause you be spewin like groups a queers in the grass
You farewells reminds me of geography class,cause all I hear is AT-Las!!!
Bad attempt at flipping his record. Bad punch.
Like trippin in the 100 meter dash.........you embarrisin ya own race
Jewlery with ur intials imprinted s' how you get M-braced
Bad similie, bad punch.
His first bath in prison is only time he gets hoes/hose on him
&Memisis seems to be a bad smell cause nobody here nose him
Bad wordplay. Ruined your punch. Weak set up.

Overall, you tried to win on crappy wordplay. Work on making real punches and personals, not just wordplay. There is a difference.

My vote goes to Mimesis for real punches and personals. Trin's verse was mostly wordplay and no punches.

v- Mimesis

Sean Gunner 07-15-05 03:48 PM

Quality > Complexity. No wonder most people hate RV voters.

WhoAmI 07-15-05 08:11 PM

This was feedback posted for Mimesis
 
checkin polls.....................................

Kawn Flixx 07-15-05 08:55 PM

Voted For: Mimesis

Mimeses
T is outta luck.. it's simple.. nobody likes you, just now seeing ya fucked
Cause you're only giving the "Ooohh," K.. when people agree that you suck
Pretty good Opener
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.
.
.
Stuck in punches.. fuck your crew.. you gettin more rep then you should
But you're giving ME a Reality Check?..
..Man, you still think that you're good!
Okay
Everybody knows I could kill you.. just admit you got nothin on me
Now you're stating I suck?.. Then you must own a vaccuum company
naw
Watch me rip you.. Thinkin you can beat me? Ima just be winning fair
So just get your mind out the gutter.. right after you stop living there
Pretty decent closer


K-Trin
47 wins eh?yeah,cause you be spewin like groups a queers in the grass
You farewells reminds me of geography class,cause all I hear is AT-Las!!!
Ah....could have been better
Like trippin in the 100 meter dash.........you embarrisin ya own race
Jewlery with ur intials imprinted s' how you get M-braced
Naw
His first bath in prison is only time he gets hoes/hose on him
&Memisis seems to be a bad smell cause nobody here nose him
...naw

Vote-Mim

KOOL COL-B 07-16-05 07:30 AM

Voted For: Mimesis

yo, 1 time, i went n got sum kfc n then i took it home n i took all tha chicken legs n ate them, n my lil brutha came n wuz all like "ay, wered all tha chicken legs go???" n i wuz all like "tehe, ummm, i dunnoooooo, hehe" then he saw tha chicken bones on my plate, o man... u shouldve seen tha look on hiz face, it wuz all like "O SHIT! u ate all tha chicken legs!! u bastard!!" i just sat there like "yes, yes i most certainly did"

return tha fava, i dunno if i-cunt-troll or w/e hiz name iz now iz gittin banned too, but here my battle against him

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=199977

notice how i knew hiz shit would b wack az fuck so i just played tha fuck out of tha pussy jokes :cool: werd

Mad Dog 07-16-05 07:35 AM

Voted For: Mimesis

ching chang chong...mimesis won...................


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