(X)eed vs RhymnSicC
 

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6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 07-10-05 at 10:37 PM

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(X)eed has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-10-05 09:42 PM.

accpet bruva?????????????????????????????????????

RhymnSicC has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-10-05 09:51 PM.

claims he sick but rhymes only single syllable rhymes
"no ones iller" gives bizzare a new definition to die
the kid wuz dropped at birth, and it wuz a "sick" site to see
who said you wuz ill?? bitch you believe in Christianity
Like Darth Vader said "son i am your father!"
The childs droppin......... shit now much faster
Lyricaly he wack,but he snaps back to act tuff to try and flip
The childs life wuz a fake and he defiines the word "SKIT"
Sick to none, like tooth decay on Gums, aint sick, you damaged, your mama smoked too many blunts

Corrections <<<>>>
Sick to none, like tooth decay on Gums
aint sick, you damaged, your mama smoked too many blunts

^^^^ dat wuz da last line.... da bars got fuked up.....sorry///
yo kat drop already

Man.............drop ur shyt.......

I See U Only Fourteen, So Dat Mean U Bout In Da 8th Grade.
U Be At School With A Hundred Machanical Pencils But No Lead.
U Think Yo Lines Are Good, 2 Me Dey Aint Nothin But Shit.
Dey Stank So U Need 2 Throw Em In Da Toilet.
Ya Battle'n Da Best Nigga, So U Bout 2 Be Dead.
Me Battle'n U Is Like Fight'n A Nigga Withought A Arm Nor A Leg.
When I Finish Wit U, U Gone Be At Da Bottom Of Da Map.
No Way 2 Move, Imma Leave Yo Ass Handicap.

aiight votes plz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!! vote away???

yo yo yo yo...........uppin this shiyt..... cmon ppl hnest votes will b returned

yoooooo uppin this shit.......... plz drop sum votes...

uppin....can we get sum vote up in here

Voted For: (X)eed


RhymnSicC

I See U Only Fourteen, So Dat Mean U Bout In Da 8th Grade.
U Be At School With A Hundred Machanical Pencils But No Lead.
***doesnt rhyme..... No point in this.... 0/10
U Think Yo Lines Are Good, 2 Me Dey Aint Nothin But Shit.
Dey Stank So U Need 2 Throw Em In Da Toilet.
***WTF Barely rhymes..... 1/10
Ya Battle'n Da Best Nigga, So U Bout 2 Be Dead.
Me Battle'n U Is Like Fight'n A Nigga Withought A Arm Nor A Leg.
***What? so you'd get your ass kicked by a handicap? ok 1/10
When I Finish Wit U, U Gone Be At Da Bottom Of Da Map.
No Way 2 Move, Imma Leave Yo Ass Handicap.
***Very weak closer 0/10

Total 2/40 ok.... you need grow a brain and start spelling shit correctly.... your writing reflects a 3 year old.
you flow like a dried up river.
Please shut the fuck up.... i dont know how you one 2 battles.... you have a problem with what im saying.... holla at me and we'll sort it out in a battle...

Xeed.... your first line beat him..... but that christianity line wasnt needed.... Think your lines through..... the line may offend people....think before you write ok.
i liked that darth vader line it was pretty dope.

peace.

^^^^^^thnkx..... lookin 4wrd 2 our battle....haahhahahaahahhahahahahahahahha

uppin this...... all votes will b returned

UPPIN THIS BATTLE
ALL VOTES WILL BE RETURNED
........ close this shit down..... plz....

Voted For: (X)eed

Man...........please......RhymnSicC.. what was that...
Be real with yourself. 1. Your a white kid pretending to be black on the net. 2. Some of those lines didnt even rhyme. 3. Dont diss someone for being 14 when your probably 12. Truths hard aint it. I suggest you re-register a new name, start again and dont be so fucking gay when you come back.

Xeed, you got the right idea. Still need some elevation on writing proper set-up lines that lead to punches. And concepts aswell, think of 1 major diss per bar and word a set up line that will attack that weak point in a clever way. If you start to practice text battling like that youll be able to win some better battles.

The vote goes to (X)eed. Easily.

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^aiight..... thnx NOs...... uppin this...

Voted For: (X)eed

I See U Only Fourteen, So Dat Mean U Bout In Da 8th Grade.
U Be At School With A Hundred Machanical Pencils But No Lead.
um....and you are tryin to say what??
U Think Yo Lines Are Good, 2 Me Dey Aint Nothin But Shit.
Dey Stank So U Need 2 Throw Em In Da Toilet.
nice.................NOT
Ya Battle'n Da Best Nigga, So U Bout 2 Be Dead.
Me Battle'n U Is Like Fight'n A Nigga Withought A Arm Nor A Leg.
woah woah woah...didn't you already use somethin like this in anotha battle?? I think so....haha
When I Finish Wit U, U Gone Be At Da Bottom Of Da Map.
No Way 2 Move, Imma Leave Yo Ass Handicap.
oooooo that was a nice finisher

breakdown-this verse was garbage like most of your other verses....i tried to tell you what to do in all these others battles you is gettin herbed in but you don't wanna take a nigga advice...how ol are you cuz you rhyme like my lil sister...this verse really made me think about if i should rap or not...that was how garbage it was...not tryin to hate but you need to elevate majorly and then come back...




claims he sick but rhymes only single syllable rhymes
"no ones iller" gives bizzare a new definition to die
ok
the kid wuz dropped at birth, and it wuz a "sick" site to see
who said you wuz ill?? bitch you believe in Christianity
haha
Like Darth Vader said "son i am your father!"
The childs droppin......... shit now much faster
haha
Lyricaly he wack,but he snaps back to act tuff to try and flip
The childs life wuz a fake and he defiines the word "SKIT"
Sick to none, like tooth decay on Gums, aint sick, you damaged, your mama smoked too many blunts
haha...


Breakdown-verse wasn't like a OOOOOOOOO but it was difinetly enuff to beat this herb...um.. the way you put them last 2 bars was kinda confusin so you might don't wanna do dat no mo...overal it was a mediocre verse

Voted For: (X)eed

i think u both really need to up ur game. . . (x) eed u lost me in the middle . . . i'm hoping that it was just over my head and not under my feet like garbage. . . rhymnsicC---"claims he sick but rhymes only single syllable rhymes"-- (x)eed kinda said it all there for rhymnsicC-- flow and structure tyerrible-- punchlines weak-- and i'm not trying to hate i usually find one positive note on each flow i just could notice one on urs thats y i had to vote for (x) eed-- cause you can't win boxing matches just cause you throw punches they gotta hit-- (x)eed just did better

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ aiight uppin this....... 1 more vote to K.O. THIS SILLY HERB.... AHHAAHHA cmon..... up up up up up up

Voted For: (X)eed

(x) eed hands down
Flow and structure-- of course (x) eed and even he knew that read the first line of his flow
Punches-- (x)eed took that too
rhymsicC u really need to up ur game. . . No HAtE at all
u were forcing things that just don't got together. . . look up the structure and work on the punches and i bet u'll get my vote on the next one . . . AND GOOD JOB (x)eed