blackfrostbite vs opt1k
 

Battle Rules:

10 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 07-13-05 at 08:18 PM

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blackfrostbite has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-13-05 07:48 PM.

opt1k has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-13-05 07:50 PM.

you go first homie come on
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yo dis cat sees illusions,hence da name optik/
i see myself as winner,he looks and sees hot dyck/
now he's thinkin' oh no not dis/
cuz now im bout to blast his eyes wit da hot fifth/
known as da negro frost bite,flossin like ice on da wrist
he know is comin',me breakin' his jaw into a cross bite/
i leave his ass cross-eye/
break his la manos,bake and sell pie/
who am i,da question is who you fool/
i'll cock da hammer,pull da trigga and spray ya full crew/
fully automatic is da flow/
yo clip is empty,put da pen down hoe

a true soljah know his way's....shit you'll never find./
cuz u aint even a soljah ur pathetically defined/
inclined to take orders see ur everyones bitch/
i could care less cuz ur style dumpim weak shit/
you a homo......shit circle the globe...im back/
watch how u respond cuz u might get stabbed from the back/
bitch you a pussy u a coward b..bitch i'll rock ur mantle/
have ya ass feelin 112 ...light sixteen candles/
bitch understand the clocks tickin im' more that u can handle./
rcok against me ya bitch ill have ur body and vocal cords dismantled./

uppin for them votes homie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

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This was feedback posted for opt1k
 

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This was feedback posted for blackfrostbite
 

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Voted For: opt1k

blackfrostbite:
U had good wordplay goin on there....u came out good....u started good but then ended up getting worse....
( No Hate )

Opt1k:
You started off well and kept your kool throughout the whole battle but your verses was weak and need to elevate....
Good opening and closure...but weak punches.....
multis: none

My overall vote is to opt1k

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i can retun favors lets go

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Voted For: opt1k

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Flow-BlackfrostBite...had his lines short and shit...but sadly...his punches lacked

Punches-Well...neither of you had any hot lines.That optik/illusions line would have been dope if used correctly.But I think Black frost bite was too basic.....so I think opt1k had punches.

Personals-BlackFrost as his opt1k line is the only personal here.But overall...personals lacked here.ELevate here.

Multis-meh...opt1k had a couple i guess.Blackfrost had a one syllable rhyme scheme which is played out.

Originality-Neither were creative but Blackfrost spoke about guns and such which is very played out.

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Voted For: opt1k

bitch understand the clocks tickin im' more that u can handle./
rcok against me ya bitch ill have ur body and vocal cords dismantled./

vs..

NOTHING..

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WEAK BBATTLE, BUT SHO GETS THIS COS HIS VERSE ACTUALLY DISSED HIS OPPONENT.

BOTH NEED TO ELEVATE AND LEARN NEW CONCEPTS, BLACK YOU NEED TO FIX EVERYTHING UP.

NO HATE.

RTF.

Voted For: opt1k

shadow gets this...his verse had more flow punches were more direct and decent even without personals in therre...ets were cool and his structure was waaaaaaaaaay better...one advice to both yo...quit usin slashes in ur verses..it kinna messes the apperance up..black...dawg ur verse was just off...ur opner fell off mayne...the first line was ok but u demolished it with ur 2nd line...work more on ur verses dude...try makin ur lines of the same length so ur verse could flow at least a lil...that would be headin a step foward trust me...u didnt stay stable neither in punches concepts mets and structure also flow...u need to work a lil more...try by droppin verses in the "diss the person above you" cypher that could help u a lil bit...

anyways shadow gets this hands down with my xplanation ^^ + he seems to have mo xperience in battle...from what i c...

holla