Young Dollar vs (X)eed
 

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Check in by: 07-16-05 at 03:25 AM

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waitin on u too accpet 1st aiight??

(X)eed has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-13-05 03:37 AM.

Young Dollar has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-13-05 11:38 AM.

aiight... im droppin now k... soo yer.. u drop too

Hes got his first note, decides to save it into the "PIGGY"
The child's lost.........this battle too, like "babe pig in the city"
playin his coins safe....................... livin life as a gamble
He has lost it all,please free fone "1-800 MY LIFE'S A SCANDAL
He Prays, & wants to be like "50Cent" dreams to become huge
he aint even "half that" and still "lives in the Cube"
"living outside the square" he trys to become famous
the only thing seperatin this child from Fame is his Anus
Like Donald Trump says ....... "dollar you're fired"
ooooops i made a mistake the kid wasnt even hired
despite the man's fate he never be a "young buck"
"straight outta trashville" he dont have nuff money for his Bus
Winnin' for him is like a streak at the lottery
"and the winner is" young dollar for the best role of Comedy
see you comin at me is like the dollar witout the sign
the kid's "bankrupt" i "loaned" him the verse hes about to type

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haha wit interest too.....
and the 1-800 number thin is like a number .... where if u suffer from gamblin problems you can call that up and ask 4 counciellors... aiight

Aiight waitin on u 2 drop..i have mate

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No beef Dog bust since you R.A.W. and im Livin Legend gotta smash it. Let gett it poppin


Ya claim you Exeed all expectations when it comes to skill
But when it comes to rap battles ya couldnt come up to 4Fil
And I can tell you really got this rap Game bent up and twisted
Just cuz ya gota Banks Mixtape, Dont mean ya Lyricaly Gifted
Homie you aint really real like Saint Nick livin in the North Pole
Ya workin Salvation Army shifts is da only way ya own my Sole(Soul)
N you just some fat boy in ya mommas basement out of the states
Get liposucktion,Mix wit coke,smuggel it in,still cant slang ya weight
Can't beleive you said you kick up dust and cough till ya stir up spit
U can be CuriousGeorge N toss monkey fetus Nstill not stir up hot shit
Like you got black bags to your lips, Talkin trash aint gonna get that Far
Because for Dollar, I got you on Smash, Like broken cars at a Junk Yard


Explanations:
Bar 1- He has a battle with 4Fil and right now he loosin
Bar 2- He recivese Banks mixtape and thinks he lyricaly gifted, like wit rhymes your lyricaly gifted. Pretty simple when u think about it
Bar 3- In his sig it says He ownin Souls, and Salvation Army has Old shirts pants and shoes,and shoes have Soles old shoes soles yall get it right
Bar 4- pretty simple cant slang his weight in drugs or just cant slang his weight pretty much simple
Bar5-As yall know monkeys toss shit He curious George,,,,,cant stir up hot shit as in hot rhymes
Bar 6- Throwin trash talkin into a black bag to ya lips the trash aint gettin that far, and broken old cars get smashed at Junk yards......their yall go

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Voted For: Young Dollar

Please don't use my name in your verses..... good punch though....... you clearly win.... structures good... the verse flowed alright.... (x)...... just didnt come hard enough man

Ya claim you Exeed all expectations when it comes to skill
But when it comes to rap battles ya couldnt come up to 4Fil
And I can tell you really got this rap Game bent up and twisted
Just cuz ya gota Banks Mixtape, Dont mean ya Lyricaly Gifted

Good first two bars. young... those won it for you...

This was feedback posted for Young Dollar
 

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by the way....... you shouldnt put in explanations...... if the ounch is good.... it should be hard hitting yet easy to understand..... by the way.... return the favour... drop a vote

alright preciate it i'll remember that............uppin........

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Uppin dis one.........Yo i thought dis one a hot battle yo g'luck

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Voted For: Young Dollar

im giving it to u ur personals were really good
flow was good id say work on ur vocabs and metas thats about it
x work on ur personals flow was good punches were kinda played a few good ones though work on creativity

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Voted For: Young Dollar

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RTF HERE Y.D OR VOTE WILL BE REMOVED ^

Xceed you my dog, but Y.D Got you beat, sorry man

X:
Not a bad verse, you tried goin all out an use more lines than your oppenent, but some of the bars seemed a lil forced because of that...

punches was aight, that babe pig in the city shit was kinda corny tho.....wordplay could use a litle elevation, an up the vocab....but still, it was a nice verse, you was unlucky to lose

Y.D:
Decent drop....one of your better verses man, your elevating alot, thats always good.....lol

But yeah, punches hit alot harder, they seemed more complex, an the wordplay wasnt that good, but it was better...try addin a few multies in the bars too improve your flow....an you'll be good to go man!

RTF Or vote will be removed, link is at the top of my post

Peace out good job y'all

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Voted For: Young Dollar

neither one of you needed to explain y'all bars... (X)eed you fell off towards the end of your verse.. your best bars were:

Like Donald Trump says ....... "dollar you're fired"
ooooops i made a mistake the kid wasnt even hired
see you comin at me is like the dollar witout the sign
the kid's "bankrupt" i "loaned" him the verse hes about to type

^^they were str8, bars..

Young Dollar..
don't explain each bar, your concepts were easy to get.. xcept for the first one, cuz i didn't know he was battling 4fil.. try to slim the expl. list next time. your best bars were:

Ya claim you Exeed all expectations when it comes to skill
But when it comes to rap battles ya couldnt come up to 4Fil

N you just some fat boy in ya mommas basement out of the states
Get liposucktion,Mix wit coke,smuggel it in,still cant slang ya weight

Like you got black bags to your lips, Talkin trash aint gonna get that Far
Because for Dollar, I got you on Smash, Like broken cars at a Junk Yard

^nice bars, but they started to get stretched the further you got into your verse. i thought your lines were more hard hitting and had better personals within.

good luck to both

v/ Young Dollar

preciate it lets make it a full round KO so uppin dis.........................come on bring vote 5

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alright come on and vote just need one more.................

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uppin dis mutha............................................. ..dis voting shit is getting ridcioulous

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This was feedback posted for (X)eed
 

ummmmm............................................ .improved?

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werd////// u owned me here dollar....good shit..i need to wrk on my .... overall shit... lol..haha hey fuck ive imprved frm the past...good stufff ...a good oppenent always imprves me. ... u tought me sum good stuff Dollar.... aiiight...keep it goin ... ...... a legend is bein created......werd

Uppin dis battle.......................................... come damn 1 more vote that it

ay man apreciate da battle man u did good ithink and no problem on ya end and keep doing ya thang and im a keep doing my thang peace

i wud vote for Young dollar but it says i cant vote for sum reason lol, probly cuz it's the elevated front lines. but yer anywayz, YD took this i rekon both had gud verses but this woz one of the best verses YD's dun.

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