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J. Luth 07-10-05 11:45 PM

Ok, so i'm writing this song and i'm stuck.. somebody help me please.. :(
 
aiight nm I got this shit down. ~_~

K-Trin 07-10-05 11:46 PM

I'm goin to copy that story and put it on my own CD....................................

J. Luth 07-10-05 11:46 PM

^lmao... ok, good for you. ;)

Castro... 07-10-05 11:48 PM

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Originally Posted by K-Trin
I'm goin to copy that story and put it on my own CD....................................

you still wouldn't be consider dope.... :shoot:

KOOL COL-B 07-10-05 11:48 PM

she took a shit in tha box! werd

King Solo 07-10-05 11:49 PM

K-Trini................you lick balls................

object cud be.......................an apple pendant, or sum shit that involves an apple

basic meaning behind that is she is seeing if you will take a bite

adam 'n' eve shit nah mean :shoot:

K-Trin 07-10-05 11:49 PM

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Originally Posted by Symbol
you still wouldn't be consider dope.... :shoot:


Maybe....but I'll still be better than you.

K-Trin 07-10-05 11:50 PM

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Originally Posted by LL Cool K
K-Trini................you lick balls................

object cud be.......................an apple pendant, or sum shit that involves an apple

basic meaning behind that is she is seeing if you will take a bit

adam 'n' eve shit nah mean :shoot:



No you lick balls.......................MY ONES.................Now I'm tellin you get off.

La Cosa Nostra 07-10-05 11:50 PM

Thats a weird story man.. It also edges on Immortal techniques - You never know with the note she left behind after dying n shit.

Also I think you should definatly do something better than "i went down to the chemist and this hot bitch started commin onto me"... You should make it you went to a club or something. You gotta be a damn porn star to walk into a chemist and have the bitch just wanna fuck you then and there.

And further more, what kind of best friend would do a test to see if he friends bf was loyal, just to have her friend kill herself cause of it.

I think you needa go back to the drawing board for a bit.

J. Luth 07-10-05 11:51 PM

aiight, what y'all think about it's her wedding ring I gave her when I proposed to her? like I can say we engaged? would that work?

Castro... 07-10-05 11:51 PM

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Originally Posted by K-Trin
Maybe....but I'll still be better than you.

you;ll neva be half as nice as me even if you had god to ghostride for you

La Cosa Nostra 07-10-05 11:51 PM

K-Trin, keep beefing in the beef forum.

I thought we had an understanding kid.
You dont fuck around in this forum and I dont get you IP banned from RV.

King Solo 07-10-05 11:52 PM

or to slightly change your story with the object meaning n shit

you cud have it as you going to pick up a gift wrapped present that you open afterwards and it turns out to be a bracelet (a manly one) that was gonna be a gift to you and engraved on it is sum shit like "The Best Guy A Girl Could Wish For" or sum shit like "The Most Loyal Guy A Girl Could Wish For"

sumthin like that.......

K-Trin 07-10-05 11:52 PM

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Originally Posted by Symbol
you;ll neva be half as nice as me even if you had god to ghostride for you



same thing I told Solo......get off my balls......kepp the beef in that other thread.U know how Nos's panties crunch up.He banned my other account from LL for a week.

J. Luth 07-10-05 11:52 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Nostradamus
Thats a weird story man.. It also edges on Immortal techniques - You never know with the note she left behind after dying n shit.

Also I think you should definatly do something better than "i went down to the chemist and this hot bitch started commin onto me"... You should make it you went to a club or something. You gotta be a damn porn star to walk into a chemist and have the bitch just wanna fuck you then and there.

And further more, what kind of best friend would do a test to see if he friends bf was loyal, just to have her friend kill herself cause of it.

I think you needa go back to the drawing board for a bit.

tru but what I meant was my girl in the story was one doin' the test. She told her best friend to see if I would cheat wit her or what not. and then she killed herself over it or somethin'. but that's a lil bit extreme I guess. lol but thanks for input yo ~_~

K-Trin 07-10-05 11:53 PM

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Originally Posted by Nostradamus
K-Trin, keep beefing in the beef forum.

I thought we had an understanding kid.
You dont fuck around in this forum and I dont get you IP banned from RV.



I'm tellin symbol that..........................................

J. Luth 07-10-05 11:54 PM

but yea, i'm prolly gonna go wit the ring shit. like she knew that I wasn't that loyal or somethin' or shit like that, so she gave me back her wedding ring or somethin' like that.

High-Dro 07-10-05 11:55 PM

i must say that her friend is a bitch if she knew her friend was gunna kill herself cuz of it.....plus, she continued to fuck you

J. Luth 07-10-05 11:57 PM

^lol yea, I kno it's tru. I need to go back on that. prolly not fuck me, like make an excuse right before she does it, and go make a phone call or something. and then Iunno my girl loved me so much, and that hurt her soo much that I would try and cheat on her, or somethin' like that

King Solo 07-10-05 11:58 PM

werd, spul go with your idea

but you shud take into mind what nos said, cuz sum shit just wudn't happen like the best friend sleeping with you..........cuz if it was her best friend, then why wud she go all the way through with it, why not just get you to the point where you are both about to sleep together and then drop the bomb on you about the whole test.

J. Luth 07-11-05 12:01 AM

^word, yo. i'm glad i posted this up here. ~_~


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