We Run RV!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Efecx wattup?
Verbal Shoota wattup?? Black queen wattup??? B Wattup???? Blackmage wattup????? Stanza wattup? RAW IN DIZ, HERE WE GO NAAAAH!!!!!!!!!!!! Da Hook: I know ya see uz little homeyz...WE RUN RV I know u cant see me, 'cuz......WE RUN RV! Even doh yall mad, we both now dat...WE RUN RV! U wannabe me, wannabe G But.......WE RUN RV!!! [ha ha haaaa} Verse: i see alotta ppl talking, so call it a sixth sense cuz ima see dead people wordz so electrifiying they say dat lightnin touches steeples when i'm writing da flowz frightenin, alot ov deez krews hate, plot & debate, lifez great gettin mad @ font, smoke a blunt, sit back & watch U.E Stunt dumb cunts, pretending ya all hot, but RAW Kno its juz a front so we hit'cha frum da back, leave u wid bullet holes in a hospital bed sheets color red, write da rhymez wita pencil ..................so 4 talkin da gun shyt, guezz yuh do ''catch sum led'' i kno u see wat da fuck i be jottin down, nuthin u can do bout it u niggaz betta keep it on ''hush'' lyke aftermathz latest hit!* nostradamus talkin hard, got a beat down frum da nigga Stanza! [WE RUN RV] Chaos talkin dat hard shyt, but i swear 4 biting strobe shuldda banned-ya i';ll hand-ya a loss, watch u fagz have da salad on toss lyke a ''head chef'' ha ha ha..RAW DIED?..............Shyt go tell dat 2 stanza, bq, me or Teph we hit u from da Left.......... cuz u kno RRAW IS RIGHT, WAR Is tight! sabotage got less ''efecx'' than a parapelgiec trynna punchline fight! R-Rated dont got shyt on me....unless u can count a few dick-jumpers u associate wid da gay types, while i hang wit long nossel shotgun pumpers pump action, we blastin, im 14, but dont get me confuzed i'm slicka than ''greese'' & U.E Be cruishing 2 catch a BRUISE U LOSE..............Diz gamez over b4 da ref even blew his whistle i got soul rebel BULLshittin cuz ov da RED Target aiming frum da missile diz a keystyle, off da dome & u bitchez be shittin bricks claiming ur ''syck''...i juz say ur catchin FLU SHOTZ So i call 'em pricks gay tricks, ridin dicks wid no bitch, it dont make sense paying ppl 2 join ur krew, dont believe me?...juz ask IMMENSE Diz situationz a lil tense, beat down diz topical writer, we kno whoz tighter NOT U.... krew hopper culdnt ''spark shit'' if he tried 2 ignite hiz ''waste'' widda lighter i'ma ''cryhme'' fighter, call me ''Po-Po'' have u scatterin screamin ''OH NO'' got u scared ''legless'' lyke wheelchair patients having a 'P.O'** no-flow-hoes, deez vets got less skill than E.C Holding a mic DAUBS A BITCH!...Trunna eat da ass ov a MALE DYKE! [Tweety] i swear ALL U KREW r lyke....half man, who dont seem 2 be ''Amazin'' u can call me ''6 Feet'' cuz i grasp da 'CALI-co' & hm YOUNG n BLAZin which krew thinkz they phazin?...RAW n WAR Iz here 2 stay WE RUN DIZ SHYT!...Da verbal predator, amerikkaz most... .......Raps cold as ICE CUBES, But we all kno its a GOOD-DAY! Da Hook: I know ya see uz little homeyz...WE RUN RV I know u cant see me, 'cuz......WE RUN RV! Even doh yall mad, we both now dat...WE RUN RV! U wannabe me, wannabe G But.......WE RUN RV!!! [ha ha haaaa} Yo diz iz sum keystyle shyt, FALL BACK NIGGAZ! California, 2 da dirty dirty, out 2 da europeans...ITZ ALL RAW BABY!...e run diz, who want wat? NONE OV Y'ALL! WE RUN RV!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
umm that was cool...
...not the best..but it was a good diss..but i do have 1 question..why didnt u jus make a diss to UE?..i mean u tried to diss us throughout the whole thing.. u had some nice punches and stuff in there...i would give it a 7........... |
I wuz dissing u & ur krew & anybody else who haz doubted da krew RAW RUNZ RV Diz wuz a keystyle but thanx fo da feedback yo :shoot:
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wassup fam.
yeh i thought this was a decent piece. the flow was good, structure can't be faulted and the vocab was above average in this one. the punches were pretty good for real. considerin this was a keystyle i thought it was real good. yo can you RTF on my OM piece: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=199478 ~peace~ |
hey yo thanx 4 da feeback, i returnd da favor 4 u, uppin diz drop
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RAW aint runnin shit but their mouths........
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Drop a link to an OM you have left feedback on
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Okay Decent Shits Man, Came Pretty Good Here, VOcab Was Basic Shits Though But no DOubt This Piece Was Nice Structure A Bit Iffy But Keep It Up Man
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This was an okay peice, I can see it audio.. but I wasnt to fond of structure and your vocab's nice for a 14 year old.
Work on your word play and structure and always, always keep uppin your vocab. good drop, |
thanx 4 da feedback yall & havoc da link wuz posted by souljah i left feed on dat peice if datz aight, uppin
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The original creator of the thread needs to have a link included in each post from an Open Mic they left proper feed on.If you're confused,simply read the rules.
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uh, not bad eh....definately dont run RV though......some lines were pretty boring, but keep up for sure, alot of fake shit, and stanza re-used that parapalegic shit for an OM :laugh:
anyways, peace out |
decent drop, very in-consistant, good disses on some people, wordplay was flawless, need too up the wording of some of you're bars, structure could be a little better,. but it was straight, nice drop 8//10
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ehhhh..... believe what ya want... ok drop... but too bad it's a false misconception... y'all ain't running RV... and that's werd
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don't get it yall pathetic you not enegetic with the rhymes how can you run the site when you bums not tight, look i write well script that'll swell your lips and break teeth so you can't eat fake beef anymore. look i inflate balloons while you great in cartoons yall stop playing who the fuck is yall DAFFY DUCK?
MY LINK (http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=200049) |
wat da hell wuz dat? uppin duz..
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good shit... like this...WORDPLAY AT THE BEST HERE...9/10..RAW squad up niggas whats poppin
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yo 4 sho mayn, raw raw raw uppin diz
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A yo tight drop only thing I would say is add some multies and more punches but this was hott thanxx!
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booooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
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dis nigga ^ wuzzup foo
bumpin dis drop |
good shit....i like it even tho u managed 2 shoutout everybody from tha crew
EXCEPT ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! lol.....anywayz tho tha flow was on point, good structure. this was real good 4 it 2 b keystyled and wut not. tha catchin lead punch was a killer. i really dont see what line matched tha 1st line but it don't really even matter cuz u killed this 1. 8/10. return tha favor mayn.1 |
hey yo thanx 4 da feedback ill hit up ur drop rite now & sorry bout no shout out, imma give u 1 rite now ha ha...FATE WATTUP?!
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