(X)eed vs 4fil
 

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6 - 10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
no bullshit

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Check in by: 07-14-05 at 08:55 PM

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(X)eed has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-11-05 08:56 PM.

4fil has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-11-05 08:57 PM.

Tell me when you've dropped......................................... then ima drop

cool avatar man!

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ aiight thnx man

Wishes to 4fil dreams, but all he does is 4fil his own wackness
Hes followin the narrow ray of light, while hes in Blackness
wouldnt 4fil nothin' even if i gave you a bucket wit half water,
his bars are stuck............. like 4fils rhymes were outta order
he 4fils destiny to its extreme source of practise
"practise makes perfect" but he perfects his own wackness
"wackness meter" "fillin" up to its maximum
ohhhhhh shit its over filled hes got a good can of ass whippin
he wouldnt get any bigger even if CAPS LOCK WAS LEFT ON
"refresh" your memory, as your page might not "respond"

If you don’t get the punches…... please screw yourself and don’t vote... :thumbup:

*Ahem*

Kid punches like real estate cause you’ll pay if they land
When they spinning your roof..... that’s when you get fans
Just face the facts boy...... you’re only in this battle to lose
Calls himself (x)ceed........ Named after the brand of shoes
Your boxed in like your “(x)” as if I’m coming in to stormya
When you accept your trapped... now eye come to cornea
I know that you bite........ you even bit one of my own lines *proofs at the bottom
He cheats and I still manage to merked him 1....2....3 times
And after those three times... I hope you came to realizes
That your only chance of winning is if you go and plagiarise


:gfy: ..... :gfy: ....... :gfy: ...... :gfy: .................... MERKED!!!

Here's my proof of when faggot here bite my own line and used it against me..... how much of an idiot can you become.....
It's the line saying "this guy gives new meaning to the word wack"
My Verse ........... His Verse (My old Alias by the way)

<marquee>(x)eed's indian and still goes round calling everyone "niggaz"</Marquee>

u FUCK DROP UR FUKIN VERSE///////HAHHE DNT WASTE TIME PHIL

done...........

wtf...ur such a fuck fill wackness aint ur werd..im allowed to use it...u fukin o fart

Voted For: 4fil

Aiight, I gotta give this one to 4fil.. His punches wernt all that but they were enough to win. Xceed, youve elevated since I last read your verses props on the new style your using. You just need to diss him on a more personal level, do a bit of research and work out what his weakness's are and then hit them with hard disses every time. The proper way to do a punch line is like telling a joke, use 2 line bars, just like cracking a joke, first line you do the set up, and second line you execute the joke with a punchline. But the set up and the punch have to connect. Once you get good at it, you can start adding in smaller disses in the set up line just for effect. But remember you always gotta be looking for bars that will make people go DAMN.. Cause thats what wins battles. Look at how some vets like L.I. and Chrit (if you search his old battles on this site) and see how they achieve it. Then come up with concepts with equal strength in your own battles. But always be origional with your stuff.

4fil, you seem to have the punchlines worked out, just needa work on making stronger ones. But you did win this battle today. Soz Xceed, just opinion bro.

v/4fil.

Peace all.

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Voted For: (X)eed

yo man. you took this battle wit ease. basically ur flow woz tite, and nuthin wotsoever in ur verse woz basic at all. i woz feelin ur verse.

he 4fils destiny to its extreme source of practise
"practise makes perfect" but he perfects his own wackness

haha, dope!
you got this shit man, easy

4fil, you got this shit wit ur punches man, but i found it hard followin ur flow. there's also a line near the end of it that doesnt rhyme wit anythin lol. but it woz an alrite verse

sorry 4fil, gotta go wit xceed on this shit

I thought i had you blacklisted......................

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shut the fuck up.....4fil..... dnt remove this vote u fuck..... hahaha uppin

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Voted For: 4fil

flow-X
multis-X
punches-4fil
structure-4fil
personals-4fil
creativity-X
enjoyment-4fil

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Kid punches like real estate cause you’ll pay if they land
When they spinning your roof..... that’s when you get fans

Your boxed in like your “(x)” as if I’m coming in to stormya
When you accept your trapped... now eye come to cornea

this was a really close battle but i was feeling 4fils verse just a little bit more but i seen alot of ya twos battles today and ya both serious as fuck.

vote-4fill

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Voted For: 4fil

Kid punches like real estate cause you’ll pay if they land
When they spinning your roof..... that’s when you get fans
^^Nice meta........
Just face the facts boy...... you’re only in this battle to lose
Calls himself (x)ceed........ Named after the brand of shoes
^^^Lmao!!!....dope punch...
Your boxed in like your “(x)” as if I’m coming in to stormya
When you accept your trapped... now eye come to cornea
^^OK.........
I know that you bite........ you even bit one of my own lines *proofs at the bottom
He cheats and I still manage to merked him 1....2....3 times
^^WOW.....this is just amazing...you killin him..Dope!!
And after those three times... I hope you came to realizes
That your only chance of winning is if you go and plagiarise
^^meh.....ight I guess

This was a hot verse.Nice metas and personals.You best line was the one about bitin and beatin him 3 times.Wat really made it hit though....was that you provded links showing proof.Only line whack was probably last one...but other than that...good job.

Wishes to 4fil dreams, but all he does is 4fil his own wackness
Hes followin the narrow ray of light, while hes in Blackness
^^^Too basic.....
wouldnt 4fil nothin' even if i gave you a bucket wit half water,
his bars are stuck............. like 4fils rhymes were outta order
^^^using the word 4fil too much...and whack punch
he 4fils destiny to its extreme source of practise
"practise makes perfect" but he perfects his own wackness
^^^Stop...you using this whackness lines too much and they suck
"wackness meter" "fillin" up to its maximum
ohhhhhh shit its over filled hes got a good can of ass whippin
^^^whackness again.....say sumtin new.
he wouldnt get any bigger even if CAPS LOCK WAS LEFT ON
"refresh" your memory, as your page might not "respond"
^^^NO......

U need to really up ur punches up to the next level.U were sayin too much about whackness and 4fil.They were whack and ya just kept sayin it ova and ova again.Work on metaphors and wordplay.If ya need an example...well..LOL...real 4fil's.

OOh...and you really Indian?If so...then wat country ya from?I'm Indian too and I'm from Trinidad.

Vote-4fil (killed him easily)

i dunno y u wud've had me blacklisted lol, i didnt do shit wrong. u started accusin me of bein wack ages ago lol

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Voted For: 4fil

eh an alright verse except for the fact that you used the word "wackness" about 5 times ha. but you did play off his name alot but but it just seemed you lacked after the 2nd bar. like you didn't know what to say or something next time i suggest you take a little more time with things and check your spelling. also come harder :he 4fils destiny to its extreme source of practise
"practise makes perfect" but he perfects his own wackness

stuff like that dosent win battles. werd a nice battle though just work on it a little bit

4fil... lol your verse was sorta like a show.. with all the colors and all the text and all the links... next time don't do that it just brings down the quality of the verse.. o yea if you have to explain it..DON'T USE IT. but yea anyway umm i liked the verse still alot of weak things in it. but otherwise not to shabby. learn how to spell.. because mispelled words just bring down the quality of the battle.

Vote-4Fil cuz he had a overall better verse

Voted For: 4fil

A'ight...4fil gets this...

Nice punches, good structure...good personals...flow was damn enar perfect...a good verse...

Xeed....it was decent...but not up to the standards of 4fil...work on more creative puncehs and you'll learn eventually...

No hate.